1. Contents Feedback
First of all, my main piece of feed back was that
there wasn’t enough pages on the front cover. As
most magazines can have around 100 pages, mine
only has 3 – 4 pages advertised, which makes the
magazine seem unrealistic. I will also improve the
layout of the page so that more pages can be
added to it. Another criticism is that there isn't an
actual image on the page other than an image that
has a colour overlay. This makes the image seem a
bit bland. The page also has a lot of red on
there, which can also make the page seem
repetitive.