1. I made sure that the
image is large on the
page and fits well with
the background as this
Comments from target
is what I learnt to do
audience:
“I think the clothes the
through my research of
singer is wearing are very other music magazines.
bright and aye catching,
also suit well with the
white background”
“I don’t like how the
contents title is under
lined”
I had to ensure to
include features and
every month in the
contents page as
these are what
make the contents
page attract the
audience.

2. The artist is looking
directly at the camera
in order to address the
audience clearly.
I have used the blue
shape to support the
alignment of my text so
that I ensure that the
text stays on one side
of the contents page.
Like many music
magazines I have
included the name of
the magazine in the
contents page.

4. I made all the text
black as any other
colours which I use
would clash with the
Comments from
clothes of the artist
target audience:
“The cover story is
and the background.
not obvious”
“I can’t tell which is
the cover story”
“There is still blank
space which should To show the difference
be filled at the between other stories
bottom of the page and my cover story I
as it looks empty” made my cover story of
a bold colour for it to
be noticeable by the
target audience.

5. I have made the
cover story of a
different colour
compared to all
the other text as
feedback shows
that people
cannot notice it.
I also added a
quote from the
artist in order to
fill the white
space at the
bottom of the
page .