1. THE SHADOW
MY SHADOW
1
IFRAH ABDI KHALIF
SHOOTING
(DRAFT 1)
ORANGE
16-02-2014
EXT: TREVE AVENUE – ALLEYWAY
ZOOM OUT: of the watch
The victim pleads for her life as the female whose identity is kept
withheld, holds a paring knife which is relatively small and it has
a slim blade with centre tip and straight cutting edge against the
victim’s neck.
VICTIM
What have I done now? (Crying), I promised that I would stay
clean andI kept my promise.PLEASE do not kill me, I beg, I
beg. I have changed now PLEASE
The killer walks away after killing her victim brutally and as she
walks away the diegetic sounds of her high heels overlaps the siren
of the ambulance passing by...Cut.
2
INT: BEDROOM
Again the camera zooms out of the watch and then a panning shot of
the bedroom, as the camera pans there is a movement in the room,
however the person cannot be seen but the only thing that indicates
that they are the killer is the watch…cut..
3
INT:
POLICE STATION
Asynchronous sound then over the shoulder shot of the two female
having conversation. Panning shot reveals one of the female, whose
identity was kept withheld at the beginning of the film. Who is now
identified as Detective Halimo and her partner Detective Fatima, who
are talking about the case and who they think the killer is.
DETECTIVE FATIMA
This case is getting underneath my skin. You know what?
(Stands up and look at the ceiling proudly) the day we found
this fucker I would personally kill them with my own freaking
hands. (Points her index finger toward detective Halimo) and I
hope you are there to witness it.
2. THE SHADOW
IFRAH ABDI KHALIF
DETECTIVE HALIMO
(Looks to her left) Let’s find this killer first. Have you
narrowed down the suspects? Because we do not want to chase a
freaking shadow forever. It is waste of time.
DETECTIVE FATIMA
Basically I have interviewed all of the suspects accepts his
relatives.
DETECTIVE HALIMO
Is that all you have got for me?
DETECTIVE FATIMA
The kid has a history, do you want me to check his files and
find all of the officers that have arrested him in the past?
DETECTIVE HALIMO
It is not necessary
As both of the detective’s continue to discuss about the case, the
phone rings and detective Fatima looks at the phone with concern
face and picks up the phone.
DETECTIVE FATIMA
Detective Fatima Gaas speaking, what have you got for me?
(Puts the phone down) there has been a homicide in treve
avenue, we have to go?