Revised key scene done

1. Revisedkeyscene: My keyscene hasn’treallychangedsince Iwrote the extractformypitch,as both myself andmy clientfeltthatthe dialogue andstoryworked verywell the wayIhadoriginallywrittenit.The only changesI have made are correctinga few formattingerrorssuchas leavingspacesbetween heading and description,butapartfromthat we thoughtitwas bestto leave itasit was as itworkedwell already.