This document summarizes feedback on a draft music magazine cover and describes changes made in response. The feedback suggested changing the date reference, magazine name, increasing kicker size, differentiating kicker and text fonts/colors, and removing issue number and price from the barcode. In response, the author corrected all feedback points and changed the entire layout to address text crossing over the model too much and to better resemble a music magazine.

1. Music magazine second draftWith feedback from first draft

2. Feedback from first draftThis should be changed from Christmas special to a date.The magazine name should be changed from ‘THE New Era’ to simply ‘New Era’, as it sounds better.The kickers must be visibly bigger in size that the explanatory text, whilst still not crossing over the model too much.The font/ colour should differ between the kickers and the explanatory text.The text should not cross so far over the model.The barcode should not have the issue number and price on it.

3. Use of feedbackTaking all of the feedback into account, I had decided to correct all of the things which I was told, and have also decided to completely change the layout of the cover.I have decided to change the layout because my explanatory text had crossed over to far, and it made me see that this way of laying out the magazine did not work very well, and due to this I have been able to change many of the kickers and explanatory texts, and add more features to the cover, to make it look more like music magazine, which the first draft did not look like.