Differentiated responses

1. Q2 Response
Pathway 1
You got below 6/8
Pathway 2
You got above 6/8
Use the structure to re-write your
answer.
1. Write your improvement
comment at the top.
2. Use the structure to re-write
and improve your answer.
3. Self/peer assess (S.I.R). Have
you improve
Apply your improvement to another question
1. Write your response to my marking.
2. Write your improvement at the top of the
page.
3. Spend 5 minutes analysing the source.
Remember you are looking for what the
author has deliberately done. Support
with evidence from the source and own
knowledge.

2. Q2 – Response (Remember 5/5)
1. The author’s purpose in this representation
is……
2. This is shown by…….
3. This is supported shown by (own
knowledge)……
This shows that the representation has been
deliberately constructed to….
4. ……has decided to include this to portray……
5. Overall this show that the author’s purpose
was……
Q2 – Response (Remember 5/5)
1. The author’s purpose in this representation
is……
2. This is shown by…….
3. This is supported shown by (own
knowledge)……
This shows that the representation has been
deliberately constructed to….
4. ……has decided to include this to portray……
5. Overall this show that the author’s purpose
was……
For pathway 1 – support sentences and frame based on 5/5 paragraph structure.

3. Source B: From an article on blood transfusions by Dr Blundell
published in The Lancet, a leading medical journal, in the first
half of the nineteenth century.
He was the first surgeon to perform a successful person-to-person
blood transfusion. Operations that need the transfusion
of blood are probably rare. However, in some cases they are
needed otherwise the patient will die. There are also many
more cases where transfusion could be used to replace large
blood losses even when the patient is not in danger of dying. At
present there is no clear evidence that transfusion has been
fatal, however this might be a possibility. Perhaps we should
only use transfusions where it seems the only hope for the
patient is that we throw blood into the veins.
Source B: From an article on blood transfusions by Dr Blundell
published in The Lancet, a leading medical journal, in the first
half of the nineteenth century.
He was the first surgeon to perform a successful person-to-person
blood transfusion. Operations that need the transfusion
of blood are probably rare. However, in some cases they are
needed otherwise the patient will die. There are also many
more cases where transfusion could be used to replace large
blood losses even when the patient is not in danger of dying. At
present there is no clear evidence that transfusion has been
fatal, however this might be a possibility. Perhaps we should
only use transfusions where it seems the only hope for the
patient is that we throw blood into the veins.
What was the purpose of this representation?
Explain your answer using Source B and your own
knowledge (8 marks)
What was the purpose of this representation?
Explain your answer using Source B and your own
knowledge (8 marks)
For pathway 2 – slightly more challenging source, looking for supporting with specific
own knowledge and consistency of application.

4. What was the purpose of this representation?
Explain your answer using Source B and your own
knowledge (8 marks)
Source B: An account written in the 1850s of an operation
before the use of chloroform.
Before the days of anaesthetics, a patient preparing for an
operation was like a condemned criminal preparing for
execution. When I had my amputation, I counted the days till
the day of the operation. I counted every hour of that day. I
listened for the surgeon’s carriage, the sound of the doorbell,
his footsteps on the
stairs. I watched the unpacking of his dreadful instruments, I
listened to his few solemn words. I still recall him spreading out
the operating instruments, his first cut, and afterwards my
bloody limb lying on the floor. The great suffering I experienced
cannot be described in words. I would have been spared all this
by the use of ether or chloroform.
What was the purpose of this representation?
Explain your answer using Source B and your own
knowledge (8 marks)
Source B: An account written in the 1850s of an operation
before the use of chloroform.
Before the days of anaesthetics, a patient preparing for an
operation was like a condemned criminal preparing for
execution. When I had my amputation, I counted the days till
the day of the operation. I counted every hour of that day. I
listened for the surgeon’s carriage, the sound of the doorbell,
his footsteps on the
stairs. I watched the unpacking of his dreadful instruments, I
listened to his few solemn words. I still recall him spreading out
the operating instruments, his first cut, and afterwards my
bloody limb lying on the floor. The great suffering I experienced
cannot be described in words. I would have been spared all this
by the use of ether or chloroform.
Homework – a reasonably straightforward task so all can apply what they have done
with support in the lesson.