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SW3 Business mail




  s1190083 Shingo Amino
Business mail
TO : Torihikisaki@business.Sw.jp
From: s1190083@u-aizu.ac.jp


Dear Mr.Businessman
I hope I'm not intruding.
I am contacting you for the following reason.


-----main factor of this mail----




If we can be of any further assistance, please let us know.
Thank you.
s1190083 Shingo Amino
What are the three most important strategies that you
adopted for writing this email?

The first is to write concisely.
Business mail is not something to write something and not related to the
subject at length.
So, when you write should write a brief subject.
The second is to write clearly.
It does not make sense if you are not transmitted to the partner even after the
e-mail for business.
So, let's send an e-mail always straightforward.
The third one is to write in a polite word.
Does not hold even in deep negotiations with the opponent then I will be
satisfied.
So, when writing a business email is always polite words
Show us 5 keywords that you learnt while writing this
business email.


Brevity.
Polite.
Clarity.
Respect.
Template.
Why do you think one should learn how to write business
emails?

                   Business mail is always use
when they become members of society.
                   The format must be careful
with trading partners and e-mail to e-mail to
friends and parents are not so different.
                   To study how to write this e-
mail for business that will make sure the
necessary skills when they become members
of society.
Identify three things you can do to improve your current
English writing ability.

I think that first exposed to English, so Whatever games and anime, and
movies also.
This is thought to be effective is more effective at listening, man is made "very
scared to make it easy even when the information coming from the ear to
remember things.
So, you should also try to challenge a bit more difficult.
The second call is to look at even more difficult to read in English.
I can read fluently does not frustrated if friendly, so do not even need a
dictionary.
The third one is to take a look once again at the Japanese translation of these
things.
Look at what it has been translated in Japanese if you're in, or was thinking the
same as those in your own head, to deepen their understanding of English by
verifying it.

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Sw3 7 12 kadai

  • 1. SW3 Business mail s1190083 Shingo Amino
  • 2. Business mail TO : Torihikisaki@business.Sw.jp From: s1190083@u-aizu.ac.jp Dear Mr.Businessman I hope I'm not intruding. I am contacting you for the following reason. -----main factor of this mail---- If we can be of any further assistance, please let us know. Thank you. s1190083 Shingo Amino
  • 3. What are the three most important strategies that you adopted for writing this email? The first is to write concisely. Business mail is not something to write something and not related to the subject at length. So, when you write should write a brief subject. The second is to write clearly. It does not make sense if you are not transmitted to the partner even after the e-mail for business. So, let's send an e-mail always straightforward. The third one is to write in a polite word. Does not hold even in deep negotiations with the opponent then I will be satisfied. So, when writing a business email is always polite words
  • 4. Show us 5 keywords that you learnt while writing this business email. Brevity. Polite. Clarity. Respect. Template.
  • 5. Why do you think one should learn how to write business emails? Business mail is always use when they become members of society. The format must be careful with trading partners and e-mail to e-mail to friends and parents are not so different. To study how to write this e- mail for business that will make sure the necessary skills when they become members of society.
  • 6. Identify three things you can do to improve your current English writing ability. I think that first exposed to English, so Whatever games and anime, and movies also. This is thought to be effective is more effective at listening, man is made "very scared to make it easy even when the information coming from the ear to remember things. So, you should also try to challenge a bit more difficult. The second call is to look at even more difficult to read in English. I can read fluently does not frustrated if friendly, so do not even need a dictionary. The third one is to take a look once again at the Japanese translation of these things. Look at what it has been translated in Japanese if you're in, or was thinking the same as those in your own head, to deepen their understanding of English by verifying it.