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PSY326 PSY326: Research Methods (COL2004A)
Steven Schneider
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Casey, please see the feedback within your paper and in the
scoring rubric.
Describe the chosen research topic. You made a good start, but
did not fully address all the below parts detailed in the
instructions and grading criteria.
Remember, come up with a specific subject you want to study?
In other words, what about your topic do you want to study?
What is it about the topic that
interests you the most?
Evaluate how each article relates to your topic.
Important: I found that your paper has some parts that are

similar to your Turnitin report and are not in your own words.
Even more important, by not citing and
quoting your sources in correct APA format, it can be
considered plagiarized. Please work on avoiding copying from
your sources. You can't earn credit for
plagiarized material. Please see what I attached below. It will
help explain the grade you received.
Please work on correcting the writing errors throughout your
paper. See the examples I gave.
Carefully review the Grading Rubric (Links to an external site.)
for the criteria that will be used to evaluate your assignment.
Please let me know if you have any questions,
Dr. S
( 0.64 / 1.00) Describes the Chosen Research Topic
Below Expectations - Attempts to describe the research topic;
however, significant details are missing and unclear.
Comments:
Can you take what you started and come up with a specific
subject you want to study? In other words, what about your
topic do you want to study? What is it
about the topic that interests you the most?
( 0.64 / 1.00) Evaluates how Each Article Relates to the Topic
Below Expectations - Attempts to evaluate the relevance of the
articles; however, does not include evidence that supports the
position, and/or significant details
are missing.
Comments:
While you discussed what was in these articles, you did not

provide an evaluation of how useful each article would be in
studying your topic.
( 0.32 / 0.50) Written Communication: Control of Syntax and
Mechanics
Below Expectations - Fails to display basic comprehension of
syntax or mechanics, such as spelling and grammar. Written
work contains major errors which
distract the reader.
Comments:
Some of this paper is copied from your sources.
( 0.16 / 0.25) Written Communication: APA Formatting
Below Expectations - Fails to exhibit basic knowledge of APA
formatting. There are frequent errors, making the layout
difficult to distinguish as APA.
( 0.22 / 0.25) Written Communication: Page Requirement
Proficient - The length of the paper is nearly equivalent to the
required number of correctly formatted pages.
( 1.76 / 2.00) Written Communication: Resource Requirement
Proficient - Uses the required number of scholarly sources to
support ideas. All sources on the reference page are used and
cited correctly within the body of the
assignment.
Overall Score: 3.74 / 5.00
Overall Grade: 3.74
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Running Head: POSTTRAMAUTIC STRESS DISORDER
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Posttraumatic Stress Disorder
Casey O'Neill
PSY326: Research Methods
Instructor: Steven Schneider
Ashford University
Date submitted: 26th Jan, 2020
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POSTTRAMAUTIC STRESS DISORDER 2

People who have posttraumatic stress disorder (PTSD) reports a
higher level of
dissatisfaction across dynamic life domains such as
occupational functioning, social, and
physical health functioning. Previous research evidence asserts
that quality of the life of those
suffering from PTSD improves with tandem with the signs
enhancement during both
pharmacological and psychological treatment. Nonetheless, a lot
of the study is mostly funded on
the quality of life including the mental as well as physical
health quality of life evaluated by
measures including short form health survey. Personal
wellbeing is popularly referred to as the
subjective dimension of the quality of life.
Besides, physical as well as mental health domain, the view of
personal welling relates to
the range of dimension such as perception of an individual
standard of living, quality of personal
relationship as well as life achievements. Other determinants
includes perceived safety, future
security as well as community engagement.
Additionally, the concept of the personal wellbeing assumes the
possibilities that a person

may thrive instead of just lacking disability. More so, there
remains absence of the study that has
applied measures touching on a broad range of domains for
personal wellbeing in treatment
of the individuals abstaining treatment from PTSD including
relationship satisfaction and
perceived safety among other factors (Berle et al. 2018).
Most of the studies that has been investigating changes taking
place after PTSD treatment
on life satisfaction as well as personal wellbeing have primarily
focused on a particular including
spiritual wellbeing. Understanding the process of PSTD
treatment is for instance there is also an
increasing evidence that holds symptomatic improvement
increases following the treatment
however it is not clear if this applies to the personal wellness as
well (Berle et al. 2018). The
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1. reports
Spelling error [Steven
Schneider]
2. higher level of
dissatisfaction across
dynamic life domains such
as occupational
functioning, social, and
physical health functioning.
Cite your source. [Steven
Schneider]

3. Previous research
evidence asserts that
quality of the life of those
suffering from PTSD
improves with tandem with
the signs enhancement
during both
pharmacological and
psychological treatment.
Cite this research. [Steven
Schneider]
4. What does this mean?
[Steven Schneider]
5. a lot of the study
What study? [Steven
Schneider]
6. Personal wellbeing is
popularly referred to as the

subjective dimension of the
quality of life.
Schneider]
7. Besides, physical as well
as mental health domain,
What are these domains and
what is their significance?
[Steven Schneider]
8. Other determinants
includes perceived safety,
future
security as well as
community engagement.
Schneider]
9. the concept of the personal wellbeing assumes the
possibilities that

a person may thrive instead of just lacking disability.
Used the words or ideas of others without properly citing the
source; did not
use quotation as required by the APA; in addition, this is not in
your own
words and can be considered to be plagiarized. [Steven
Schneider]
10. there remains absence of the study
What does this mean? [Steven Schneider]
11. Most of the studies
Are you sure?
Cite your source. [Steven Schneider]
12. Understanding the process of PSTD treatment is for instance
there
is also an
Wording and sentence structure error. This makes it difficult to
understand
what you intended to say. [Steven Schneider]
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purpose of this investigation was to find out if a 4 week
residential group treatment of PTSD is
related to the improvement of personal wellbeing together with
the symptoms of PTSD.
The study also holds that the level of wellbeing in people with
PTSD is always low and
the treatment should not focus on PTSD symptomatic treatment
alone. The focus should be on
their general life and wellbeing. The journal also holds that the
future study or research should
focus on most effective means of improving personal wellbeing
which might be enhancing
symptoms or emphasizing on the approaches which has a
separate focus.
The 21st century started in array of peace and hope. The
worldwide prosperity was
believed to start with the new millennium and more so few
years ago most people in the world
spoke primarily off peace. However, today majority of world
population are in fear and anxiety
about the self as well as the neighbor. Socio political event has
displayed a shadow of uneasiness

bout the security affecting people at both societal and personal
level. For instance Greg, a
business man in California took a flight and he barely survived
in the eventful incident of 9/11.
Later Greg tried to contact his anxious family who were in hock
and denial. The event affected
Greg and up today he does not travel frequently. Traumatic
incidents are awfully stressful. The
kind of stress that are related to the traumatic incidents
precipitates a spectrum of both physio-
pathological as well as psycho emotional outcome. At its
highest point the response is diagnosed
as psychiatric disorder.
PTSD is the psychiatric condition or disorder which result from
experience or witnessing
of the life threatening event including terrorist attacks, military
combat, natural disaster, violent
crime as well as abuse and serious accident among many other
events. Individual; suffering from
PTSD in most cases relieve the experience by the help of
flashback and nightmares among other
forms (Iribarren et al. 2005). Most of PTSD patients report
difficulty in sleeping at with time the
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1. purpose of this
investigation was to find
out if a 4 week residential
group treatment of PTSD is
related to the improvement
of personal wellbeing
together with the symptoms
of PTSD.
Wording and sentence
structure error. This makes it
difficult to understand what
you intended to say. [Steven
Schneider]

2. The 21 st century started
in array of peace and hope.
The worldwide prosperity
was
believed to start with the
new millennium and more
so few years ago most
people in the world spoke
primarily off peace.
Used the words or ideas of
others without properly citing
the source; did not use
quotation as required by the
APA; in addition, this is not in
your own words and can be
considered to be plagiarized.
[Steven Schneider]
3. However, today majority

of world population are in
fear and anxiety
about the self as well as the
neighbor. Socio political
event has displayed a
shadow of uneasiness bout
the security affecting
people at both societal and
personal level.
Used the words or ideas of
others without properly citing
the source; did not use
quotation as required by the
APA; in addition, this is not in
your own words and can be
[Steven Schneider]
4. Traumatic incidents are awfully stressful. The

kind of stress that are related to the traumatic incidents
precipitates a
spectrum of both physio-
pathological as well as psycho emotional outcome. At its
highest point
the response is diagnosed as psychiatric disorder.
Used the words or ideas of others without properly citing the
source; did not
use quotation as required by the APA; in addition, this is not in
your own
words and can be considered to be plagiarized.
5. by the help of flashback and nightmares
Wording or spelling error. [Steven Schneider]
grow detached and this accelerated by the associated conditions
such as substance use, problem
of memory and cognition and depression. With time the disorder
result to the impairment of the
ability to relate or w function in the social life leading to

occupational instability, difficulty in
parenting, marital problems as well as divorce and family
discord. The condition can become
severe leading to the victim committing suicide.
Posttraumatic disorder happens to be a primary mental condition
or illness and it is
increasingly becoming a public health problem
(Ghaffarzadegan, Ebrahimvandi, & Jalali, 2016).
According to the article besides disorders related to the PTSD
among the military and veteran
personnel and the recent improvement in diagnosis and
treatment little is known in regard to the
policies initiated for prevention of this disorder.
The knowledge related to the PTSD has improved over the last
forty years but
implementation of policies to reduce or minimize this cases is
limited. In most cases coming up
with the policies faces a lot of barrier because the challenge of
PTSD is taken as a single
organizational challenge, however this is a fallacy because it’s a
multi organizational challenge.
For instance, the patient’s family, community, colleague,
neighborhoods and employers are

always involved in this tragedy. The problem is always complex
due to the long delays between
the cause and the effects.
Conclusively, military personnel are always seen to be strong
people and therefore, they
are always served the last. However, the sector of military is
challenging this people including
the veteran seem to have had awful experiences. Most of them
are always reluctant to share
leading to PTSD after a traumatic event including military
combat.
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1. grow detached and this
accelerated by the

associated conditions such
as substance use, problem
of memory and cognition
and depression.
Wording and sentence
structure error. This makes it
difficult to understand what
you intended to say. [Steven
Schneider]
2. With time the disorder
result to the impairment of
the ability to relate or w
function in the social life
leading to occupational
instability, difficulty in
parenting, marital problems
as well as divorce and
family discord. The

condition can become
severe leading to the victim
committing suicide.
Schneider]
3. Posttraumatic disorder
happens to be a primary
mental condition or illness
and it is
increasingly becoming a
public health problem
Did not use quotation as
required by the APA; in
addition, this is not in your
own words and can be
[Steven Schneider]
4. The knowledge related to

the PTSD has improved
over the last forty years but
implementation of policies
to reduce or minimize this
cases is limited. In most
cases coming up with the
policies faces a lot of
barrier because the
challenge of PTSD is taken
as a single
organizational challenge,
however this is a fallacy
because it’s a multi
organizational challenge.
Schneider]
5. Conclusively,
What does this mean?

[Steven Schneider]
6. this people
Wording or spelling error. [Steven Schneider]
7. including
the veteran seem to have had awful experiences. Most of them
are
always reluctant to share
leading to PTSD after a traumatic event including military
combat.
References
Berle, D., Hilbrink, D., Russell-Williams, C., Kiely, R.,
Hardaker, L., Garwood, N., ... & Steel,
Z. (2018). Personal wellbeing in posttraumatic stress disorder
(PTSD): association with
PTSD symptoms during and following treatment. BMC
psychology, 6(1), 7.
Ghaffarzadegan, N., Ebrahimvandi, A., & Jalali, M. S. (2016).
A dynamic model of post-

traumatic stress disorder for military personnel and veterans.
PloS one, 11(10).
Iribarren, J., Prolo, P., Neagos, N., & Chiappelli, F. (2005).
Post-traumatic stress disorder:
evidence-based research for the third millennium. Evidence-
Based Complementary and
Alternative Medicine, 2(4), 503-512.
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