A Critique of the Proposed National Education Policy Reform
The power of love revision
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The Power Of Love
Written By
Paula Perez
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SCHOOL - MORNING
ALLIE gets out of her old truck and stands in front of her
new college She looked up and down at the college,
breathes deeply and starts to walk into the college with
her hands in her pocket and her shoulder tensed up.
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INT. SCHOOL CORRIDOR- MORNING
Everyone is constantly walking into each other as they
shout across the corridors. She tries to walk through the
long corridor without walking into anyone, but she ends up
not looking where she going and runs into MICHAEL making
him drop all his books.
MICHAEL
Hey, why don't you look where
you're goi..
(stops the sentence
and stares at Allie)
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They are both kneel down picking everything up but as soon
as Michael says that,Allie looks at him, gets up and walks
away fast like she is suddenly in a rush. She leaves
without even saying sorry.
Michael turns his head and stares at her as she walks
round the corner to the library. He picks up his last red
book and hurries to the library.
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INT. SCHOOL LYBRARY - MOMENTS LATER
Michael walks into the college library and desperately
looks around. He sees a bunch of people in a group and at
the far end a lonely girl with long black hair reading a
black book. Standing out from all the blonde girls.
Michael walks towards her while her back turned at him.
MICHAEL
(smiles nervously)
Hello, I... I wanted to
introduce myself properly. I'm
Michael.
Allie carried on reading her book without paying any
attention to anything Michael was saying.
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MICHAEL
Erm, i just started a couple of
days ago. I know it can be hard
not knowing anyone.
Allie past to the next page of her book. Michael gets
frustrated and stands in front of her.
MICHAEL
Why are you ignoring me?
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Allie pull her earphones out while looking up at Michael.
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ALLIE
Do you want something?
Michael standing up in front of her puts his hands on his
waist, turns his head to the side and does a sideways
smile then turns his head back looking at her green eyes.
ALLIE
Right. Ive got better things to
do so if you would excuse me.
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Allie is about to put her earphones back in when Michael
starts to talk to her again.
MICHAEL
So you rather read that old
thing than talk to a handsome
guy like me?
Allie lets out a little smile and stops herself from
letting that conversation get any further.
ALLIE
Not full of yourself at all. I
see you're different from
everyone else here.
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Michael was about to say something but before he could
even open his mouth she got up and left the room.
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INT SCHOOL - THE NEXT DAY
Allie had taken media for one of her many subjects. She
walked into the full class including Kelly and Michael.
TEACHER
Welcome Allie, we've only just
started talking about filming.
there is a seat right there next
to Michael.
She looked over where Michael was seated, he was giving
her a cheesy smile. While Kelly and her best friend Sarah
were giving her evils, looking at her up and down.
She sat down next to him and got her book and black pen
out. She could hear everyone thinking...Everyone were
thinking how much of a freaky witch she was.
KELLY
(smiles)
So the Stewarts are back in
town? Something supernatural
happened at your last school?
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Allie grabbed her chair really tight trying to calm down.
Michael noticed. He touched her warm hand and suddenly he
fell from his chair. he was shocked...
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Everyone in the class turned around and looked at Michael.
Kelly gasped and pointed at her.
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KELLY
It was her! the witch did it!
Allie looked at Michael worried then looked around the
class. So many different faces looking at her like she was
some kind of monster. The teacher couldn't figure out what
hapened.
She grabbed her book and bag and ran out of the class.
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EXT. FOREST - THE NEXT DAY
Allie went to the forest right outside her big but
destroyed house. She sat down near the lake, plugged her
earphones in and got her book out.
Michael went over to her house and saw her next to the
lake. He walked over there. This time he remembered that
she always puts her earphones in when reading. In signs he
asked her to take them out.
ALLIE
What are you doing here?
Michael noticed she was scared and embarrassed.
MICHAEL
You forgot your pen in class, I
just wanted to give it back to
you.
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