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Once I’d changed
This was the first                                        the colour of the
draft I did on my                                         font I then
double page                                               changed around
spread, this was                                          the title and
done entirely by                                          made it more
me without any                                            aesthetically
feed back from                                            pleasing, and I
others.                                                   also then added
                                                          abstract art in the
                                                          top corner to add
                                                          a feature to the
                                                          page.
Then I started to
get feed back
from others, I
then changed it
so that the text
was in a square
and was in line,
instead of the
lines of text being
different length.

For this next
stage I then tried
and change the
font to red to see
what it was like, I
then asked for
other peoples
opinions and they
thought the blue      I then looked for feed back and they thought
looked better so I    that it looked good and I was happy with it
then changed it       so I then made this my final draft
back.

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First draft document design changes based on feedback

  • 1. Once I’d changed This was the first the colour of the draft I did on my font I then double page changed around spread, this was the title and done entirely by made it more me without any aesthetically feed back from pleasing, and I others. also then added abstract art in the top corner to add a feature to the page. Then I started to get feed back from others, I then changed it so that the text was in a square and was in line, instead of the lines of text being different length. For this next stage I then tried and change the font to red to see what it was like, I then asked for other peoples opinions and they thought the blue I then looked for feed back and they thought looked better so I that it looked good and I was happy with it then changed it so I then made this my final draft back.