writing exercises

1. The mainpointsmentionedinboththe readingandthe lecture are the modelsandpredictionsfor
global warming and the discrepancy betwen them.As a group of scientist from governmentssays
that the evidence collected by computer models and data from satellites shows and increase of
temperature inthe airandthe ocean.------------- increaseof the sealevel andlessCO2scapingfrom
the atmosphere,butthat these ishelpby natural cyclesin nature like the phenomenaof the Niño
that increase the temperature and the Niña that lowers it down and so that were are not bad
compare to models,butinthe otherhandscientistcontradictandquestionthe resultclaimingthat
the existance of evidencethatdoesnotgowiththe model orthatisdifferentfromthe governments
isenoughto claimthat we can not take themfor granted,for example theysaythatmodelsdonot
simulate clouds correctly, that satellites masures of temperature are not correct, or that
temperature inoceanvary fromthe surface to the water underit and that thisfacts are not being
taken in consideration and so more has to be taken in consideration before giving an official state
of the global warming conditions.
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Exercise pg 94
The lecture speaksof three mainpoints,Tobeginwith, human remains thatwere foundclose to
Stonehenge are knownfor200 years. IT IS WELL KNOWN THAT IN Stonehenge SEREVERAL
HUMAN REMIANS WERE FOUND.
Secondly in contrastto what isstatedin the article,the blue stonesfoundinthisplace had
require alot of efforttobe broughtfromfar. The professorcast the doubtthat thissite might
have differentpurposesbutburial. Inaddition,the blue stoneshave demonstratedtheir
acoustical properties.
The professorsuggestedthatthe reasonspreviouslyexplainedprovethe factsthatde
Features.
Secondthat the blue stoneswhere broughtfromotherplaces andthatmakingsucheffortmust
have a differentporpusethanjusta burial place and thirththat thisblue stoneshave acustical
caracteristics. These pointare mentionto suggestthatthese place mighthave beenusedformany
otherritual than justburial.Thispointsare mentiontosuggestthatthe structure and the
caracteristics of the stonesgive place tothingthat thisplace was use formany otherritual,like
healing.Giventhe caracteristicsof the blue stonesplusthe factthatmany little picesof them

2. where foundall aroundthe place suggestthatpeople mayhave gone there togainhealthandthat
the bodiesfoundwhere justpeople thatdie intheirsearchforhealth.
IT HAS HELPED ME TO IMPROVEMY WRITING,FLUENCY AND CLARITY
GET THE IDEASACROSS BE ASSERTIVE
In mycase I prefertocommunicate byemail.I Have useDall of there waysof course,but I found
quite entertainingandcharming towrite tocommunicate.And alsoithelpsme bettertoexpress
withclaritywhatI want to say. Havingthe time to thinkwhatIm goingto say helpsme touse a
vocabularythatI may not use whenImtalkingto someone eitherface toface or ina phone call.
Alsoif Im angryI can have the time to chill OUT and TO writingdownyourthoughtsmayhelpyou
to relax or andone thingthat I like the mostisto be romantic.Writinggivesme the chance to
expressmy filingsFEELINGSmore thanwhenImtalking soif I wantto say somethingmeaningful
to my girlfriend,toarelative orto a close friendIhave discoveredthatiseasiertoexpressmy
filingwithall the wordsthatI can thinkof. AndI thinkthat itis alsobetterforthe otherperson.
Havingsomethingwrittengivesyouthe oportunety toreaditas manytimesasyou wantor to
readit inyour free time.Ithas happenedtome thatif I want to talkto someone the otherperson
and I firsthave sosettle a time thatwork forboth andwhen youo the otherpersonare verybussy
it mightbe hart TO agree in date.But if youhave the letterortextyoucan read itwheneveryou
want. EventoughIadmire and Imthankful forthe otherwaySwe can communicate forexamplede
video-callsgive usthe chance tosee people thatmaylife inothercountriesorevencontinent,but
writingforme,has an special magicwhenusingit.
Exercise pg 104-105