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From paragraph to essay
EXERCISE-1 Analyze the paragraph and the essay:
1- Find three main parts of the paragraph: the topic sentence, supporting
sentences and the concluding sentence.
2- Find three parts of the essay : introductory paragraph, body
paragraphs and concluding paragraph
3- Underline thesis statement of the essay
4- Underline topic sentence and concluding sentences in each body
paragraph of the essay.
THE INTRODUCTORY PARAGRAPHS:
o The introduction is the first paragraph of the
essay. It consists of three parts: hook,
background information and thesis
statement.
Hook: It’s the first sentence of the introductory paragraph.
TYPES OF HOOK
1. Ask a question
2. Use quotation!
3. Use an anecdote!
4. Use an interesting and a general sentence!
BACKGROUND INFORMATION:
e.g. ’…Nowadays many students after
completing their education from universities try
to find the ways to study abroad for their future.
They think that studying abroad provides better
opportunities for them to view the world
better…
THESIS STATEMENT:
e.g.: In my opinion, students choose to
study abroad since it is a good way to learn
a foreign language, learn about other
cultures and have a good career.
THESIS STATEMENT:
There are some rules we have to follow while writing a thesis
statement.
A) Write your thesis statement at the end of the
introductory paragraph, that is, thesis statement is the last
sentence of your introduction.
THESIS STATEMENT:
There are some rules we have to follow while writing a thesis
statement.
B) A thesis statement is not a fact or observation.
Fact or observation: People use many chemicals. X
Thesis statement: Chemicals that people use have some bad
effects on our nature. √
THESIS STATEMENT:
C) A thesis statement takes a stand rather than
announcing a subject.
Announcement: The purpose /subject of this paper is the
difficulty of solving our environmental problems. X
Announcement: I want to talk about the difficulty of solving
our environmental problems. X
Thesis statement: Solving our environmental problems is more
difficult than
many environmentalists believe.
THESIS STATEMENT:
D) A thesis statement has one main idea rather than
several main ideas. More than one idea may be too difficult for
the reader to understand and for the writer to support.
More than one point: Knowing a foreign language has many
benefits, It also has some disadvantages. X
Thesis statement: Knowing a foreign language has many
advantages for university students. √
THESIS STATEMENT:
E) A thesis statement should neither be too broad nor
too narrow.
Too broad: The World War II changed the history. X
Too narrow: I grew up in a small village. X
Thesis statement : The World War II changed the life style of
people of 40s. √
Thesis statement : The village I grew up helped me develop
myself in three important ways. √

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From paragraph to essay (bb)

  • 2.
  • 3.
  • 4. EXERCISE-1 Analyze the paragraph and the essay: 1- Find three main parts of the paragraph: the topic sentence, supporting sentences and the concluding sentence. 2- Find three parts of the essay : introductory paragraph, body paragraphs and concluding paragraph 3- Underline thesis statement of the essay 4- Underline topic sentence and concluding sentences in each body paragraph of the essay.
  • 5. THE INTRODUCTORY PARAGRAPHS: o The introduction is the first paragraph of the essay. It consists of three parts: hook, background information and thesis statement.
  • 6. Hook: It’s the first sentence of the introductory paragraph. TYPES OF HOOK 1. Ask a question 2. Use quotation! 3. Use an anecdote! 4. Use an interesting and a general sentence!
  • 7. BACKGROUND INFORMATION: e.g. ’…Nowadays many students after completing their education from universities try to find the ways to study abroad for their future. They think that studying abroad provides better opportunities for them to view the world better…
  • 8. THESIS STATEMENT: e.g.: In my opinion, students choose to study abroad since it is a good way to learn a foreign language, learn about other cultures and have a good career.
  • 9. THESIS STATEMENT: There are some rules we have to follow while writing a thesis statement. A) Write your thesis statement at the end of the introductory paragraph, that is, thesis statement is the last sentence of your introduction.
  • 10. THESIS STATEMENT: There are some rules we have to follow while writing a thesis statement. B) A thesis statement is not a fact or observation. Fact or observation: People use many chemicals. X Thesis statement: Chemicals that people use have some bad effects on our nature. √
  • 11. THESIS STATEMENT: C) A thesis statement takes a stand rather than announcing a subject. Announcement: The purpose /subject of this paper is the difficulty of solving our environmental problems. X Announcement: I want to talk about the difficulty of solving our environmental problems. X Thesis statement: Solving our environmental problems is more difficult than many environmentalists believe.
  • 12. THESIS STATEMENT: D) A thesis statement has one main idea rather than several main ideas. More than one idea may be too difficult for the reader to understand and for the writer to support. More than one point: Knowing a foreign language has many benefits, It also has some disadvantages. X Thesis statement: Knowing a foreign language has many advantages for university students. √
  • 13. THESIS STATEMENT: E) A thesis statement should neither be too broad nor too narrow. Too broad: The World War II changed the history. X Too narrow: I grew up in a small village. X Thesis statement : The World War II changed the life style of people of 40s. √ Thesis statement : The village I grew up helped me develop myself in three important ways. √