1. Assignment #2: Blog Analysis
Monae Minors-Gibbs

2. Target level
My target level :

3. Debbie's blog
I choose Debbie's blog. She used bold, clear
titles. There were also her self assessments,
which showed she understanding of why she
was getting her grades and what she could
have done better. As well as with some of her
print screen pictures she gave a little
explanation to show the examiner what it was
about. Also Debbie kept updated with the
meeting .

4. Debbie's structure
Debbie took pictures of her
and her team while filming,
this showed evidence of her
working.
She explained the changes she
made clearly and showed it so
the examiner knows.

5. Blank tasks
The screen printed pictures
wasn't really clear so it would
have been hard for the examiner
to grade the pieces of work that
wasn't so clear.
There were also incomplete task
which was left blank. This could
be because of how it was
uploaded but it was left blank.

6. Luara’s blog
The other blog I chose was Luara blog whom
was a B- grade student. She also did the basic
clear bold headings and in order. She did a few
personal assessments and reflections with
what she could have done better. She also
print screened the comments and grades she
got back from her teacher. Luara spoke about
when she attended film clubs and informed us
on what she watched and was about.

7. Camera shots
She print screened pictures from
other movies which was good and
got inspirational scenes out of
some.
She made the connections with the
movies and explained clearly.
Luara didn't just take camera shots
of just one type of movie, such as
comedy, she did the camera shots
for all of them which had to of taken
time to do.
There’s also pictures of her filming.
Luara does make her own personal
video about the making of the video
with a friend . This is good as she
gets someone else to comment on it
as well and not just her view.

8. improvements
• She could of added more dept in her writing in
her personal assessments.
• There was a lot of camera shots but there
could have been a bit more video clips
• Overall I think she done really well and
achieved her target grade.

9. Similarities and differences
Similarities between Debbie and Luara is that
both informed about the group meetings and
time. They both applied there personal
assessment on there blog. The five different
drafts was on there blogs, and took pictures of
them filming.
The differences is Luara hade more camera
shots and made more connections with them.
But Debbie had a little more presentations.