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Malcolm: And his unexpected angel
By Jake Beare
An Original Screenplay
mobile: 07817723307
email: jake.beare@me.com
INT. MALCOLM'S BEDROOM. EVENING
Malcolm is pouring himself a drink, it hen slowly follows
him to his desk where he is writing something on his
laptop. He is on his the computer, it then becomes
apparent that he is writing a script.  He is typing and
saying what he is typing at the same time.
COMPUTER
"A handsome yet shy teenager
leaves the coffee shop, he is
around 6ft2, and always wears a
grey jumper, after this he-"
While this is happening there is crosscutting of a
handsome guy leaving a coffee shop wearing a grey jumper.
Malcolm is very confused, he can not continue his story.
MALCOLM
What does he do, he leaves the
coffee shop and-  (talking to
himself).
Malcolm puts his hand on his head.  Looks at his
Facebook. Malcolm starts scrolling and takes a sip of his
drink.
CHARLIE (FACEBOOK)
Listen Man, We're shooting in
literally 3 days, where the fuck
is our script.  
CHARLIE (FACEBOOK)
Send it to me!
CHARLIE (FACEBOOK)
What the fuck is going on send it
to me.
Malcolm takes another sip of his drink and starts to work
on his script again.
MALCOLM
He leaves the coffee shop, Kurt
leaves the coffee shop- Fuck.
 
2
(CONTINUED)
EXT. ALLEY WAY. DAY
Malcolm is walking and he sees a familiar face.  it
becomes apparent that it is the guy he is writing about.
malcolm takes a swig of his mini vodka bottle and starts
to follow him until he turns a corner, when malcolm
passes the corner the man is out of sight.
INT. MALCOLM'S BEDROOM. DAY
He keeps looking behind him until he gets back to his
room and kurt is sitting quietly on his bed listening to
music.  malcolm is totally startled.
KURT
So what you gonna write next?
MALCOLM
Who the fuck are you?
KURT
You wrote about me, no?
Malcolm then realises that he is Kurt.
MALCOLM
I don't know who you are, but I'm
going to call the police.
Kurt leaves, and Malcolm shuts the door, he turns around
and Kurt is just behind him.
MALCOLM
Jesus.
Malcolm is just staring at Kurt.  Kurt is smiling back
intently at Malcolm.
KURT
So what happens next.
MALCOLM
What the fuck, I'm dreaming, I
must be dreaming, or I'm insane.
It is silent, Kurt is being really awkward, he is just
twirling his thumbs, looking up to the ceiling.
KURT
You gonna write then?
Malcolm still not able to contemplate what is happening.
3
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: (2)
MALCOLM
Am I going to write?  
KURT
Yeh, you seem to not have written
very much.
Malcolm looks like he is going to punch Kurt in the face,
he then takes another swig of his vodka.
KURT
Well that isn't helping you, give
it to me.
MALCOLM
Don't tell me what to do, I
created you for fuck sake.
KURT
Ok, but when you do write it,
make sure after the coffee shop
I'm going to meet someone I love
MALCOLM
What? Wait a minute.  That isn't
half bad.
Malcolm starts typing.
MALCOLM
What else?
There is no answer.  
MALCOLM
What else man?
Malcolm looks back and Kurt is gone.  Malcolm is confused
again.  Malcolm looks everywhere around his room.  He
then wakes up.  Malcolm has been sleeping at his desk the
whole time, but he has a smile on his face as he now
knows what to write.  he looks to his right and sees a
grey jumper, the same one that Kurt wears, he is really
scared.
EXT. POND. EVENING
Malcolm is looking across the pond staring meaningfully
onto the distance, he throws his last vodka bottle into
the pond and smiles as if he is finally free, he slowly
walks off into the distance, it is not implied that he
4
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: (2)
writes the book.  It is implied that he is striving
towards something perhaps to something better.

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Malcolm 1st Draft

  • 1. Malcolm: And his unexpected angel By Jake Beare An Original Screenplay mobile: 07817723307 email: jake.beare@me.com
  • 2. INT. MALCOLM'S BEDROOM. EVENING Malcolm is pouring himself a drink, it hen slowly follows him to his desk where he is writing something on his laptop. He is on his the computer, it then becomes apparent that he is writing a script.  He is typing and saying what he is typing at the same time. COMPUTER "A handsome yet shy teenager leaves the coffee shop, he is around 6ft2, and always wears a grey jumper, after this he-" While this is happening there is crosscutting of a handsome guy leaving a coffee shop wearing a grey jumper. Malcolm is very confused, he can not continue his story. MALCOLM What does he do, he leaves the coffee shop and-  (talking to himself). Malcolm puts his hand on his head.  Looks at his Facebook. Malcolm starts scrolling and takes a sip of his drink. CHARLIE (FACEBOOK) Listen Man, We're shooting in literally 3 days, where the fuck is our script.   CHARLIE (FACEBOOK) Send it to me! CHARLIE (FACEBOOK) What the fuck is going on send it to me. Malcolm takes another sip of his drink and starts to work on his script again. MALCOLM He leaves the coffee shop, Kurt leaves the coffee shop- Fuck.  
  • 3. 2 (CONTINUED) EXT. ALLEY WAY. DAY Malcolm is walking and he sees a familiar face.  it becomes apparent that it is the guy he is writing about. malcolm takes a swig of his mini vodka bottle and starts to follow him until he turns a corner, when malcolm passes the corner the man is out of sight. INT. MALCOLM'S BEDROOM. DAY He keeps looking behind him until he gets back to his room and kurt is sitting quietly on his bed listening to music.  malcolm is totally startled. KURT So what you gonna write next? MALCOLM Who the fuck are you? KURT You wrote about me, no? Malcolm then realises that he is Kurt. MALCOLM I don't know who you are, but I'm going to call the police. Kurt leaves, and Malcolm shuts the door, he turns around and Kurt is just behind him. MALCOLM Jesus. Malcolm is just staring at Kurt.  Kurt is smiling back intently at Malcolm. KURT So what happens next. MALCOLM What the fuck, I'm dreaming, I must be dreaming, or I'm insane. It is silent, Kurt is being really awkward, he is just twirling his thumbs, looking up to the ceiling. KURT You gonna write then? Malcolm still not able to contemplate what is happening.
  • 4. 3 (CONTINUED) CONTINUED: (2) MALCOLM Am I going to write?   KURT Yeh, you seem to not have written very much. Malcolm looks like he is going to punch Kurt in the face, he then takes another swig of his vodka. KURT Well that isn't helping you, give it to me. MALCOLM Don't tell me what to do, I created you for fuck sake. KURT Ok, but when you do write it, make sure after the coffee shop I'm going to meet someone I love MALCOLM What? Wait a minute.  That isn't half bad. Malcolm starts typing. MALCOLM What else? There is no answer.   MALCOLM What else man? Malcolm looks back and Kurt is gone.  Malcolm is confused again.  Malcolm looks everywhere around his room.  He then wakes up.  Malcolm has been sleeping at his desk the whole time, but he has a smile on his face as he now knows what to write.  he looks to his right and sees a grey jumper, the same one that Kurt wears, he is really scared. EXT. POND. EVENING Malcolm is looking across the pond staring meaningfully onto the distance, he throws his last vodka bottle into the pond and smiles as if he is finally free, he slowly walks off into the distance, it is not implied that he
  • 5. 4 (CONTINUED) CONTINUED: (2) writes the book.  It is implied that he is striving towards something perhaps to something better.