Storyboard improvemnt final finished

Shot
No.
1
The artist is sitting on her bed flicking through magazines
which you can see is full of celebrities and models.
Type of shot, movement
and angle.
• High angle shot
• midshot
Dialogue. Sound. Setting. Colour. Lighting. Mise-en-
scene.
• Low key lighting – lamp on
• In her bedroom
• Casual, dark clothing – jeans/long sleeved top
• Minimal make-up
• Ambient sounds
Frame
duration
3
seconds
Editing notes
Quick Cut
Shot
No.
2
Artist will then be sitting on her bed scrolling through
Instagram looking at celebrities and models.
and angle.
• High angle shot
• Close up
• Over the
shoulder
scene.
• Low key lighting
• In the bedroom
• Casual, dark clothing
• Minimal make-up
• Ambient sounds
Frame
duration
2
seconds

Editing notes
Quick cut
Shot
No.
3
4
Artist picks up all the letters that came in the post and
flicks through them until the one with her name is on it.
It will cut back to her sitting on the bed flicking through
magazines which she will then slam the magazines down
on her bed.
and angle.
• High angle
• closeup
• High angle shot
• Midshot
• Side shot
scene.
• Casual clothing
• Music
• Natural lighting
• In her bedroom
• Casual, dark clothing – jeans/long sleeved top
• Minimal make-up
• Ambient sounds
Frame
duration
2
seconds
2
seconds
Editing notes
Cut
Shot
No.
5
6
The artist will then walk over to her dressing table and sit
down and look at herself.
She will open the letter which has her
name on it.
and angle.
• Tracking
• Longshot
• Close up
• High angle
scene.
• In her bedroom
• Casual, dark, clothing
• Minimal make-up
• Music
• Music
Frame
duration
2
seconds
1
second

Editing notes
cut
Shot
No.
7
She will then mess with her hair and get annoyed with it;
looking at herself in her reflection.
and angle.
• Over the shoulder
shot
• High angle
scene.
• Casual clothing
• Minimal make-up
• music
Frame
duration
2
seconds
Editing notes
Quick Cut
Shot
No.
8
‘Brush your hair’ She will then brush her hair, looking at
her reflection in the mirror.
and angle.
• Side shot
• High angle
scene.
• Casual clothing
• Minimal make-up
• Props - hair brush/mirror
• music
2
seconds

Editing notes
Quick cut
Shot
No.
9
She will have the letter in her hand and her hand will be
shaking.
and angle.
• Close up
• High angle
scene.
• Music
• Casual clothing
• Nail varnish
Frame
duration
2
seconds
Editing notes

Shot
No.
10
She will then be scrolling through Instagram again whilst
sitting on her bed.
and angle.
• High angle shot
• Midshot
• Over the
shoudler
scene.
• Low key lighting – lamp only
• in the bedroom
• Minimal make-up
• music
Frame
duration
2
seconds
Editing notes
Quick cut
Shot
No.
11
She will be back sitting at the dressing table looking at her
self – pulling her hair through her fingers and then putting
her head in her hands.
and angle.
• Over the
shoulder shot
• Slight high angle
scene.
• in the bedroom
• Minimal make-up
music
Frame
duration
2
seconds
Editing notes
Cut

Shot
No.
12
A close up of her crying (tears coming down her face) will
be shown.
and angle.
• High angle
• Closeup
scene.
• Minimal makeup
• music
Frame
duration
1
second
Editing notes
Cut
Shot
No.
13
14
Artist and her friends are walking through the park to try
and take her mind of the situation.
She will then be sitting on the sofa watching the TV and a
beauty advert comes on.
and angle.
• Longshot /
midshot
• Over the
shoulder shot
• High angle
• Midshot
• Over the
scene.
• Park
• Music
• Casual clothing
• Casual clothing
• Minimal make up
Frame
duration
2
seconds
2
seconds

shoulder shot
• High angle
• music
Editing notes
Cut
Shot
No.
15
Her and her friends are walking back in the park.
and angle.
• Straight angle
• Close up
scene.
• Park
• Music
• Casual clothing
Frame
duration
One
second
Editing notes
Shot
No.
16
The artist will then walk over to her wardrobe and pick out
her prom dress and holds it up infront of her.
and angle.
• Midshot
• High angle
• Tracking
• Side shot to over
the shoulder
scene.
• She will be wearing casual clothing but pick
out a prom dress.
• Minimal make-up
• Bedroom
• music
Frame
duration
3
seconds

Editing notes
Cut
Shot
No.
17
Artist and her friends walking in the park again; laughing
and encouraging her.
and angle.
• Over the
shoulder shot
• Midshot
• Dialogue. Sound. Setting. Colour. Lighting.
Mise-en-scene.
• casual clothing
• Park
• Music
Frame
duration
2
seconds
Editing notes
Cut
Shot
No.
18
She will then throw her prom dress on the floor.
and angle.
• Midshot
scene.
• casual clothing
• Minimal make-up
• Bedroom
• music
Frame
duration
1
second

Editing notes
Cut
Shot
No.
19
20
Artist and her friend will be chatting in the coffee shop.
She will then be sat at her dressing table and will start
doing her make- up.
and angle.
• Side shot
• Midshot
• Over the
shoulder shot
• High angle
• Midshot
scene.
• Café
• Casual clothing
• Music
• Casual clothing
• Make-up
• Bedroom
• Low-key lighting –lamp only
• music
Frame
duration
1
second
2
seconds
Editing notes
Cut
Shot
No. ‘Without falling down, down, down.’ When these lyrics
are said, she will look up at the camera.
and angle.
scene.
Frame
duration

21
• Close up
• Straight angle
• Only a little bit of make-up
• Low-key lighting
• Bedroom
• music
2
seconds
Editing notes
Cut
Shot
No.
22
23
Artist and her friends are walking through the park and
they are reassuring her in a little circle.
She will walk over and step onto some scales.
and angle.
• Slight close up
• Slight High angle
• Longshot
• Over the
shoulder shot
• High angle
• tracking
scene.
• Music
• Casual clothing
• park
• Bedrrom/bathroom
• Minimal make-up
• Casual clothing
• music
Frame
duration
2
seconds
2
seconds
Editing notes
Cut
Shot
No.
24
Close up of the scales so we are able to see how much she
weights.
and angle.
• Extreme close up
• High angle
scene.
• Scales
• Music
• Bedroom / bathroom
Frame
duration
1 second

Editing notes
Cut
Shot
No.
25
26
Tears falling down her face.
She will be looking at herself in a long mirror and pinch
her fat/stomach.
and angle.
• Close up
• Side shot
• Longshot
• Over the
shoulder shot
• High angle
scene.
• Music
• Music
• Casual clothing / vest top
• Low key lighting- lamp
• Bedroom
Frame
duration
1 second
2seconds
Editing notes
Cut
Shot
No.
27
Artist is rehearsing in her bedroom.
and angle.
• Midshot
• High angle
scene.
• Bedroom
• Microphone
• Casual clothing
Frame
duration
2
seconds

• Music
Editing notes
cut
Shot
No.
28 She will then fall to the floor upset.
and angle.
• High angle
• Midshot
scene.
• Bedroom
• Music
• Casual clothing
• Minimal make-up
Frame
duration
2
seconds
Editing notes
Cut
Shot
No. Rehearsing on the stage.
and angle.
• Longshot
• High angle
scene.
• Music
Frame
duration
2seconds

29
• casual clothing
• Bedroom
Editing notes
Cut
Shot
No.
30
Watching beauty tutorials on youtube in her bedroom. Type of shot, movement
and angle.
• Over the
shoulder shot
• High angle
• Slight close up
scene.
• Casual clothing
• Music
Frame
duration
2seconds
Editing notes
Cut
Shot
No.
31
Goes back to rehearsals in her bedroom and she gets
frustrated. She’s holding the lyrics in her hand.
and angle.
• High angle
• Midshot
scene.
• Music
• Bedroom
• Casual clothing
• Microphone and lyrics
Frame
duration
2
seconds

Editing notes
Cut
Shot
No.
32
Tears running down the artists face again.
and angle.
• Close up
• Straight angle
scene.
• Music
• Casual clothing
Frame
duration
1
second
Editing notes
Cut
Shot
No.
Back in the coffee shop and the artist is talking to her
friends.
and angle.
• Side shot
• midshot
scene.
• Coffee shop
• Casual clothing
Frame
duration
2
seconds

33
• music
Editing notes
Cut
Shot
No.
34
Rehearsing on the stage with a mic.
and angle.
• Close up
• slight high angle
scene.
• Music
• Stage
• Casual clothing
• Microphone
Frame
duration
2
second
Editing notes
Cut
Shot
No.
35
She will then cut back to her doing her hair and looking at
her self in the mirror with wet hair – so shes just had a
shower.
and angle.
• Over the
shoulder shot
• High angle
scene.
• Music
• Minimal make-up
Frame
duration
2
seconds

• Midshot
Editing notes
Cut
Shot
No.
36
The artist will then pick up a box of pills of her bedroom
shelf.
and angle.
• Close – up
• High angle
scene.
• Pills
• Music
• Bedroom
Frame
duration
2
seconds
Editing notes
Cut
Shot
No.
37
It will cut back to the artist infront of the mirror drying her
hair.
and angle.
• Side shot
• High angle
• Close up
scene.
• Music
• Bedroom
Frame
duration
2
seconds

Editing notes
Cut
Shot
No.
38
The artist will be lying on the floor.
and angle.
• High angle
• Midshot
• Camera will pan
from toe to head
scene.
• Casual clothing
• Bedroom
• Music
Frame
duration
2
second
Editing notes
Cut
Shot
No.
39
40
The artist will then tip the pills onto her hands.
Artist will get given a note from her friends in the coffee
shop which will read ‘youre beautiful’ or
something like that.
and angle.
• Close-up
• High angle
• Slight mid shot
• Straight angle
scene.
• Casual clothing
• Bedroom
• Music
• Water and pills
• Coffee shop
• Casual clothing
• Music
Frame
duration
2
seconds
2
seconds

Editing notes
Shot
No.
41
42
The artist will then take the pills and she will swallow them
with water.
Doing her make-up (mascara/blusher)
and angle.
• Close up
• High angle
• High angle
• Close-up
• Side shot
scene.
• Casual clothing
• Music
• Casual clothing
• Bedroom
• music
Frame
duration
2
seconds
2
seconds
Editing notes
Cut
Shot
No.
There will be a shot of her looking down at the floor.
and angle.
• Close up
scene.
• Casual clothing
Frame
duration
2
seconds

43
• Bedroom
• music
Editing notes
Shot
No.
44
. She will then wipe her make-up off frustrated with
herself; looking at her reflection in the mirror.
and angle.
• Midshot
• High angle
scene.
• Bedroom
• Casual clothing
• Low key lighting – lamp
• Music
Frame
duration
1
second
Editing notes
cut
Shot
No.
45
Brushing her teeth
and angle.
• Side shot
• Close up
scene.
• Bathroom
• Music
• Casual clothing
Frame
duration
2
seconds

Editing notes
cut
Shot
No.
46
Shot of the note that he friends gave her. Type of shot, movement
and angle.
• Close up
• High angle
scene.
• Music
Frame
duration
1
second
Editing notes

Shot
No.
47
At this point she will have her gym kit on and she will be
looking at her stomach.
and angle.
• Over the
shoulder shot
• High angle
scene.
• Bedroom
• Music
• Gym kit
Frame
duration
1
second
Editing notes
cut
Shot
No.
48
49
Artist is on the stage rehearsing again.
She will place her feet into her gym trainers which her gym
bag will be placed next too and she does that a letter gets
posted through the door.
and angle.
• Midshot
• High angle
• midshot
• high angle angle
scene.
• Stage
• Music
• Casual clothing
• By house front door
• Music
Frame
duration
2
seconds
2
seconds

Editing notes
cut
Shot
No.
50
51
Rehearsing in her bedroom and gets
annoyed again.
She will then walk into the gym and walk over to the bike.
and angle.
• Close up
• High angle
• Longshot
• Tracking
• Slight low angle
scene.
• Bedroom
• Music
• Mic and lyrics
• Gym
• Gym kit
• Music
Frame
duration
2
seconds
2
seconds
Editing notes
cut
Shot Type of shot, movement Dialogue. Sound. Setting. Colour. Lighting. Mise-en- Frame

No.
52
It will show her all sweaty on the bike – wiping her sweat
of her forehead.
and angle.
• Close up
• Straight angle
scene.
• Gym
• Gym kit
• Music
duration
2
seconds
Editing notes
Shot
No.
53
She will open the letter that came in the post and it will be
of her friends saying something along the lines of ‘you can
do this ‘
and angle.
• Close up
• High angle
scene.
• Music
Frame
duration
2
seconds
Editing notes
cut

Shot
No.
54
The artist will then run on the running track.
and angle.
• Longshot
scene.
• Natural day light
• Music
• Gym kit
Frame
duration
2
seconds
Editing notes
Cut
Shot
No.
55
56
Artist rehearsing on the stage.
She will then be swimming doing frontcrawl.
and angle.
• Longshot
• High angle
• Midshot
• High angle
scene.
• Music
• Mic
• Casual clothing
• Swimming costume
• Swimming pool
• Music
Frame
duration
1
second
2
seconds
Editing notes
cut

Shot
No.
57
58
Back looking at magazines of models etc.
It will go back to her at the end of the running track –
collapsing/lying on the floor.
and angle.
• High angle
• Close up
• Close up
• High angle
• Pan from head to
toe
scene.
• Magazine
• Music
• Low keylighting
• Casual clothing
• Gym kit
• Running track
• Music
Frame
duration
1
second
2
seconds.
Editing notes
Cut
Shot
No.
59
At the end of the swimming pool taking a swig of water.
and angle.
• Close up
scene.
• Swimming pool
Frame
duration
2
seconds

60 Artist and her friends are sat on her bed.
• Longshot
• High angle
• Music
• Water bottle
• Bedroom
• Music
• Casual clothing
2
second
Editing notes
cut
Shot
No.
61
In the changing rooms – looking in the mirror at her
relfection.
and angle.
• Over the
shoulder shot
• Straight angle
scene.
• Swimming changing rooms
• Music
Frame
duration
1
second
Editing notes
Cut
Shot
No.
62
Rehearsing on the stage. Type of shot, movement
and angle.
• High angle
• Mid shot
scene.
• Music
Frame
duration
1
second

• Casual clothing
Editing notes
Cut
Shot
No.
63
64
Artist and her friends are talking on her bed; they give her
a photoframe.
She will be sat at the dinner table with her family talking –
she will be staring at her food
and angle.
• Close up
• High angle
• Long shot
• High angle
scene.
• Bedroom
• Music
• Dining table
• Casual clothing
• music
Frame
duration
2
seconds
1
second
Editing notes
cut
Shot
No. It will then cut back to her in her bedroom sitting next to
and angle.
scene.
Frame
duration

65
her door crying – tugging her hair.
• High angle
• Mid shot
• Music
• Bedroom
• Casual clothing
1
second
Editing notes
cut
Shot
No.
66
It will then cut back to her sitting at the dining table with
her food in front of her and she will then stand up and
leave.
and angle.
• Long shot
• High angle
scene.
• Dining table
• Casual clothing
Frame
duration
2
seconds
Editing notes
cut
Shot
No.
67
Shot of the photoframe
and angle.
• Close up
• High angle
scene.
• Music
• Low keylighting
Frame
duration
2
seconds

68
She will walk into the toilet and lean down and then will
start gagging.
• High angle
• Mid shot
• Over the
shoulder shot
• Tracking
• Music
• Casual clothing
• Bathoom
2
seconds
Editing notes
cut
Shot
No.
69 She will be crying wiping the tears away.
and angle.
• Close up
• High angle
scene.
• Minimal make-up
• Music
Frame
duration
1
second

Editing notes
cut
Shot
No.
70
She will then brush her teeth and look up in the mirror.
and angle.
• Side shot
• Close up
scene.
• Bathroom
• Music
Frame
duration
2
seconds
Editing notes
Shot
No.
71
Rehearsing in her bedroom again.
and angle.
• Midshot
• High angle
scene.
• Bedroom
• Casual clothing
• Music
Frame
duration
2
seconds
Editing notes

cut
Shot
No.
72
Brushing her hair in front of a mirror
and angle.
• Side shot
• High angle
scene.
• Bedroom
• Casual clothing
• music
Frame
duration
1
second
Editing notes
cut
Shot
No.
73
74
Sitting in the living room – fed up.
Back in the bedroom with her friends talking and laughing.
and angle.
• Long shot
• High angle
• Close up
• High angle
scene.
• Living room
• Music
•
• Bedroom
Frame
duration
1
second
1
second

• Music
Editing notes
cut
Shot
No.
75
She will be crying.
Type of shot, movement and
angle.
• Close up
• High angle
Dialogue. Sound. Setting. Colour. Lighting. Mise-
en-scene.
• Bedroom
• Music
• Casual clothing
Frame
duration
1 second
Editing notes
cut
Shot
No.
76
She will then be brushing her teeth
angle.
• Medium close up
• high angle
en-scene.
• Music
• Bathroom
Frame
duration
1 second

• Casual clothing
Editing notes
cut
Shot
No.
77
78
Rehearsing on the stage.
A close up of her picking the pills up of her shelf
angle.
• Close up
• High angle
• Close up
• High angle
en-scene.
• Stage
• Music
• Casual clothing
• Bedroom
• Music
Frame
duration
2 seconds
1 second
Editing notes
cut

Shot
No.
79
She will be sat in front of the mirror putting her make up
on.
and angle.
• Side shot
• High angle
scene.
• Bedroom
• Music
• Casual clothing
Frame
duration
2
seconds
Editing notes
cut
Shot
No.
80
Cut back to rehearsals in her bedroom
and angle.
• Close up
• High angle
scene.
• Bedroom
• Music
• Casual clothing
Frame
duration
1
second
Editing notes
cut
Shot
No. Brushing her teeth again.
and angle.
scene.
Frame
duration

81 • Close up
• Straight angle
• music 1
second
Editing notes
cut
Shot
No.
82
She will pick up the prom dress and will hold it up against
her.
and angle.
• Over the
shoulder shot
• Midshot
scene.
• Bedroom
• Lighting is getting lighter – little daylight
through the blinds
• Music
• Casual clothing – wearing
• Holding up – a nice dress
• A little make – up
Frame
duration
2
seconds
Editing notes
cut
Shot
No.
and angle.
scene.
Frame
duration

83
Artist looking at the camera
• Close up
• Straight angle
• Music
• Bathroom
1
second
Editing notes
Shot
No.
84
She will look at herself in the long mirror and then will look
at her side fat.
and angle.
• Midshot
• Side shot
scene.
• Bedroom
• Music
Frame
duration
1
second

Editing notes
cut
Shot
No.
85
It will cut back to her doing her make up again but a
different sort– foundation.
and angle.
• High angle
• Over the
shoulder shot
scene.
• Bedroom
• Music
• Lowkey lighting
• Casual clothing
Frame
duration
2
seconds
Editing notes
cut
Shot
No.
86
She will be straightening her hair.
and angle.
• Side shot
scene.
• Bedroom
• Music
• Lowkey lighting
Frame
duration
2
seconds
Editing notes
cut

Shot
No.
87
The artist will be lying on the floor with her hair spread out
– camera will go from head to toe.
and angle
• Midshot
• Pan
scene.
• Bedroom floor
• make-up
• music
• low key lighting
Frame
duration
3
seconds
Editing notes
cut
Shot
No.
88
Artist will look at herself in the mirror.
and angle.
• slight high angle
• Over the
shoulder shot
scene.
• Bedroom
• Music
• Low key lighting – but little daylight
Frame
duration
1
second
Editing notes
Shot
No.
and angle.
scene.
Frame
duration

89
Rehearsing on stage and she puts her head down.
• Close up
• High angle
• Music
• Stage
• Casual clothing
• microphone
1
second
Editing notes
cut
Shot
No.
90 She will be lying on her bed.
and angle.
• Mid shot
• High angle
scene.
• Bedroom
• Music
• Casual clothing
Frame
duration
1
second
Editing notes
cut
Shot
No.
and angle.
scene.
Frame
duration

91
Shot of her with her head in her hands. • Close up
• High angle
• Bedroom
• Music
1
second
Editing notes
cut
Shot
No.
92
Holding the pills, her hand will be shaking and she will tip
two into her hand.
and angle.
• Close up
• High angle
scene.
• Music
• Bedroom
Frame
duration
2
seconds
Editing notes
cut
Shot Type of shot, movement Dialogue. Sound. Setting. Colour. Lighting. Mise-en- Frame

No.
93
Rehearsing in her bedroom. and angle.
• Side shot
scene.
• Music
• Casual clothing
• Bedroom
duration
1
second
Editing notes
cut
Sh
ot
No
.
94
Artist looking at the photoframe which is now on the shelf. Type of shot, movement
and angle.
• Mid shot
• High angle
• Side shot
scene.
• Music
• Casual clothing
Frame
duration
1
second
Editing notes
cut
Sh
ot
No
.
She will throw the pills and the pill box onto the floor.
and angle.
• Midshot
scene.
• Bedroom
Frame
duration
2

95
• Slight low angle • Music
• Slight high key lighting
• Casual clothing
seconds
Editing notes
cut
Shot
No.
96
Artist will be backstage looking in the mirror checking her
make-up.
and angle.
• mid shot
scene.
• Backstage
• Music
• Minimal make – up
• High key lighting
Frame
duration
2
seconds
Editing notes
cut
Shot
No. She will stand on the pills and smash up the box/s.
and angle.
scene.
Frame
duration

97
• Close up
• High angle • Casual shoes
• Music
2
seconds
Editing notes
cut
Shot
No.
98
Backstage and someone is zipping up her dress. Type of shot, movement
and angle.
• close up
• Straight angle
scene.
• Music
• backstage
Frame
duration
2
seconds
Editing notes
cut
Shot
No.
99
She will pick up the magazines and rip them up and throw
them around.
and angle.
• Longshot
• Low angle
scene.
• Bedroom
• Music
• Casual clothing
Frame
duration
2
seconds

Editing notes
Shot
No.
100
Backstage her friend finalizing her make up
and angle.
• mid shot
• slight low angle
• side shot
scene.
• Music
• Backstage
• Make-up
Frame
duration
1
second
Editing notes
cut

Shot
No.
101
The artist will be standing in the room with the ripped up
magazines around her and will be smiling.
and angle.
• Longshot
• Low angle
scene.
• Bedroom
• Music
Frame
duration
2
seconds
Editing notes
cut
Shot
No.
102
Backstage the artist and her friends are talking and
supporting her before she goes on.
and angle.
• Close up
• Low angle
scene.
• Prom dress
• Music
• backstage
Frame
duration
1
second
Editing notes
Shot
No.
103
Artist looking at the camera smiling. Type of shot, movement
and angle.
• Close up
• Straight angle
scene.
• Music
• Prom dress
Frame
duration
1
second

• makeup
Editing notes
cut
Shot
No.
104
Her friends and the artist do a group hand shake before
she enters the stage.
and angle.
• Mid shot
• Low angle
scene.
• Music
• Make up
• Prom dress
• Back stage
Frame
duration
2
seconds
Editing notes
cut
Shot
No.
105
Artist and her friends laughing in the bedroom.
angle.
• Close up
• Low angle
en-scene.
• Music
• No make up
• bedroom
Frame
duration
1
second

Editing notes
cut
Shot
No.
106
Friends and the artist are having a group hug
angle.
• midshot
• Low angle
en-scene.
• Music
• Backstage
• Prom dress
• Make up
Frame
duration
2
seconds
Editing notes
cut
Shot
No.
107
Artist waiting to go onstage and a friend is calming her
down/laughing.
angle.
• Close up
• Side shot
• Low angle
en-scene.
• Music
• Back stage
• Prom dress
• Make up
Frame
duration
1
second
Editing notes

cut
Shot
No.
108
Artist walks onto the stage and starts to sing Type of shot, movement and
angle.
• Mid shot turns
into a longshot
• Slight Low angle
en-scene.
• Music
• Prom dress
• Make up
• Stage
Frame
duration
3
seconds
Editing notes

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