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A Writer’s Paintbrush: Participle Phrases Inspired by Harry Noden
Writer as Artist ,[object Object],[object Object]
[object Object],[object Object]
Telling: ,[object Object]
Showing ,[object Object]
So what’s the difference? ,[object Object],[object Object]
So how do I show, not tell? ,[object Object],[object Object],[object Object]
What is a Participle? ,[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object]
Participle Phrases ,[object Object],[object Object],[object Object]
Earnest Hemingway uses participles ,[object Object]
Some student-written examples: ,[object Object],[object Object]
[object Object],[object Object]
[object Object],[object Object]
Use participle phrases to describe these scenes.
 
 
 
 
For more practice: ,[object Object]

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