6. Passive Voice
More wordy sentences, less concise
Topics for the next essay are being
considered by the students.
7. Active Voice
Less wordy sentences, more concise
The students considered topics for the
next essay.
8. Advantages of Active Voice
• Shorter, more direct
• More forceful
• Greater clarity (The
reader knows
immediately who is doing
what.)
• Sharper imagery
9. Which is more effective?
• Stay away from the hot
wire. It can kill you.
• The hot wire should be
avoided. You can be killed
by it.
10. Use passive voice
• When the actor is unknown or
unimportant.
The knife was found beside the body.
• Or when you want to focus on
the receiver of the action more
than on the actor.
The teacher was fired for his political
activism.
find the subject in a "by the..." phrase, or consider carefully who or what is performing the action expressed in the verb. Make that agent the subject of the sentence, and change the verb accordingly. Sometimes you will need to infer the agent from the surrounding sentences which provide context.
Shelia wrote the essay.
The professor left the big, green apples on the table.
Charlene ate the apple.
Many people consider clams a delicacy.