Group 7 assignment- thanks guys for letting us use the account to upload

1. FeedbackfromDraft1
WWW:
 Good attemptoverall
 Protagonistandantagonistwere identifiable
 There wassome use of Foley
 Soundbridgingtechniquewasusedwell
EBI:
 Overall the narrative waspoorlypresented
 Significantjumpcutsandcontinuityerrors
 The volume forthe whole OTSwas notconsistent,veryloadattimesandveryquietat
others
 Locationneedstobe improved
 There needtobe lightersothe cameracan pickup the scene
 Makeupshouldhave beenmore convincingandrealistic
 Make the beginningmore concise asalot of time waswasted
 Include more of a varietyof shots
 Reveal the maincharactermore clearlyand earlieron
What we needto do:
 We are consideringchangingthe whole narrativetoamuch more simplisticandconcise plot.
That way we can focuson creatinga clearnarrative whilstbuildingtensionandsuspense.
 Or we make the improvementsstatedinthe EBI