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Burger Model!
The top bun is your POINT.
China is an overpopulated
country.
The meat burger is your
EVIDENCE.
The country has a population of just over
2 billion people. And the country’s
agriculture, energy supplies and forests
have all come under increase stress
The bun on the bottom is your
EXPLANATION.
In the 1950s and 1950s the people were
encouraged to have as many children as
possible due to the state philosophy that
"a large population gives a strong nation”.
At same time, death rates decreased, due
to improved food supplies and medical
care.
PEEL
• Point – make a point about the China’s
population.
• Evidence – some evidence to show this
point.
• Explain – explain how this evidence
proves your point.
• Link – link back to the point.
PEEL
• P – China is an overpopulated country.
• E- The country has a population of just
over 2 billion people and the country’s
agriculture, energy supplies and forests
have all come under increased stress.
• E-In the 1950s and 1950s the people were encouraged to have as
many children as possible due to the state philosophy that "a large
population gives a strong nation”. At same time, death rates
decreased, due to improved food supplies and medical care.
• L – This has lead to the country being
overpopulated.

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PEEL writing technique

  • 1. Burger Model! The top bun is your POINT. China is an overpopulated country. The meat burger is your EVIDENCE. The country has a population of just over 2 billion people. And the country’s agriculture, energy supplies and forests have all come under increase stress The bun on the bottom is your EXPLANATION. In the 1950s and 1950s the people were encouraged to have as many children as possible due to the state philosophy that "a large population gives a strong nation”. At same time, death rates decreased, due to improved food supplies and medical care.
  • 2. PEEL • Point – make a point about the China’s population. • Evidence – some evidence to show this point. • Explain – explain how this evidence proves your point. • Link – link back to the point.
  • 3. PEEL • P – China is an overpopulated country. • E- The country has a population of just over 2 billion people and the country’s agriculture, energy supplies and forests have all come under increased stress. • E-In the 1950s and 1950s the people were encouraged to have as many children as possible due to the state philosophy that "a large population gives a strong nation”. At same time, death rates decreased, due to improved food supplies and medical care. • L – This has lead to the country being overpopulated.