audience feedback with personal opinions

1. Audience Feedback

3. • "Weak Audio"
• "Varied angles and shots"
• "It needs to be more fluent"
• "Sound wasn't good"
• "Audio needs to be sorted!"
• "Looks complicated, needs to flow more"

4. I think that our opening sequence is decent and includes a good variety
of shots such as close up, extreme close up, point of view shot and over
the shoulder shots. I feel our shots were fluent throughout and looked
like they were in a good order. Our plot was well planned and thought –
through well, we made sure we knew what would happen after the
opening (in the rest of the film).
However, I do feel as if our idea and plot was a little complicated and
we tried to fit too much into the 2 minutes we had. I think we
attempted to put too much of the plot into the opening sequence; it
was just meant to give a taster of the film. Whereas our opening
packed too much of the film into it; the chase scene could have been
after the opening sequence to create more tension for the audience.