Feedback given to me for my music magazine

1. Feedback given to me for my Music Magazine.
All parts:
 Make the colour palette of your magazine clear and concise
with a handful of colours that always used to not make the
magazine to all over the place.
 Only leave empty spaces when required but avoid most of the
time e.g. the tree on the double page could have some text like
a quote maybe?
Front cover:
 Due to the magazine being based on the genres of Hard Rock
and Metal it should be a bit darker to emphasize this.
 Make the font on the subject bold so it’s easier to read.
 The image is too saturated and the subject is starting to look
pink.
Contents page:
 Image could have a subheading about the image (who they
are, why they are in the magazine etc.)
 Could use another image or two for all of the stories that are
on the contents page.
 Could put more of a focus on the Special Features.
Double page spread
 Text is too small on the double page spread, it could be bigger.
 It needs a page number in the corner.

2.  Capital letter to start of the story could be bigger like a lot of
other music magazines.
 The image is quite pale could be brighter.
I have reviewed all of my feedback and compiled it and tried to
improve upon my work via
 Using only a handful of colours in my magazine by eliminating
those that were jarring and didn’t match the rest of the colour
palette e.g. the exclusive mp3 album was changed from yellow
to red to match the title and the stories on the front.
 I added text in the empty spaces of the magazine e.g. I added
another story on the right of my front cover next the subjects
guitar; I added a quote on the double page spread where the
tree was.
 I darkened the background of the image to give the overall the
magazine cover a darker and gloomier feeling.
 Changed the font on the subject to a green to allow it to stick
out in contrast to the subject clothing.
 I gave the subjects on the contents page each names and
subheading about the story.