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AS Coursework – Film Openings
Name: EDMUNDS Lucy
Two Minute Film Opening: Aftermath
There is evidence of proficiency in the creative use of many of the technical skills.
Footage:
There is mostly controlled use of the camera throughout with a good variety of shots
and attention to framing. Good attention to mise-en-scene.
Editing:
There are well placed cuts and transitions. Good added titles to show the
conventions of the industry. Editing of the headshots works well with the narrative.
Sound:
The dialogue levels are clear and well recorded. Well-chosen score that builds
tension.
Overall:
A proficient film opening that fits the drama/thriller genre well.
Total 39/60 Level: 3

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Film opening feedback

  • 1. AS Coursework – Film Openings Name: EDMUNDS Lucy Two Minute Film Opening: Aftermath There is evidence of proficiency in the creative use of many of the technical skills. Footage: There is mostly controlled use of the camera throughout with a good variety of shots and attention to framing. Good attention to mise-en-scene. Editing: There are well placed cuts and transitions. Good added titles to show the conventions of the industry. Editing of the headshots works well with the narrative. Sound: The dialogue levels are clear and well recorded. Well-chosen score that builds tension. Overall: A proficient film opening that fits the drama/thriller genre well. Total 39/60 Level: 3