2. WORKING ON GRADE C – EVALUATING 2
BLOGS
I looked at:
http://www.mariayounesasmedia.blogspot.co.uk/
In my opinion her blogger was great! Because she
has included many pictures which shows evidence
and has included videos. Also, she has included
many posts.
What I think she should improve is on the
appearance more with more colour etc which
makes people want to looks at it.
I will look at her blog in more detail...
3. WWW – WHAT WENT WELL
She was able to post her power points
She was able to upload a
video which proves shee
is able to use her it skills.
She was also able to talk
about the video she
uploaded this was good
because it would
introduce the video to us
so we are able to
understand the video a bit
more.
4. I liked how she was able to research
more than one opening scene so
when it comes to filming she would
have a clear understanding on how
she would film her 2 min video.
However she also included every
single detail that was on that video
as her research.
I've watched her final
video and it was
completely different to
her first idea which
shows that she has
improved from all the
drafts. And by drafting
a lot and researching a
lot it would change the
story completely. Which
is good.
5. It was good how she
uploaded pictures of them
filming which shows proof
that they were filming it and
not copied.
It was also good that she
was taking care of her
bloggers appearance by
adding that picture in the
background.
6. EBI – EVEN BETTER IF
it would of been better if
she was focussing on the
colour because its hard to
read.
it would of been better if she
made the image a bit bigger
when uploading so it can be
more clear and it would of been
presented better
7. it would of been better if she
read over her posts because
her sentence doesn't make
since.
8. THE SECOND BLOGGER THAT I WAS ANALYSING
I looked at:
www.abigailedwardsasmedia.blogspot.co.uk/
I really like how she was taking care of her bloggers
appearance. Also she has even included many
post, images and videos.
It would of been better if the background wasn't
black and the writing was white because the white
really stands out and it can hurt the audiences
eyes.
I will look at her blogger in more detail...
9. WWW – WHAT WENT WELL
Shows evidence that they
have filmed the film.
Has taken good
care for her
presentation
10. She has uploaded a
PowerPoint successfully and
has written about it so the
PowerPoint can be more
clearer
Was researching for
story boards and how
to create them so
they have a stronger
understanding on
how to draw one and
by doing this they
would make it better.
11. EBI – EVEN BETTER IF It would of been better if the
background colour wasn't
black because the blue is not
clear enough or hard to see
and also the white coloured
text
However the white coloured
font is clear but its too bright
to read and it would hurt the
eyes.
12. COMPARING BOTH BLOGS...
Similarities Differences
They both included post, photos, Maria has included more videos as
videos etc her research for the opening sense
They took care of there Abigail has included more photos
presentation and has included an while filming
image in the background
Has included many drafts and Abigail has made the background
talked about them colour black when Maria made it
white
Abigail included a video on how to
make a story board to improve her
understanding
Maria has more posts and was
explaining more and updated more
which can prove her commitment
to her work
