This is the first script that we have made in the group. I will then show the second script which is with the corrections that we then made.

1. RIGHT MY WRONGS
By
N. Ahamed
S. Elezi
B. Karrass
L. Hodgson
16/11/2016

2. 16 of November 2016
Scene 1
EXT. The weather is cloudy with dull colours Lela Luxman and Eric
James are walking down the High Street,they are both saying
goodbye to each other by hugging whilst showing that they are
going to miss each other. While Eric James is walking home he gets
a call from Angelica Smith who asks if they could meet up at
Valentines Park.
(LS, MS,OTSS)Emphasises body language and how the main characters
are feeling.
CUT TO
Eric James
(MS)
Today was good, see you soon.
CUT TO:
Lela Luxman
(CU)
Yeah, it was, I’ll call you later.
CUT TO:
Eric James
(OTSS, zoom in) Walks away and goes on phone. Gets text from
Angelica Smith of meeting up.
Fade in from Black:
EXT. The sky is bright and colourful making the mood joyful. Eric
James meets Angelica Smith at the park and then they both sit on a
bench, but Eric James feels nervous and cautious of his
surroundings. Maria Johnson walks past and sees Eric James and
Violet Green sitting next to each other like they are on a date.
Eric James doesn't see Lela Luxman, but she sees them and finds
out that she is getting cheated on.
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(Tracking LS) ​Eric James and Angelica Smith ​ are walking together in
the park towards a bench, the trees in the park are going to have
yellow/orange leaves representing autumn.

3. Lyrics: Could it be you calling me down? (8 Seconds)
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EXT:People are walking past, and ​Lela Luxman also walks past and
sees both Eric James and Angelica Smith on the bench flirting.
(MS,LS)​Eric James and Angelica Smith ​sitting together on the
bench, Lela Luxman walks past with an awkward face as she sees
them, so she then turns back and goes away.
Lyrics: My foolish heart turns at the stars, All that I am is all
that you see
CUT TO:
Lela Luxman
(CU) close expression of her face as she has found out that her
boyfriend is cheating on her. She looks sad and feels like she is
no good.
Lyrics:You don't need nobody else,
CUT TO:
Lela Luxman
(CU) Showing Lela Luxman texting Eric James talking about what she
saw.
Lyrics: and you're putting this all on me,
CUT TO:
Eric James
(OTSS) Eric James is texting to Lela Luxman saying forgive me for
what he has done, but Lela Luxman says no.
Lyrics: forgive me
FADE TO BLACK:

4. Scene 2
INT. Eric James is on his room drinking and feeling guilty and
jealous as he ruined his relationships, the room should look like
a mess to show his state of mind.
​Eric James
(HAS) Eric is going to be on his bed laying down sad thinking
about what he has done and what we wants to take back.
Lyrics:​ ​There's a time and a place for all this, This is not the
place for all this
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(MS) Eric gets up and Texts Lela to come round.
Lyrics:​ ​Is there a reason why you're saying all this
And can we talk about it later?
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Scene 3
EXT: ​The weather is still cloudy emphasising a bad mood as Lela
Luxman is going to Eric’s house to argue about what she saw. As
she is walking her face looks both sad and angry.
(MS, Tracking) Lela Luxman is walking down the street, the sky is
dull giving off a bad feeling, Lela Luxman is wearing blue to show
loyalty.
Lyrics: I've gotta right my wrongs
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5. (OTSS) Lela Luxman is a Eric James’s Door and she knocks the door,
Eric James opens it, cuts to a OTSS of Eric James’s view.
Lyrics: With you is where I belong, You've been down from the go
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(SRS, OTSS, LS) Both are sitting on the bed as Lela Luxman
suddenly takes off a bracelet that Eric James Bought for her when
they were together, Lela Luxman then hands him over the bracelet
and leaves the room.
Lyrics: recognition is what you want, And it's something that I
should know
CUT TO:
Eric James
EXT.Close Up Eric tries calling Lela because he wants to try and
make up with her and apologize
Lyrics: Something that I should know
CUT TO:
Lela Luxman
Lyrics: All the things that you went through, girl I never meant
to put you through it twice
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EXT: Eric James is with his friend and they go out to buy Lela
Luxman’s favorite flowers and chocolate to give her for
forgiveness.

6. (LS, CU) Eric James is buying gifts to give Lela Luxman. ​(MS)
Purchases flowers and chocolates and goes to lela’s house and
leaves the gifts with a note saying ‘i'm sorry’ on the front so
she knows who its from Eric James. ​Eric James is wearing white to
represent he is sorry.
Lyrics: Tell me how can I right my wrongs, ​That's something that I
should know, All the things that we been through, girl I never
meant to put you through it twice, no.
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Scene 4
INT: Lela Luxman is at home and when she is about to go out she
sees the gifts and throws them away.
(CU, MS, Tracking with OTSS)Lela Luxman walks towards the door and
opens it to see the gifts and as she reads the note she goes
towards the bin to throw away the gifts.
Lyrics: Could it be you calling me down? My foolish heart turns at
the stars, All that I am is all that you see, You don't need
nobody else,
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(LS, MS)Eric sees Lela from across the street at long shot angle,
it then moves to a mid shot of Eric facial expressions of being
sad
Lyrics: and you're putting this all on me, forgive me
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Scene 5
(MS, OTSS) Sitting on his bed with his hands on his face
remembering all the good times he shared with lela and regretting
what he has done to her, He’s looking through his phone of
pictures of them two together.

7. Lyrics: I say you don't need nobody else, Feels like you don't got
me so you feel like you've been by yourself
FADE TO BLACK:
(ECU, MS)Eric James goes to Lela Luxman’s house and knocks on the
door to figure things out but as she opens the door, Eric James
sees Lela Luxman’s new boyfriend then leaves.
Lyrics:I've been feeling kinda down myself,I've been going through
it as well
FADE TO BLACK:
EXT: Eric James sees both Lela and Al together laughing in a
restaurant.
(LS, MS, CU) Eric James waits outside the Restaurant for Lela and
Al, then the come out Eric goes to punch Al because how broken
inside he is, but fails and ends up getting pushed away into a
wall.
Lyrics: Girl i guess time will tell, that's the problem, I ain't
got any left, There's somethings I can't help, But you would make
the time for me, Oh isn't that something that I should know?
(LS, MS) Al and Lela are walking away but Lela looks back at Eric
on the floor broken
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8. (MS)back to Lela turning back and walking away with Al.
Lyrics: Something that I should know, All the things that you went
through, girl I never meant to put you through it twice, no.
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Scene 6
INT: Eric is texting Lela and they are going to see each other,
this starts with Eric getting a text from her on the bus.
(MS) Eric is on the bus, feeling sad and lost
Lyrics: Tell me how can I right my wrongsCUT TO:
Lela Luxman
(MS) Lela is texting Eric about coming over to sort things out.
Lyrics: there’s something that i should know, all the things that
we went through,
Eric James
(OTSS) Eric gets the message from Lela and replies
Lyrics: girl I never meant to put you through it twice ,That's
something that I should know,
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EXT:(MS)Eric arrives at Lela’s house and she lets him in.
INT:Eric is wearing blue to show that he had changed and wants to
be loyal, the mood it's dull at first but it starts to get
brighter and more happy, the colors become brighter and Eric and
Lela feel happy again.
(MS,CU)Lela needs Eric back as she misses him,they are talking on
her bed and laughing.

9. Lyrics: Could it be you calling me down? My foolish heart turns at
the stars. All that I am is all that you see,
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(TS)Eric And Lela hug each other.
Lyrics: You don't need nobody else, and you're putting this all on
me, forgive me.
FADE TO WHITE: