Error correction activity 3

1. Error-correction 3
Practising a sport not only will be good for your
health but will it also be an opportunity to disconect
from the daily routine
Practising a sport will not only be good for your
health but it will also be an opportunity to disconnect
from the daily routine
Obviously, not only you would feel healthier,
especially when you have a sedentary lifestyle, but
also can improve your relationship…
Obviously, not only would you feel healthier,
especially when you have a sedentary lifestyle, but
you would also be able to improve your relationship…
They have influenced our society related to
psychological disorders
They have influenced our society in regard to
psychological disorders
It has been proved that practicing sport makes you
feel happier, less stressed and keeps you fit.

2. It has been proved that practicing sport makes you
happier, less stressed and fitter.
Long working hours deprive people from the
involvement in community and family as well as the
appearance of physical drawbacks…
Long working hours deprive people from the
involvement in community and lead to the
appearance of physical drawbacks…
Another alternative is developed activities that enrich
your knowledge
Another alternative is developing activities that
enrich your knowledge
Learning and making physical activity can be both
productive
Learning and doing physical activity can both be
productive
Concretely team sports grow very useful values for
your daily life

3. …team sports in particular, promote very useful
values for your daily life
Nowadays we are living in a stressful world in which
we don’t have to waste our leisure time.
Nowadays we live in a stressful world in which we
can’t waste our precious leisure time.
Besides, you can adapt your training due to an
appointment, meeting etc.
Besides, you can adapt your training according to /
in accordance with an appointment, meeting etc.
It is a popular said that “work is health” but there
can be no doubt that our leisure time it is absolutely
essential
It is a popular saying that / Conventional wisdom has
it that “work is health” but there can be no doubt
that our leisure time is absolutely essential
…but because them, we will enjoy more everything
else

4. …but because of them / thanks to them, we will /
would enjoy everything else more
…it will also make easier to learn a new language or
play a musical instrument
…it will also make learning a new language or playing
a musical instrument easier / it will also make IT
easier to learn a new…
To struggle stress and mental exhaustion, people
need to…
To deal with / cope with / fight against stress and
mental exhaustion, people need to…
It has been a long time since youth spend their
leisure time in bad habits
Youth / teenagers / youngsters has(ve) been wasting
their leisure time in bad habits for a long time / as
long as people can remember

5. I believe is the person analysing their lifestyle who
has to determine what are the most beneficial
activities for themselves.
I believe it is the person analysing their lifestyle who
has to determine what the most beneficial activities
are for them / themselves
Practising some sport is a must if we want to assure
a healthy lifestyle, avoid having a heart attack…
Practising some sport is a must if we want to ensure
a healthy lifestyle, avoid having a heart attack…
…lazy people with no expectations out of work
…lazy people with no expectations outside / apart
from work
…so move your body and gain the invaluable profit
that it provides!
…so move your body and gain the invaluable benefit
/ advantage that it provides!