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254.102
WRITING WORKSHOP
Assignment Quiz
Assignment Structure
Evaluation of a paragraph
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ASSIGNMENT 2
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ASSIGNMENT 3
ASSIGNMENT QUIZ
1. Which of these represent the floor of
the Health Profession House in
Freegard’s (2006) model?
• Taha Wairua (spiritual health)
• Evidence-based Research
• Ethical and Reflective Practice
Figure 1. The Health Profession House. Source: Freegard (2006).
Figure 2. Te whare tapa wha. Source: Ministry of Health (2012).
ASSIGNMENT QUIZ
2. Which of these is NOT one of the
four generic competencies in COMPASS?
• Learning
• Expertise
• Communication
Figure 3. COMPASS generic competencies. Source: McAllister, Lincoln,
Ferguson, & McAllister (2006).
ASSIGNMENT QUIZ
3. What is the name of the video
scenario which assignment 1 is based
on?
• Honest Reporting
• Truth or Dare
• Facing the facts
ASSIGNMENT QUIZ
4. Which of these frameworks is
mentioned in part 2 of the instructions
for Assignment 1?
• COMPASS
• the Ethical Response Cycle
• Ethics of Care
Figure 5. 254.102 Paper Guide. Source: College of Humanities and Social
Sciences, Massey University (2015).
Figure 6. The ethical grid. Source: Seedhouse & Lovett (1992, p. 21)
Figure 7. The ethical response cycle. Source: Newman & Pollnitz (2002, p. 5)
ASSIGNMENT QUIZ
5. Which phase of the Ethical Response
Cycle might involve consideration of the
NZTC Code of Ethics?
• Legal Aspects
• Professional Consideration
• Ethical Principles
Figure 8: The ethical response cycle [detail]. Newman & Pollnitz (2002, p. 6).
ASSIGNMENT QUIZ
6. Which of these is NOT one of the
four principles of the NZTC Code of
Ethics?
Autonomy (to treat people with rights that are to be
honoured and defended)
Justice (to share power and prevent the abuse of
power)
Sustainability (to use resources responsibly without
impinging on their use by future generations)
Truth (to be honest with others and self)
Figure 9. Ethical Principles. Source: New Zealand Teachers Council
(2004a).
ASSIGNMENT QUIZ
7. Which of these is stated as a
commitment for teachers in the NZTC
Code of Ethics?
• to one’s personal learning
• to implementation of MoE policy
• to a child-centred integrated curriculum
• to the profession
Figure 10. Ethical commitment 4. Source: New Zealand Teachers Council
(2004a).
ASSIGNMENT QUIZ
8. What proportion of the marks for
Assignment 1 are for writing issues?
• 10 %
• 25 %
• 33 %
• 40 %
PROCESS OF STRUCTURING AN
ESSAY
How many paragraphs?
1500 words = 8 – 12 paragraphs
How many sections?
Introduction
Identification of issues
Management of issues
Conclusion
POSSIBLE STRUCTURE
INTRO (1 para)
ISSUE 1 (2 paras)
ISSUE 2 (2 paras)
MANAGEMENT OF ISSUE 1 (2 paras)
MANAGEMENT OF ISSUE 2 (2 paras)
CONCLUSION (1 para)
INTRODUCTION – potential
elements
Context: Something in the world, in your
life, in your profession that makes this
topic seem worth exploring
Definition / Explanation of importance of
key topic:
Preview of the structure of the essay
ISSUES SECTION– potential
elements
Explain what the ethical dilemma is – i.e.
what is the problem and why is this an
ethical dilemma?
Explain why the ethical dilemma is a
concern, who it affects and what the
implications are.
Refer to ethical theories and principles in
your explanations.
MANAGEMENT SECTION–
potential elements
Explain how one of the ethical frameworks
could be used to address each dilemma
Consider the viewpoints / interests of the
participants and their codes of ethics
If there is space, apply one or more other
ethical principle – e.g. from your reading /
knowledge of other cultures etc (still needs
referencing even if you just happen to
know it!)
CONCLUSION– potential
elements
Overall main point of the essay
Key lessons learnt
Implications for professional practice
A suitable ethical principle that applies to this scenario, is non-maleficence
(Newman & Pollnitz, 2002). This principle would support the teacher’s decision not
to enforce the ban on mobile phones in school, as the child would. However, non-
enforcement of the rule could weaken respect for the school rules in general – an
issue Kant highlighted in his principle of the categorical imperative (Anfara &
Mertens, 2008). A potential way of resolving the conflict between these two ethical
principles could be to develop a creative compromise (Kipnis, 1987). For instance,
the teacher could set aside a safe space and place for mobile phone use, based on
a relationship of trust in which commitments to the learner, his aiga and to the
broader profession and society (NZTC, 2004) can be realised. Since this ethical
dilemma revolves around the unsatisfactory consequences of applying a school rule
too harshly, the theory of Utilitarianism can usefully inform decision-making. This
involves an evaluation of the likely consequences for all parties (Kagan, 1998). This
perspective provides further support for the creative solution of relationship-
building, since the likely outcome is far more positive in relation to the interests of
the child, which must be paramount in a teacher’s decision-making (NZTC, 2004).
Evaluate this paragraph from a similar
assignment
• Accurate writing and referencing
• Flow – each sentence builds on the one before
• Research-based – includes 6 relevant citations
• Uses ethical principles to address the dilemma
• Acknowledges culture of the child and family
STRENGTHS
WEAKNESSES
• May be trying to say too much in one paragraph
• Does not explicitly apply an ethical framework
• Might have acknowledged the child’s and family’s
perspectives and ethical principles more explicitly
References
College of Humanities and Social Sciences, Massey University. (2013). 254.102
Professional and ethical practice [Paper Guide]. Albany, New Zealand: Author
Freegard, H. (Ed.). (2006). Ethical practice for health professionals. Melbourne, Vic:
Thomson Learning.
McAllister, S., Lincoln, M., Ferguson, A., & McAllister, L. (2006). COMPASS: Competency
Assessment in Speech Pathology. Melbourne, Vic: Speech Pathology Association of
Australia Ltd.
Ministry of Health. (2012). Maori health models: Te whare tapa wha.
Retrieved from: http://www.health.govt.nz/our work/populations/maori-
health/maori-health-models/maori-health-models-te-whare
-tapa-wha
Newman, L. & Pollnitz, L. (2002). Professional, ethical and legal issues in early childhood.
Frenchs Forest, NSW: Pearson Education Australia.
New Zealand Teachers Council. (2004a). Code of ethics for registered teachers.
Wellington, New Zealand: Author.
New Zealand Teachers Council. (2004b). Honest reporting [Video File]. Retrieved from
https://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_embedded&v=p6iqgXHdb5g
Seedhouse, D., & Lovett, L. (1992). Practical medical ethics. Chichester, England: John
Wiley & Sons.
Citations are a short way of indicating the source of your
theories, models, concepts, examples or facts
In APA style, all you need to do is to put the author and date of
publication of the book, article or website you used
The most common way to do this is to put these in brackets
AFTER you’ve used the information
CITATIONS AND REFERENCES
Cognitive behavioural therapy is
increasingly preferred to more traditional
medical interventions in such cases
(Dunbar & Holmes, 2003).
As an alternative you can use ‘according to’ and
include the author(s) in your sentence
Or make the author(s) the subject of your sentence,
choosing an appropriate reporting verb, for example:
claim argue explain point out find / foundsuggest
According to Dunbar and Holmes (2003),
cognitive behavioural therapy is increasingly
preferred …..
Dunbar and Holmes (2003) claim that
cognitive behavioural therapy is
increasingly preferred …..
Brooks, R. M. (2010). Financial management: Core concepts. Boston, MA: Pearson
Brown, P. (2012). Equal opportunities in New Zealand: Myth or reality? Australasian
Journal of Human Resources, 41(3), 46-68.
Davidson, C., & Tolich, M. (2001). Social science research in New Zealand.
Auckland, New Zealand: Pearson Education.
Khan, I., & Chen, T. (2010). Tackling ageism: A cross-institutional approach. In J.
Johnson & T. Peterson (Eds.), An equal opportunities handbook (pp. 102-131). San
Francisco, CA: Pilot Press.
Atkinson, D. (2013, January 24). Too old to work: Too young to die? Retrieved from
http://www.nzherald.co.nz/1004532.htm
Smith, P., & Davidoff, R. (2003). Equal opportunities: From policy to practice. Central
Islip, NY: Progressive Press.
Statistics New Zealand. (2008). Demographic Trends – 2001-2006. Retrieved from
http://stats.govt.nz/demotrends-2012.pdf
Your citations need to match up with complete
references to sources in a list at the end
References
Smith, P., & Davidoff, R. (2003). Equal opportunities: From policy to practice.
Central Islip, NY: Progressive Press.
(year) title of book
city publisher
In academic writing, most references are to
books and journal articles
surname,
initial
Brown, P. (2012). Equal opportunities in New Zealand: Myth or reality?
Australasian Journal of Human Resources, 41(3), 46-68.
doi: 10.1037/0278-6133.24.2.225
(year) title of article
surname,
initial
volume / issue number
page numbers
name of journaldoi number
CHAPTER IN
EDITED BOOK
Biggins, G. (2009). Why I became a social worker. In P. Te Ara & T. Rogers (Eds.),
Social work and social workers in New Zealand/Aotearoa (pp.102-120).
Auckland, New Zealand: Insight Press.
Title of chapter – not
in italics
Editors’ names – initial
goes before and (Eds.),
goes after!
Title of book –
in italics
Page numbers of chapter – in
brackets with pp. before
Author of chapter
and year of
publication
City &
Publisher
CITY OF PUBLICATION
UK, NZ etc
city, country
Harmondsworth, England:
Penguin.
Palmerston North, New
Zealand: Dunmore Press.
USA
city, state
initials
Upper Saddle River, NJ:
Lawrence Erlbaum
Associates.
Check title of book in library catalogue and/or Google if
city of publication is not clear from the book itself
Australia
Either state
OR country
Milton, Qld: McGraw-Hill.
Milton, Australia:
McGraw-Hill.
WEB PAGE REFERENCE
Statistics New Zealand. (2009).
Mapping trends in the Auckland
region. Retrieved from
http://www.stats.govt.nz/Publication
s/PopulationStatistics/mapping-
trends-in-the-auckland-region.aspx.
author’s name
(or organisation that owns the web site)
Year
(if it’s missing put (n.d.)
Retrieved from
followed by full internet address
Title of page
(in italics)
Article Title: Rethinking aphasia therapy: A
neuroscience perspective
Author: Rosemary Varley
Journal: International Journal of Speech-
Language Pathology, 13(1)
DOI: 10.3109/17549507.2010.497561
Page numbers: 11-20
Year: 2011
REFERENCING QUIZ
Write the end of text reference for this journal article
and post it to the forum entitled ‘reference answer – no
peeking’ on Stream
When you’ve posted your own, you can compare it to the
others!
© 2015
This PowerPoint Presentation and the accompanying handouts
are copyrighted by Centre for Teaching and Learning,
Massey University and may not be used, except for personal
study, without written permission from the copyright owner.
Please note that examples are provided for illustration of
writing principles only and no reliance should be placed on
any of the ideas referred to in the texts.
Martin McMorrow, Centre for Teaching and Learning
09 441 8143 slt-alb@massey.ac.nz
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2015 254102 writing workshop 1

  • 1. 254.102 WRITING WORKSHOP Assignment Quiz Assignment Structure Evaluation of a paragraph This presentation can be viewed online at: http://tinyurl.com/254102workshop1-20
  • 2. CENTRE FOR TEACHING AND LEARNING SERVICES http://owll.massey.ac.nz Online Writing and Learning Link http://tinyurl.com/albanyworkshops2015 Workshops Book on 09 441-8143 or slc-alb@massey.ac.nz OR in person at the library (LEVEL 3) OR use online ‘pre-reading’ service (under Academic Support in Stream) ONE-TO-ONE OR SMALL GROUP CONSULTATIONS
  • 3. ONLINE ASSIGNMENT WRITING WORKSHOPS FOR 254.102 Sunday July 12th 2 pm OR Thursday July 16th 7 pm ASSIGNMENT 2 To enter these online meets, put this address in your browser, enter as guest and write your name in box. Move instructions available on Stream https://connect.massey.ac.nz/writingfor254102 Sunday September 20th 2 pm OR Thursday September 24th 7 pm ASSIGNMENT 3
  • 4. ASSIGNMENT QUIZ 1. Which of these represent the floor of the Health Profession House in Freegard’s (2006) model? • Taha Wairua (spiritual health) • Evidence-based Research • Ethical and Reflective Practice
  • 5. Figure 1. The Health Profession House. Source: Freegard (2006).
  • 6. Figure 2. Te whare tapa wha. Source: Ministry of Health (2012).
  • 7. ASSIGNMENT QUIZ 2. Which of these is NOT one of the four generic competencies in COMPASS? • Learning • Expertise • Communication
  • 8. Figure 3. COMPASS generic competencies. Source: McAllister, Lincoln, Ferguson, & McAllister (2006).
  • 9. ASSIGNMENT QUIZ 3. What is the name of the video scenario which assignment 1 is based on? • Honest Reporting • Truth or Dare • Facing the facts
  • 10. ASSIGNMENT QUIZ 4. Which of these frameworks is mentioned in part 2 of the instructions for Assignment 1? • COMPASS • the Ethical Response Cycle • Ethics of Care
  • 11. Figure 5. 254.102 Paper Guide. Source: College of Humanities and Social Sciences, Massey University (2015).
  • 12. Figure 6. The ethical grid. Source: Seedhouse & Lovett (1992, p. 21)
  • 13. Figure 7. The ethical response cycle. Source: Newman & Pollnitz (2002, p. 5)
  • 14. ASSIGNMENT QUIZ 5. Which phase of the Ethical Response Cycle might involve consideration of the NZTC Code of Ethics? • Legal Aspects • Professional Consideration • Ethical Principles
  • 15. Figure 8: The ethical response cycle [detail]. Newman & Pollnitz (2002, p. 6).
  • 16. ASSIGNMENT QUIZ 6. Which of these is NOT one of the four principles of the NZTC Code of Ethics? Autonomy (to treat people with rights that are to be honoured and defended) Justice (to share power and prevent the abuse of power) Sustainability (to use resources responsibly without impinging on their use by future generations) Truth (to be honest with others and self)
  • 17. Figure 9. Ethical Principles. Source: New Zealand Teachers Council (2004a).
  • 18. ASSIGNMENT QUIZ 7. Which of these is stated as a commitment for teachers in the NZTC Code of Ethics? • to one’s personal learning • to implementation of MoE policy • to a child-centred integrated curriculum • to the profession
  • 19. Figure 10. Ethical commitment 4. Source: New Zealand Teachers Council (2004a).
  • 20. ASSIGNMENT QUIZ 8. What proportion of the marks for Assignment 1 are for writing issues? • 10 % • 25 % • 33 % • 40 %
  • 21. PROCESS OF STRUCTURING AN ESSAY How many paragraphs? 1500 words = 8 – 12 paragraphs How many sections? Introduction Identification of issues Management of issues Conclusion
  • 22. POSSIBLE STRUCTURE INTRO (1 para) ISSUE 1 (2 paras) ISSUE 2 (2 paras) MANAGEMENT OF ISSUE 1 (2 paras) MANAGEMENT OF ISSUE 2 (2 paras) CONCLUSION (1 para)
  • 23. INTRODUCTION – potential elements Context: Something in the world, in your life, in your profession that makes this topic seem worth exploring Definition / Explanation of importance of key topic: Preview of the structure of the essay
  • 24. ISSUES SECTION– potential elements Explain what the ethical dilemma is – i.e. what is the problem and why is this an ethical dilemma? Explain why the ethical dilemma is a concern, who it affects and what the implications are. Refer to ethical theories and principles in your explanations.
  • 25. MANAGEMENT SECTION– potential elements Explain how one of the ethical frameworks could be used to address each dilemma Consider the viewpoints / interests of the participants and their codes of ethics If there is space, apply one or more other ethical principle – e.g. from your reading / knowledge of other cultures etc (still needs referencing even if you just happen to know it!)
  • 26. CONCLUSION– potential elements Overall main point of the essay Key lessons learnt Implications for professional practice
  • 27. A suitable ethical principle that applies to this scenario, is non-maleficence (Newman & Pollnitz, 2002). This principle would support the teacher’s decision not to enforce the ban on mobile phones in school, as the child would. However, non- enforcement of the rule could weaken respect for the school rules in general – an issue Kant highlighted in his principle of the categorical imperative (Anfara & Mertens, 2008). A potential way of resolving the conflict between these two ethical principles could be to develop a creative compromise (Kipnis, 1987). For instance, the teacher could set aside a safe space and place for mobile phone use, based on a relationship of trust in which commitments to the learner, his aiga and to the broader profession and society (NZTC, 2004) can be realised. Since this ethical dilemma revolves around the unsatisfactory consequences of applying a school rule too harshly, the theory of Utilitarianism can usefully inform decision-making. This involves an evaluation of the likely consequences for all parties (Kagan, 1998). This perspective provides further support for the creative solution of relationship- building, since the likely outcome is far more positive in relation to the interests of the child, which must be paramount in a teacher’s decision-making (NZTC, 2004). Evaluate this paragraph from a similar assignment
  • 28. • Accurate writing and referencing • Flow – each sentence builds on the one before • Research-based – includes 6 relevant citations • Uses ethical principles to address the dilemma • Acknowledges culture of the child and family STRENGTHS WEAKNESSES • May be trying to say too much in one paragraph • Does not explicitly apply an ethical framework • Might have acknowledged the child’s and family’s perspectives and ethical principles more explicitly
  • 29. References College of Humanities and Social Sciences, Massey University. (2013). 254.102 Professional and ethical practice [Paper Guide]. Albany, New Zealand: Author Freegard, H. (Ed.). (2006). Ethical practice for health professionals. Melbourne, Vic: Thomson Learning. McAllister, S., Lincoln, M., Ferguson, A., & McAllister, L. (2006). COMPASS: Competency Assessment in Speech Pathology. Melbourne, Vic: Speech Pathology Association of Australia Ltd. Ministry of Health. (2012). Maori health models: Te whare tapa wha. Retrieved from: http://www.health.govt.nz/our work/populations/maori- health/maori-health-models/maori-health-models-te-whare -tapa-wha Newman, L. & Pollnitz, L. (2002). Professional, ethical and legal issues in early childhood. Frenchs Forest, NSW: Pearson Education Australia. New Zealand Teachers Council. (2004a). Code of ethics for registered teachers. Wellington, New Zealand: Author. New Zealand Teachers Council. (2004b). Honest reporting [Video File]. Retrieved from https://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_embedded&v=p6iqgXHdb5g Seedhouse, D., & Lovett, L. (1992). Practical medical ethics. Chichester, England: John Wiley & Sons.
  • 30. Citations are a short way of indicating the source of your theories, models, concepts, examples or facts In APA style, all you need to do is to put the author and date of publication of the book, article or website you used The most common way to do this is to put these in brackets AFTER you’ve used the information CITATIONS AND REFERENCES Cognitive behavioural therapy is increasingly preferred to more traditional medical interventions in such cases (Dunbar & Holmes, 2003).
  • 31. As an alternative you can use ‘according to’ and include the author(s) in your sentence Or make the author(s) the subject of your sentence, choosing an appropriate reporting verb, for example: claim argue explain point out find / foundsuggest According to Dunbar and Holmes (2003), cognitive behavioural therapy is increasingly preferred ….. Dunbar and Holmes (2003) claim that cognitive behavioural therapy is increasingly preferred …..
  • 32. Brooks, R. M. (2010). Financial management: Core concepts. Boston, MA: Pearson Brown, P. (2012). Equal opportunities in New Zealand: Myth or reality? Australasian Journal of Human Resources, 41(3), 46-68. Davidson, C., & Tolich, M. (2001). Social science research in New Zealand. Auckland, New Zealand: Pearson Education. Khan, I., & Chen, T. (2010). Tackling ageism: A cross-institutional approach. In J. Johnson & T. Peterson (Eds.), An equal opportunities handbook (pp. 102-131). San Francisco, CA: Pilot Press. Atkinson, D. (2013, January 24). Too old to work: Too young to die? Retrieved from http://www.nzherald.co.nz/1004532.htm Smith, P., & Davidoff, R. (2003). Equal opportunities: From policy to practice. Central Islip, NY: Progressive Press. Statistics New Zealand. (2008). Demographic Trends – 2001-2006. Retrieved from http://stats.govt.nz/demotrends-2012.pdf Your citations need to match up with complete references to sources in a list at the end References
  • 33. Smith, P., & Davidoff, R. (2003). Equal opportunities: From policy to practice. Central Islip, NY: Progressive Press. (year) title of book city publisher In academic writing, most references are to books and journal articles surname, initial Brown, P. (2012). Equal opportunities in New Zealand: Myth or reality? Australasian Journal of Human Resources, 41(3), 46-68. doi: 10.1037/0278-6133.24.2.225 (year) title of article surname, initial volume / issue number page numbers name of journaldoi number
  • 34. CHAPTER IN EDITED BOOK Biggins, G. (2009). Why I became a social worker. In P. Te Ara & T. Rogers (Eds.), Social work and social workers in New Zealand/Aotearoa (pp.102-120). Auckland, New Zealand: Insight Press. Title of chapter – not in italics Editors’ names – initial goes before and (Eds.), goes after! Title of book – in italics Page numbers of chapter – in brackets with pp. before Author of chapter and year of publication City & Publisher
  • 35. CITY OF PUBLICATION UK, NZ etc city, country Harmondsworth, England: Penguin. Palmerston North, New Zealand: Dunmore Press. USA city, state initials Upper Saddle River, NJ: Lawrence Erlbaum Associates. Check title of book in library catalogue and/or Google if city of publication is not clear from the book itself Australia Either state OR country Milton, Qld: McGraw-Hill. Milton, Australia: McGraw-Hill.
  • 36. WEB PAGE REFERENCE Statistics New Zealand. (2009). Mapping trends in the Auckland region. Retrieved from http://www.stats.govt.nz/Publication s/PopulationStatistics/mapping- trends-in-the-auckland-region.aspx. author’s name (or organisation that owns the web site) Year (if it’s missing put (n.d.) Retrieved from followed by full internet address Title of page (in italics)
  • 37. Article Title: Rethinking aphasia therapy: A neuroscience perspective Author: Rosemary Varley Journal: International Journal of Speech- Language Pathology, 13(1) DOI: 10.3109/17549507.2010.497561 Page numbers: 11-20 Year: 2011 REFERENCING QUIZ Write the end of text reference for this journal article and post it to the forum entitled ‘reference answer – no peeking’ on Stream When you’ve posted your own, you can compare it to the others!
  • 38. © 2015 This PowerPoint Presentation and the accompanying handouts are copyrighted by Centre for Teaching and Learning, Massey University and may not be used, except for personal study, without written permission from the copyright owner. Please note that examples are provided for illustration of writing principles only and no reliance should be placed on any of the ideas referred to in the texts. Martin McMorrow, Centre for Teaching and Learning 09 441 8143 slt-alb@massey.ac.nz This presentation can be viewed online at: http://tinyurl.com/254102workshop1-20