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The main problem that I was made aware from is the lack of text on the page and the amount of empty
space on the page. I can add more text on the page so that it seems more like a real page that has a full
story on it. In the top left of the page I can add another feature to the page to fill space. A possibility is to
add a quote in big writing. Another bit of feedback is that there is not a big enough link between this and
the front cover.

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Double page spread feedback

  • 1. Double Page Spread Feedback The main problem that I was made aware from is the lack of text on the page and the amount of empty space on the page. I can add more text on the page so that it seems more like a real page that has a full story on it. In the top left of the page I can add another feature to the page to fill space. A possibility is to add a quote in big writing. Another bit of feedback is that there is not a big enough link between this and the front cover.