The document provides feedback on a student's two minute film opening titled "Aftermath." It summarizes that the student showed proficiency in technical skills like camerawork, editing, sound, and fitting the genre. Specifically, it noted controlled camerawork with varied shots, well-placed cuts and transitions, clear dialogue and a tension-building score. Overall, the assessor found it to be a proficient opening that fit the drama/thriller genre.

1. AS Coursework – Film Openings
Name: EDMUNDS Lucy
Two Minute Film Opening: Aftermath
There is evidence of proficiency in the creative use of many of the technical skills.
Footage:
There is mostly controlled use of the camera throughout with a good variety of shots
and attention to framing. Good attention to mise-en-scene.
Editing:
There are well placed cuts and transitions. Good added titles to show the
conventions of the industry. Editing of the headshots works well with the narrative.
Sound:
The dialogue levels are clear and well recorded. Well-chosen score that builds
tension.
Overall:
A proficient film opening that fits the drama/thriller genre well.
Total 39/60 Level: 3