2. Feedback on 1st &
2nd trailer draft
• I learnt I needed to change the name on
my trailer to the name on my cover and
billboard
• I need to try to make the backing music no
drown out the dialogue
• I needed to make my dialogue louder and
easier to understand
• I also feel like the cuts between scenes
could run more smooth by putting a edit in
between each scene.
3. Feed back on my 1st Billboard draft
• I needed to change my Brand name
as I mispelt “Nothern”
• I needed to add a strap line that
could attract the audience also
hints what would happen in the
trailer but not give to much away
4. Feedback on 1st cover draft
• I needed to change my brand name as I’ve mispelt ‘Nothern’
• I needed to edit the colour of the brand title as its quite hard to see
• I needed to change the white text in the bottom right corner so its
more easier to read
• I need to chage the colour of the ‘TV Forward’ as the black makes it
hard to read
5. Changes made; Cover
I added dates to make the magazine more realistic
I edited the logos
I changed the colour
of my magazine
name, to make it
easier to read
Added more sub lines
I changed my head lines fount to one
that’s more easy to read
I added the magazines
website to make it more
realistic
I changed colour of my text to
make it easier to read
6. Changes made; billboard
• I changed the brand same
to the correct spelling, I
also made the ‘N’ bigger
• I added a strap line, trying
to stick to the BBC three
colour scheme of
pink/purple but also with
the theme of my soaps logo
so I used a stamped, bold
looking font
• I changed the background
colour to abit of a lighter
gray so my brand name
stands out
7. Changes made; Trailer
• I changed the name on my trailer to the name on my cover
and billboard
• I changed the volume of my backing music so it doesn't
drown out the dialogue
• I changed the transition between scenes could run more
smooth by putting, a cross transition on different cuts but
fade to black when it cuts to the other story line
• I edited my shots so the dialogue is more clear
• I changed the song track to a more high tension song
• I cut out a lot of my shots so I wasn’t giving to much away
in my trailer
• I added the BBC three opening
