PHI 110RS
Critical Writing Assignment Guidelines & Rubric
There will be two (2) critical writing assignments. Topics for each writing assignment are in Module 3
(Assignment 1) and Module 6 (Assignment 2).
Some generic requirements to be observed for all Writing Assignments include that all papers must:
Defend a thesis and should proceed according to the following format: Thesis, Argument,
Objection(s), Response(s), Conclusion
Include citations to the primary required class readings. These and any additional sources must
be properly cited using MLA format.
Fall within the following length requirements: 1200-1500 words.
Use a standard 10-12 pt. font and be double spaced.
Critical Writing Assignments 1 and 2 are due no later than Sunday 11:59 PM EST/EDT of Modules 3
and 6 respectively. (These Dropbox baskets are linked to Turnitin.)
Information on MLA Citation style can be found here: https://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/747/01/
Elements
Criteria
Score
Not Attempted
(Criterion is
missing or not in
evidence)
0-11.99%
Novice
(does not meet
expectations;
performance is
substandard)
12-13.99%
Basic
(works towards
meeting expectations;
performance needs
improvement)
14-15.99%
Proficient
(meets expectations;
performance is
satisfactory)
16-17.99%
Exemplary
(exceeds expectations;
performance is
outstanding)
18-20%
Paper Topic
16.66%
Paper contains
no thesis and/or
does not
address the
essay prompt.
Thesis is difficult
to discern and/or
fails to address
multiple parts of
the essay prompt.
Thesis is discernible,
but not explicitly
stated in introductory
paragraph and/or
addresses most, but
not all, of parts of the
essay prompt.
Thesis statement is
present in introductory
paragraph, but it is wordy,
generic or unclear and/or
paper addresses all parts
of the essay prompt, but
not adequately.
Thesis statement is
present in introductory
paragraph. It is concise,
articulate, and narrowly
focused. Paper
adequately addresses all
parts of the essay prompt.
__/20
Length
Requirements
16.66%
There was little
or no evidence
of a complete
assignment.
Paper is entirely
too short.
Paper contains a
great deal of “fluff”
and still doesn’t meet
the length
requirements
Paper is on the short side
or meets requirements
only because it contains
“fluff.”
Paper falls within the
required length
requirements without
going off topic.
__/20
Mechanics of
Writing
16.66%
Little to no
evidence of
proper writing
mechanics.
The grammar of
the paper greatly
impedes
understanding of
content.
Organizational
structure is
unclear.
Paper needs a good
deal of improvement
with respect to
grammar, spelling,
and/or style.
Organization and/or
flow of ideas need
improvement.
Paper is mostly free of
errors with respect to
grammar, spelling, and/or
style, but needs some
impro.
1. PHI 110RS
Critical Writing Assignment Guidelines & Rubric
There will be two (2) critical writing assignments. Topics for
each writing assignment are in Module 3
(Assignment 1) and Module 6 (Assignment 2).
Some generic requirements to be observed for all Writing
Assignments include that all papers must:
following format: Thesis, Argument,
Objection(s), Response(s), Conclusion
he primary required class readings.
These and any additional sources must
be properly cited using MLA format.
-1500
words.
-12 pt. font and be double spaced.
Critical Writing Assignments 1 and 2 are due no later than
Sunday 11:59 PM EST/EDT of Modules 3
and 6 respectively. (These Dropbox baskets are linked to
Turnitin.)
Information on MLA Citation style can be found here:
https://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/747/01/
Elements
2. Criteria
Score
Not Attempted
(Criterion is
missing or not in
evidence)
0-11.99%
Novice
(does not meet
expectations;
performance is
substandard)
12-13.99%
Basic
(works towards
meeting expectations;
performance needs
improvement)
14-15.99%
Proficient
(meets expectations;
performance is
satisfactory)
3. 16-17.99%
Exemplary
(exceeds expectations;
performance is
outstanding)
18-20%
Paper Topic
16.66%
Paper contains
no thesis and/or
does not
address the
essay prompt.
Thesis is difficult
to discern and/or
fails to address
multiple parts of
the essay prompt.
Thesis is discernible,
but not explicitly
stated in introductory
paragraph and/or
4. addresses most, but
not all, of parts of the
essay prompt.
Thesis statement is
present in introductory
paragraph, but it is wordy,
generic or unclear and/or
paper addresses all parts
of the essay prompt, but
not adequately.
Thesis statement is
present in introductory
paragraph. It is concise,
articulate, and narrowly
focused. Paper
adequately addresses all
parts of the essay prompt.
__/20
Length
Requirements
16.66%
There was little
or no evidence
5. of a complete
assignment.
Paper is entirely
too short.
Paper contains a
great deal of “fluff”
and still doesn’t meet
the length
requirements
Paper is on the short side
or meets requirements
only because it contains
“fluff.”
Paper falls within the
required length
requirements without
going off topic.
__/20
Mechanics of
Writing
16.66%
Little to no
evidence of
6. proper writing
mechanics.
The grammar of
the paper greatly
impedes
understanding of
content.
Organizational
structure is
unclear.
Paper needs a good
deal of improvement
with respect to
grammar, spelling,
and/or style.
Organization and/or
flow of ideas need
improvement.
Paper is mostly free of
errors with respect to
grammar, spelling, and/or
style, but needs some
improvement.
Organizational structure
7. is adequate.
Paper is nearly perfect
with respect to grammar,
spelling, and style.
Organizational structure
is clear and the paper
flows nicely.
__/20
Conceptual
Analysis &
Thoughtful
Engagement
16.66%
Paper exhibits a
complete lack of
thoughtful
engagement with
the text.
Concepts are
identified, but not
clearly defined.
No attempt to
elaborate/
exemplify.
8. Paper exhibits
very little
thoughtful
engagement with
the text. Few
concepts are
clearly defined
using elaboration/
exemplification.
Paper exhibits basic
engagement with text,
but needs
improvement. Some
concepts are clearly
defined using
elaboration/
exemplification,
Paper exhibits thoughtful
understanding of the text,
but some improvement
needed. Most concepts
are clearly defined using
elaboration/
exemplification.
Paper does an excellent
job demonstrating an
9. accurate understanding of
the text and goes beyond
mere summary.
All relevant concepts are
clearly defined using
elaboration/
exemplification.
__/20
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TOTAL: ___ / 120
Points of View/
Consideration
of Objections
16.66%
Paper does not
acknowledge the
existence of
alternative points
of view. Does
not state
10. objections to
thesis.
Acknowledges
existence of more
than point of view,
but does not clear
articulate a
specific objection
and respond.
Acknowledges
existence of more
than point of view, but
considers only one.
States a specific
objection to thesis,
but makes no clear
attempt to respond.
Acknowledges existence
of more than point of
view. States at least one
objection to thesis and
responds, but needs
some improvement.
Acknowledges existence
of more than point of
view. Clearly and
11. articulately states at least
one objection to thesis
and then adequately
responds to the objection.
__/20
MLA
Style/Citations
16.66%
Paper lacks both
in-text citations
and a proper
works cited list.
Paper lacks either
in-text citations or
a proper works
cited list, but not
both.
Paper contains in-text
citations and a works
cited list, but does not
follow MLA style.
Paper contains in-text
citations and a works
12. cited list, but several
stylistic errors are
present.
Paper contains proper in-
text citations and a works
cited list. Few stylistic
errors are present.
__/20
1
Saint Leo University
REL 110RS
The Emergence of Christianity: Examination of Foundational
Christian Texts
Course Description:
The New Testament record of the development of Christianity
from a sect within Judaism to becoming a
world religion. This course will examine the foundational texts
of Christian Scripture with attention to
historical context, the intentions of the authors and the way the
texts were edited.
Prerequisite:
None
13. Textbooks:
Bible, such as New American Bible, Revised Standard Version,
Jerusalem Bible, or New International
Version; avoid paraphrase versions and King James Version
(due to its antiquated language)
Cory, Catherine. A Voyage Through the New Testament. Upper
Saddle River: Pearson, 2008. Print.
ISBN-13: 978-0130494955
Imperato, Robert. Portraits of Jesus. Lanham: University Press
of America, 2008. Print.
ISBN-13: 978-0761843252
Learning Outcomes:
Students will be able to
1. Describe historical (editorial) development of early
Christianity as reflected in the New Testament.
2. Explain how the historical and cultural settings of the New
Testament, including geography of
Israel, groups of Jews, and the concerns of early Jewish groups
influence the writing of the New
Testament texts.
3. Describe the formation of the New Testament writings
including arrangement of material,
formation of the synoptic gospels, and format of Pauline letters.
4. Identify the literary and theological characteristics of each
gospel, especially the emphases of
each evangelist.
5. Analyze New Testament texts using historical, redaction, and
14. form criticisms.
6. Integrate scholarly biblical reference materials to research
meanings of biblical themes, and
passages.
7. Explain and contrast understandings of different portraits of
Jesus and the meaning of Christian
discipleship.
8. Engage in critical reading of the New Testament which
involves discovery of values, contexts,
styles, assumptions, and intentions. Leading the students
beyond naïve reading to critical reading
will exemplify the core value of excellence.
Core Value:
Excellence: Saint Leo University is an educational enterprise.
All of us, individually and collectively, work
hard to ensure that our students develop the character, learn the
skills, and assimilate the knowledge
essential to become morally responsible leaders. The success of
our University depends upon a
conscientious commitment to our mission, vision, and goals.
Evaluation:
Assignment % of Final Grade
Thematic Paper 30
Exegesis Paper 30
Final Exam 30
Discussions (8) 10
Total 100%
15. 2
Grading Scale:
Grade Score (%)
A 94-100
A- 90-93
B+ 87-89
B 84-86
B- 80-83
C+ 77-79
C 74-76
C- 70-73
D+ 67-69
D 60-66
F 0-59
Thematic Paper
You are required to write a thematic paper that traces one of the
biblical themes discussed in the course.
The paper should be 1000-2000 words in length and follow
MLA style. Choose one of the options below:
Option A. Trace one of the biblical themes from the list below
noting developments of that theme
in the Old Testament and in the New Testament. Show how New
Testament writers reinterpreted
the theme. Show the continuity in the development of the theme
as well as any changes in
meaning. Note any areas of disputed understanding. This paper
16. must be accompanied by an
outline. Length: 1000-2000 words.
Justice Love Jerusalem
Wrath Christ Son of God
Lord Priest Prophet
Servant Son of Man Shepherd
Chosen People Kingdom of God Elijah
Righteousness Faith Obedience
Redemption Salvation Resurrection
Law Death Passover
Sin Repentance Compassion
See the course Doc Sharing area for a bibliography for source
material. Be sure to use some of
those biblical reference books in the bibliography for your
paper, especially those by Bauer,
Buttrick, Freedman, Kittel and Friedrich, Leon-Dufour,
McKenzie, and Sackenfeld. Avoid using
other sources found on the Internet unless cleared in advance
with the instructor. Publically
available digital sources may not always be of high quality. The
paper needs to be well
documented. Be certain to distinguish between paraphrase and
quotation.
Option B. Describe the intended audiences (readers) for the
Gospels according to Mark,
Matthew, Luke, and John. Show how specific words and/or
passages in each Gospel imply
particular audiences.
17. See the course Doc Sharing area for a bibliography for source
material. Be sure to use some of
those biblical reference books in the bibliography for your
paper, especially Brown. You may find
an EBSCO search using the online library resources to be
helpful. Limit your search to full-text
and peer-reviewed articles. You may also search GOOGLE
BOOKS (not just GOOGLE) to
access published books online; document the information from
those books as books including
author, title, publisher, date, and page numbers. The paper
needs to be well documented. Be
certain to distinguish between paraphrase and quotation.
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The Thematic Paper is due by the conclusion of Module 3. A
grading rubric is available in the course Doc
Sharing area.
Exegesis Paper
You will complete an exegesis of a passage from the New
Testament (employing methods of
interpretation and perspectives, such as literary and historical
context, literary form, and structure).
Exegesis means to expound upon a text, to unpack a text of its
many meanings. Elements of various
types of criticism will be employed to further develop your
ability to interpret the Bible. The paper should
be 2000-3000 words in length and follow MLA style.
Select one of the following passages as the basis for your
18. exegesis:
-13
-13
-36
-4
Follow the outline below and answer the questions in each
section using recommended sources. Keep
the outline headings below as the subheadings of your exegesis.
1. Literary Criticism
a. Context: What follows and precedes your passage? Are your
pages affected by this context?
b. Form criticism: What is the literary form of your passage?
Are there other places in the Bible
(or related text) where this form is used and which help to
interpret this passage?
c. Structure: Do you detect any particular structural pattern
(e.g., parallelism within your
assigned book of the Bible)? Describe the parts of your passage.
d. Redaction criticism: Has your passage come through an
editorial process? What changes
have been made? Explain why certain changes have been made.
e. Key words: What are the theologically important words in the
passage? Do these words
evoke any other parts of the Bible? Are these words used in a
19. new way by the author of this
passage? What do these words mean?
2. Theological Analysis
a. What does this passage say about the relationship with God?
b. What questions might this passage have addressed in the
community for which it was
originally written?
[Some of the ideas above are adopted from A Guide to Biblical
Exegesis by G. Landes and W. Wink
(unpublished.)]
You should document your exegesis carefully. Be sure to use
some material from the bibliography in the
course Doc Sharing area for your exegesis, especially the
biblical reference books. Below are some hints
for successfully completing the paper:
1. Look up your passage in the New Testament.
2. Consult a general commentary (such as The Jerome Biblical
Commentary, The New Jerome
Biblical Commentary, or The Collegeville Bible Commentary).
3. Consult specific commentaries (see the course bibliography
in Doc Sharing, e.g., Harrington’s
Matthew’s Gospel, Fitzmyer’s The Gospel According to Luke).
4. Conduct a periodical search (through EBSCO) of your
passage, limiting search to full-text, peer-
reviewed journals.
20. Use the checklist below to ensure that you are following the
format properly:
1. Are all ideas documented (including page numbers)?
2. Are all quotations documented (including page numbers)?
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3. Is there a works cited page?
4. Do the notes and bibliography include sources recommended
by the syllabus?
5. Does the format include the headings from the syllabus?
6. Does each sentence make sense?
7. Does the “form” section clearly name a literary form?
8. Does the redaction section contrast the assigned passage with
Mark’s version (except for infancy
narrative and Lord’s Prayer)?
9. Does the key word section include more than one key word?
10. Does the key word section refer to Old Testament material?
A draft of the paper is due by the conclusion of Module 5 and is
worth 5% of the course grade. The final
paper is due by the conclusion of Module 7 and is worth 25% of
the course grade. A grading rubric is
available in the course Doc Sharing area.
Final Exam
The exam in Module 8 will assess your understanding of the
different portraits of Jesus in the Gospels
and Paul First Letter to the Corinthians.
21. Discussions
Each module will include a discussion assignment. You will
post your initial response by Thursday, and
then respond to at least two classmates by Sunday.
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Course Schedule:
Module 1 Literary and Historical Contexts Applied to the New
Testament
Objectives At the conclusion of this module, students will be
able to:
and formation.
pretation of New
Testament texts.
the Bible.
Testament,
geography of Israel, groups of Jews, and the concerns of early
Jewish
groups influence the writing of the New Testament texts.
Assignments
22. Module 2 Mark’s Gospel
Objectives At the conclusion of this module, students will be
able to:
Christianity as reflected in
Mark’s Gospel.
writing of Mark’s
Gospel.
Gospel.
leship and Mark’s
portrait of Jesus.
Assignments
23. Items to be Completed: Due No Later Than:
Post an introduction to the class Thursday 11:59 PM EST/EDT
Read A Voyage Through the New Testament, Chapters 1, 2, 3,
and 5
Read 1 Corinthians
View the Audio Visual Presentation (AVP)
Post initial response to the discussion question Thursday 11:59
PM EST/EDT
Post responses to at least two classmates Sunday 11:59 PM
EST/EDT
Begin working on the Thematic Paper Module 3
Items to be Completed: Due No Later Than:
Read Portraits of Jesus, Chapter 1
24. Read A Voyage Through the New Testament, Chapter 6
Read The Gospel According to Mark
View the Audio Visual Presentation (AVP)
Post initial response to the discussion question Thursday 11:59
PM EST/EDT
Post responses to at least two classmates Sunday 11:59 PM
EST/EDT
Continue working on the Thematic Paper Module 3
6
Module 3 Matthew’s Gospel
Objectives At the conclusion of this module, students will be
able to:
Jewish religion
recently bereft of the Temple.
Gospel in terms of
the portrayal of the disciples.
te how Matthew establishes church authority.
25. Assignments
Module 4 Luke’s Gospel
Objectives At the conclusion of this module, students will be
able to:
torial) development of early
Christianity as reflected in
the Luke’s New Testament.
Gospel, including
geography, influence the writing of Luke’s Gospel and the Acts
of the
Apostles.
scribe the formation of Luke’s Acts as the author adapts
his sources to
project Christianity as a world religion.
Assignments
26. Items to be Completed: Due No Later Than:
Read Portraits of Jesus, Chapter 2
Read A Voyage Through the New Testament, Chapter 7
Read The Gospel According to Matthew
View the Audio Visual Presentation (AVP)
Post initial response to the discussion question Thursday 11:59
PM EST/EDT
Post responses to at least two classmates Sunday 11:59 PM
EST/EDT
27. Submit Thematic Paper Sunday 11:59 PM EST/EDT
Begin working on the Exegesis Paper rough draft Module 5
Items to be Completed: Due No Later Than:
Read Portraits of Jesus, Chapter 3
Read A Voyage Through the New Testament, Chapter 8
Read The Gospel According to Luke
View the Audio Visual Presentation (AVP)
Post initial response to the discussion question Thursday 11:59
PM EST/EDT
Post responses to at least two classmates Sunday 11:59 PM
EST/EDT
Continue working on the Exegesis Paper rough draft Module 5
7
Module 5 John’s Gospel
Objectives At the conclusion of this module, students will be
able to:
distinguished from
the Synoptic gospels.
28. Assignments
Module 6 1 Thessalonians and 1 Corinthians
Objectives At the conclusion of this module, students will be
able to:
-sacrifice for
the sake of
others).
Assignments
29. Items to be Completed: Due No Later Than:
Read Portraits of Jesus, Chapter 4
Read A Voyage Through the New Testament, Chapter 9
Read The Gospel According to John
View the Audio Visual Presentation (AVP)
Post initial response to the discussion question Thursday 11:59
PM EST/EDT
Post responses to at least two classmates Sunday 11:59 PM
EST/EDT
30. Submit the Exegesis Paper rough draft Sunday 11:59 PM
EST/EDT
Items to be Completed: Due No Later Than:
Read Portraits of Jesus, Chapter 5
Read A Voyage Through the New Testament, pp. 289-299, 301-
306, 346-360, 487-
489
Read Paul’s First Letter to the Thessalonians (1 Thessalonians),
Ch. 4
Read Paul’s First Letter to the Corinthians (1 Corinthians)
View the Audio Visual Presentation (AVP)
Post initial response to the discussion question Thursday 11:59
PM EST/EDT
Post responses to at least two classmates Sunday 11:59 PM
EST/EDT
Continue working on the Exegesis Paper final draft Module 7
8
Module 7 Philippians and 2 Corinthians: True Apostle
Objectives At the conclusion of this module, students will be
able to:
-emptying
31. hymn in Philippians.
fe where he broke
with his past life as
a prominent Jewish persecutor of Christians.
Corinthians..
Assignments
Module 8 Galatians and Romans
Objectives At the conclusion of this module, students will be
able to:
plan.
Assignments
32. Items to be Completed: Due No Later Than:
Read A Voyage Through the New Testament, Ch. 15 and pp.
361-369
Read Paul’s Letter to the Philippians
Read Paul’s Second Letter to the Corinthians (2 Corinthians)
View the Audio Visual Presentation (AVP)
Post initial response to the discussion question Thursday 11:59
PM EST/EDT
Post responses to at least two classmates Sunday 11:59 PM
EST/EDT
Submit the Exegesis Paper final draft Sunday 11:59 PM
EST/EDT
Begin preparing for the Final Exam Module 8
Items to be Completed: Due No Later Than:
Read A Voyage Through the New Testament, Ch. 14
Read Paul’s Letter to the Galatians
Read Paul’s Letter to the Romans
View the Audio Visual Presentation (AVP)
Post initial response to the discussion question Thursday 11:59
PM EST/EDT
Post responses to at least two classmates Sunday 11:59 PM