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News Stories Review

I have sent out a link to my peers to see what their opinion is on my news stories, I wanted
to get feedback in so I can analyse and try and improve in whatever needs improving. This
review will be for all my stories. From the responses that I have gathered they have been all
positive but also received some slight criticism. All of my stories were all informative, the
reason for that is, is because I had to go around my college and find out gather news that
are currently happening within my college.
For my first question I asked whether my news stories were all clear and concise, the results
that I received showed that I did which was very good. Listening back to my stories I thought
that I spoke clearly so I had confidence that I would receive good feedback in that area.
For my second question I asked whether my stories were relevant to my target audience,
again I received good feedback. I tried to make my stories relatable as much as possible to
my target audience which were students.
In terms of editing I found it quiet easy, with some help of my teacher I found even easier.
When I gathered my interview, the raw footage was about 2 minutes long. To make it
snappier and short, I had to cut pretty much some of the whole length for all stories. Reaper
was the software that I used to edit my footage. The sound quality of the audio was very
clear. The recording kit that I used was very good. It captured almost everything from my
voice to the background. I tried to get quotes from them, to make it snappy. I had some
hardware difficulty with the recording kit. I didn’t quite know how to use them, even though
I’ve used them before I still had problems, but with some help of my teacher I managed to
overcome it.
The criticism that I received were things such as my stories possibly might have been too
long and some found it boring. If I were to this again I would improve on my story length,
some of the stories were quiet long so therefore it got very boring for my target audience.
Other than that, overall I think I did pretty well in terms of delivering the story and gathering
the story. If we were to do this again in the future I would know what I could improve on
based on my feedbacks from my peers.

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News stories review

  • 1. News Stories Review I have sent out a link to my peers to see what their opinion is on my news stories, I wanted to get feedback in so I can analyse and try and improve in whatever needs improving. This review will be for all my stories. From the responses that I have gathered they have been all positive but also received some slight criticism. All of my stories were all informative, the reason for that is, is because I had to go around my college and find out gather news that are currently happening within my college. For my first question I asked whether my news stories were all clear and concise, the results that I received showed that I did which was very good. Listening back to my stories I thought that I spoke clearly so I had confidence that I would receive good feedback in that area. For my second question I asked whether my stories were relevant to my target audience, again I received good feedback. I tried to make my stories relatable as much as possible to my target audience which were students. In terms of editing I found it quiet easy, with some help of my teacher I found even easier. When I gathered my interview, the raw footage was about 2 minutes long. To make it snappier and short, I had to cut pretty much some of the whole length for all stories. Reaper was the software that I used to edit my footage. The sound quality of the audio was very clear. The recording kit that I used was very good. It captured almost everything from my voice to the background. I tried to get quotes from them, to make it snappy. I had some hardware difficulty with the recording kit. I didn’t quite know how to use them, even though I’ve used them before I still had problems, but with some help of my teacher I managed to overcome it. The criticism that I received were things such as my stories possibly might have been too long and some found it boring. If I were to this again I would improve on my story length, some of the stories were quiet long so therefore it got very boring for my target audience. Other than that, overall I think I did pretty well in terms of delivering the story and gathering the story. If we were to do this again in the future I would know what I could improve on based on my feedbacks from my peers.