2. Scene 1
EXT. The weather is warm with the sun about to set and blue skies. Honey Smith,
Leah Meadows and Rebecca Collins are together at a bus stop and are deciding what
they should do for fun as they are bored and need a motive to do.
(LS) All the girls are standing next to each other whilst each one of them come up
with a good idea for them to do in the meantime.
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REBECCA COLLINS
(MS) ‘I have a great idea for us to do as we have nothing else to do.’
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HONEY SMITH
(TS) ‘Well tell us then!’
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LEAH MEADOWS
(MS) ‘This better be good’.
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REBECCA COLLINS
(MS)’Well, I know this this abandoned building that use to be a mental hospital. We
can break in for fun and explore the old building, how about that?’
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HONEY SMITH
(LS) ‘I guess we coudl check it out, what do we have to lose?’
FADE TO BLACK:
EXT. The three girls arrive to a fence which they have to jump over in order to get
inside of the abandoned building.
(Tracking MS)
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3. REBECCA COLLINS
(MS)’Right, we've got over the first fence, there's only one more left and then we will
have arrived at the building!’
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(OTSS from Rebecca Collins POV)
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LEAH MEADOWS
(MS) ‘What do you mean ‘one more left’? There’s another fence we need to climb
over?’
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REBECCA COLLINS
(MS) ‘Well what did you expect? This did use to be a mental hospital. There were so
many fences and security guards to make sure that the mental patients would not
escape.’
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LEAH MEADOWS
(MS)’ Alright, I guess you’re right. One more fence it is then.’
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EXT. The three girls have climbed over the second fence.
(Establishing shot of outside of the building)
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LEAH MEADOWS
(LS) ‘Woah! This place looks so scary.’
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REBECCA COLLINS
(MS) ‘Yeah it does. I heard many people died in this building.’
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HONEY SMITH
(LS) ‘Let's just hurry up and get the ritual over and done with.’
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(Tracking MS) The three girls are walking down a road that will lead them inside the
building.
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REBECCA COLLINS
(MS) ‘Alright let’s go’.
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(CU) All the girls are walking up to the building.
FADE TO BLACK:
5. Scene 2
EXT. The three girls have arrived inside the abandoned building and are setting out
the objects; the special stones, candles, prayer books and an image of Leah
Meadows’s boyfriend on the floor inside of the circle they are sitting in.
FADE IN:
(Establishing Shot of the girls sitting down on the floor with objects laid out in front
of them.)
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HONEY SMITH:
(MS) ‘So what we going to do in this abandoned building?’
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REBECCA COLLINS:
(MS) ‘Well, I’ve decided that we should do a prank on Trey.
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(Tracking MS) The girls sitting on the floor talking to each other.
FADE OUT TO FADE IN:
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LEAH MEADOWS:
(LS) ‘Why are we going to do a prank on Trey?’
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REBECCA COLLINS:
(Tracking CU) ‘Well what else do you have in mind. You know Trey always plays
pranks on us so why not do it to him this time?’
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6. HONEY SMITH:
(CU) ‘I agree with Rebecca. He always messes about with us so it will just be for a
laugh.’
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LEAH MEADOWS:
(MS) ‘I don't feel comfortable doing this.’
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REBECCA COLLINS
(MS) ‘Why not? What's the worst that could happen?’
*Picks up a candle*
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(CU) Candle in Rebecca's hand.
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HONEY SMITH:
(MS) ‘Leah there's nothing to worry about. The place is abandoned and all we are
going to do is just prank Trey. One day we will look back to this day and laugh to the
memories we made.
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LEAH MEADOWS:
(MS) ‘I;m not just yet agreeing with this stupid prank, but, say we do go ahead with
this prank, what type of prank we will do?’
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REBECCA COLLINS:
(LS) ‘Well, you know how I'm into al of this spirit and ghost stuff, well i did some
research and found some prays that we could say that ‘apparently’ can curse another
person.’
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LEAH MEADOWS:
7. (CU) ‘Why do we have to put a curse on him? Isn’t that a bit too extreme?’
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HONEY SMITH:
(MS) ‘Yeah Rebecca I agree with Leah. I don't think we should do this prank because
what if something does ACTUALLY happen to Trey?’
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REBECCA SMITH:
(MS) *Laughing* ‘Come on girls! We're just messing about and plus it's not as if the
preys are true so nothing will happen. Trust me!’
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HONEY SMITH:
(MS) ‘yeah alright, spirits are not even real so I guess nothing will happen.’
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LEAH MEADOWS:
(MS) ‘Fine! I guess nothing scary will actually happen since it's all fake and just a
prank.’
FADE TO BLACK:
Scene 3
EXT. Rebecca hands Leah a candle and hands another candle to Hiney. The girls
start to light the candles and place them on the floor in a shape if a circle with stones
next to the candles as well with an image of Trey Johnson on Leah’s phone, which is
placed right in the middle of the circle that is surrounded by candles and stones with
two prayer books stacked behind the candles to make sure they don't blow out.
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(Tracking MS) Going round the circle as Rebecca Collins does the ritual to call upon
the spirits showing each character's facial expressions.
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REBECCA COLLINS
(Tracking MS) You who lived yesterday
I’ll call you from my mind to yours,
Come back from the shadows into the light
And show yourself here.
SPIRITS SPIRITS SHOW YOURSELF!.
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LEAH MEADOWS:
(CU) ‘Well?’
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(Tracking LS) The girls sit in confusion.
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HONEY SMITH:
(TLS in the dark) ‘What is supposed to happen?’
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REBECCA SMITH:
(TLS in the dark) I think we all need to say the ritual. It will be more powerful.
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LEAH MEADOWS:
(MS) ‘This is so stupid! It’s not going to work anyways!’
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9. REBECCA COLLINS:
(MS) Let’s just try it. It's just for bants.’
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HONEY SMITH:
(CU) ‘Come on Leah, it's just for a joke. There's nothing to worry about.’
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(LS) Honey Smith, Rebecca collins and Leah Meadows are sitting on the floor whilst
holding hands and beging to chant the words of the ritual out loud.
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(LS) You who lived yesterday
I’ll call you from my mind to yours,
Come back from the shadows into the light
And show yourself here.
SPIRITS SPIRITS SHOW YOURSELF!.
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(CU) The light on the candles blow out.
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LEAH MEADOWS:
(MS, OTSS) ‘OH MY GOD!’ *panting*
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HONEY SMITH:
(MS) ‘We need to get out this place RIGHT NOW!’ *panting*
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REBECCA COLLINS:
(MS) ‘Alright! Grab the objects and let's get out of here.’ *panting*
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LEAH MEADOWS:
(CU) ‘Yeah I just want to leave this place, something is not right in this place!’
*panting*
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HONEY SMITH:
(MS) ‘I agree with Leah.’
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(CU) Rebecca,leah and grab all the objects on the floor and walk out of the building
to go back home.
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(TLS) The girls are jumping back over the fence and walk back home.
FADE TO BLACK:
Scene 4
EXT. A few days after the night at the abandoned building, the four friends have each
individually had some scary experiences happen to them. They make a group chat on
whatsapp to arrange meeting up to talk about the strange experiences they’ve had in
the past few days. They meet up at Honey Smith’s house. The mood is tense and the
weather is dull and cloudy when they turn up to create an atmosphere of fear.
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LEAH MEADOWS
(CU of the chat) Guys I think I’m going crazy. I keep seeing this dark figure and i feel
like it's following me!
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TREY JOHNSON
(CU of the chat) Yeah guys i'm not going to lie, I’ve been seeing that too and it’s
starting to creep me out.
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HONEY SMITH
11. (CU of the chat) Listen, Rebecca’s on her way to mine now. Trey go and pick up leah
and both of you make your way here too. I’ve got someone coming round to help us
find out what's going on.
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TREY JOHNSON
(CU of the chat) Who is it?
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HONEY SMITH
(CU of the chat) Nevermind about that now. Just get here as soon as possible.
FADE OUT TO FADE IN:
EXT. Trey Johnson has just picked up Leah Meadows and driven them both to meet
Honey Smith and Rebecca Collins at Honey Smith’s house.
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TREY JOHNSON
(Tracking LS) *knocks on the front door*
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(OTSS from Honey POV) “What’s going on then?”
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HONEY SMITH
(OTSS from trey POV) “ Guys i'd like you to meet my good friend Elise Jones”
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(Tracking LS) *Go into living room and see Elise Jones and Rebecca Collins sitting
round the table surrounded by incense and reading cards*
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ELISE JONES
(LS) Come in and take a seat.
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(Tracking MS) *The friends and Elise Jones sitting round the table*
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(CU) *Elise Jones setting out the reading cards in front of each of them*
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LEAH MEADOWS
(MS) What is this all for Honey?
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HONEY SMITH
(MS) She’s here to help us find out what that thing is that’s been following us all.
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LISE JONES
(MS) Okay, now Trey let’s start with one experience you’ve had please.
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TREY JOHNSON
(Tracking MS) *Hesitating* Erm.. Okay well the other day-
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( Flashback of him in his car driving and then he see’s the dark figure in front of his
car and he swerves and then there's nothing there.)
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(MS) *Narrating over the flashback*
I was driving a long minding my own business when all of a sudden i see this
dark figure in the distance, looked like a woman, and she was just standing there
looking at me. As i was getting closer and closer to her she wouldn't move and then
she started running toward the car so I to swerve her and as i looked round. She just
disappeared.
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HONEY SMITH
13. (MS) See I also has an experience like that too. I was in my kitchen washing the
dishes when I heard a strange singing sound coming from outside the window-
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(Flashback of the woman at the window when Honey’s washing the dishes)
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(MS) -opposite me. I look up and there she is staring me in the face. I tried to move
or scream but i was frozen looking her in the face and then she screamed. I dropped
to the floor and when i got back up. She was gone too.
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REBECCA COLLINS
(Tracking MS) Well, she left me a present outside my door step and it really creeped
me out. I showed it to Honey already but I want the rest of you to see it too. Elise
maybe you could tell me what it means?
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*Rebecca collins leaves to go upstairs*
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ELISE JONES
(Tracking MS) No No No! You lot have gotten yourself into something too dark for
me to help you out of! *sighs and looks away*
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HONEY SMITH
(MS) What do you mean Elise? You said you could help us! Please.
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ELISE JONES
(MS) I’m so sorry but this is not something i’ve dealt with for years. I’m out of
resources of what can be done. I think it's time i left. *starts to stand up*
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14. TREY JOHNSON
(LS) *grabs Elise Jones's arm* Wait Elise why do u have to leave so suddenly? You
didn't even tell us what was on the cards?
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ELISE JONES
(MS) Let go of me! It dont matter about anything i’ve brought here. It won't help any
of you now.
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(Tracking LS) *Elise Jones collects her stuff and quickly runs out of the house*
FADE TO BLACK:
Scene 5
EXT. The three friends left sitting at the table feel very confused and anxious whilst
still waiting for Rebecca to come back down stairs as she has taken quite a while. The
weather outside is cold and dark as it has approached nighttime.
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(Tracking MS) *Trey Johnson, Leah Meadows and Honey Smith sitting at the table
confused about what's going on*
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TREY JOHNSON
(MS) Honey what the hell was that about?
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HONEY SMITH
(MS) I don’t know but everythings starting to scare me now! I told you we shouldn't
have messed about with any of this stuff and now loo-
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(Tracking shot looking up to ceiling) *loud banging noise*
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HONEY SMITH
(MS) WHAT WAS THAT?!
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TREY JOHNSON
(MS) I’ve had enough of this! Leah come with me to see what she's doing upstairs
then we’re going. This is just getting stupid now.
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HONEY SMITH
(MS) No Trey, Leah don't leave me here alone!
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LEAH MEADOWS
(MS) You’ll be alright Honey, we're literally going to the bottom of the stairs. Just
tidy up the table and we’ll be right back.
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(Tracking LS) *Trey Johnson and Leah Meadows walk to the bottom of the stairs and
start calling Rebecca’s name*
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LEAH MEADOWS
(MS) Rebecca? Rebecca?
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(LS) *dark figure runs across landing from upstairs*
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LEAH MEADOWS
(MS) *frantically* Trey. What was that?! Get Honey we’re all leaving I don't care.
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16. (Tracking LS) *Trey Johnson walks into the living room to see that Honey is gone*
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LEAH MEADOWS
TREY!!
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(Tracking LS & MS) *Trey Johnson turns quickly and enters the hallway at the
bottom of the stairs to see Rebecca Collins crippled ands slowly crawling down the
stairs with the lights flickering on and off*
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(MS) *Trey Johnson and Leah Meadows scared as they watch Rebecca Collins slowly
approach the bottom of the stairs*
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(CU) *Trey Johnson and Leah Meadows try and open the door but it’s locked*
LEAH MEADOWS
(CU) TREY LOOK OUT!
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(CU) *Rebecca Collins’s face as she jumps on Trey Johnson*
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(LS) *Rebecca Collins jumping and attacking Trey Johnson and Leah Meadows
screaming trying to help him when the lights cut off*
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HONEY SMITH
*From upstairs* Leah. Leah. Are you there?
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17. LEAH MEADOWS
*In the darkness* Trey, Honey’s here i’m going to get her!
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TREY JOHNSON
*In the darkness* NO! Leah wait!
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(LS) *Leah Meadows slowly coming up the stairs*
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LEAH MEADOWS
(LS) Honey? Honey? Where are you?
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(Tracking LS) *Leah Meadows turns toward the mirror at the top of the stairs to see a
dark figure standing behind her*
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LEAH MEADOWS
(Tracking MS) Honey?
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(Tracking MS) *Leah Meadows turns behind her to see the figure is gone*
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(Tracking LS) *Leah Meadows turning back round to face the mirror and the dark
figure is standing right behind her with candle light on the face showing that it’s a
woman*
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(CU) *Leah Meadows screams*
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(LS from downstairs) *Leah Meadows stumbling down the stairs*
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(Tracking LS) *Leah Meadows falling on the floor and getting up to grab Trey
Johnson when he manages to throw Rebecca Collins off onto the shoe-rack*
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TREY JOHNSON
(MS) RUN! RUN! RUN!
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(Tracking LS) *Trey Johnson and Leah Meadows Running into the other room*
FADE TO BLACK:
Scene 6
EXT. Trey Johnson and Leah Meadows have run and hid in the games room
downstairs from Rebecca Collins who attacked him and the dark figure which they
have realised is a woman. They still don’t know where Honey Smith is. The
atmosphere is eerie and very tense as the pair wait for to see what’s going to happen
next. They are currently sitting in darkness holding on to one another.
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(MS) *Trey Johnson and Leah Meadows are sitting on a sofa by the window*
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(Tracking shot of ceiling) *loud banging noises and running footsteps*
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LEAH MEADOWS
(MS) Trey what was that? I’m so scared right now!
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TREY JOHNSON
(MS) I don’t know but it's really hard to see in here.
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LEAH MEADOWS
(MS) I know I know.
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19. TREY JOHNSON
(Tracking LS) *Trey Johnson getting up from the sofa*
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(Tracking LS) I’ll be back in a minuet Leah, I'm going to find a torch or something.
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LEAH MEADOWS
(MS) * panicked* NO! TREY DON’T LEAVE ME PLEASE! *grabs onto Trey’s arm*
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TREY JOHNSON
(Tracking MS) I’ll be right back.
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(MS) *Trey Johnson leans in to kiss Leah Meadows*
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(CU) *Trey Johnson letting go of Leah Meadows hand and walking away*
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(Tracking LS) *Trey johnson slowly finding his way to the kitchen*
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(CU) *Trey Johnson searching through the draw and finding a torch*
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(Tracking LS) *Trey Johnson finding his way back into the games room*
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(LS) *Trey Johnson shines the torch on the sofa area*
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REBECCA COLLINS
(MS) Asmodeus! Asmodeus!
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HONEY SMITH
20. (MS) Asmodeus! Asmodeus!
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(Tracking LS) *He see’s Rebecca Collins, on the right side, and Honey Smith, on the
left side, and Leah Meadows in the middle floating above ground as they whisper a
name to her*
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(LS) *Rebecca Collins, Honey Smith and Leah Meadows all sharply look at Trey
Johnson*
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(CU) *Trey Johnson dropping the torch and the 3 girls whispering ‘Asmodeus’ over
and over*
FADE TO BLACK:
Scene 7
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(LS) *Trey Johnson running down the hallway towards the door*
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(LS) *Three girls walking side by side down the hallway getting closer to Trey
Johnson still whispering ‘Asmodeus’*
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(CU) *Trey Johnson trying to open the front door*
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(MS) *Trey Johnson scared facial expressions*
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(Tracking LS) *The three girls get closer then Trey Johnson swings open the door
and runs to his car*
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(CU) *Trey Johnson opening car door*
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(MS) *Trey Johnson in the car panting*
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(CU) *Key starting in the ignition*
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(Tracking LS) *Trey Johnson’s car speeding off and showing the 3 girls and the dark
figure standing at the door*
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(Tracking MS) *Trey Johnson’s car speeding down a forest road*
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(MS) *Trey Johnson slightly adjusts his mirror and see’s the 3 girls sitting in the back
of the car*
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(Tracking MS) *Trey Johnson turns to look at the road and the dark figure is
standing in front of his car. He swerves.*
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(ZOOM OUT) *Trey Johnson laying with his face down on the steering wheel with
smoke coming from the car and blood running from his face. To the three girls
dancing around the car holding hands and laughing*
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(CU) *The dark figure jumps in front of the camera and screams*
FADE TO BLACK:
THE END.
