My second and final draft of my script

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SHRIEK - SHORT FILM
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SYNOPSIS -
Two friends rapping up a party of drinking and fun. one
making sure the other gets home safe. but sadly on this lone
night on Halloween. he will not be getting home safe.
who wills survive? who will die? what's real, what's not?
CHARACTER TYPES -
cocky jock type -
Conner
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the type who thinks he is better than everyone tends to act
tough than he is. thinks he's the leader and is better than
everyone else.
Chill horror fanatic type -
Tyler
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The chill friend who knows quite a lot about horror movies.
knows how they are played out and typical horror antics. his
knowledge might help them survive.
the classic killer
Corey
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corey plays the classic killer finishing off one of his
kills. Unfortunately two more have come his way.
OPENING SCENE -
we see the killer trying to kill someone and drag them away
covered in blood not too far away from the house, we see them
continue to fight back but in the end its cut off by a
scream.
TITLE CARD PRESENTS - SHRIEK!
WE CUT TO TYLER AND CONNER IN THE HOUSE DRINKING ON A
SATURDAY HALLOWEEN. CRACKING JOKES TALKING ABOUT HALLOWEEN
AND HOW THERE ARE TOO OLD FOR IT.
TYLER - COULD KILL FOR SOME SWEETS ANARL
CONNER - COURSE MATE LOOK AT YA.
(FAT JOKE)

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SCENE 1 - NIGHT
ITS COMING TOWARDS THE END OF THE NIGHT AND THEY ARE RAPPING
UP BECUASE OF TYLER
TYLER - NAH MAN I THINK I SHOULD HEAD OFF NOW TO BE HONEST
CONNER - RIGHT MATE SO I BUY THE DRINKS AND YOUR FAT ASS
DOESNT DRINK ANY.
SCENE 2 - NIGHT
TYLER AND CONNER START TO WALK TOWARDS THE DOOR, CONNER
WALKING TYLER TO THE BUS STOP,
SCENE 3 - NIGHT
THEY ARE WALKING DOWN THE ALLEY AND HEARING STRANGE NOISES.
TYLER TRYING TO LISTEN BUT CONNER KEEPS TALKING.
TYLER - DID YOU HEAR THAT?
CONNER - HEAR WHAT MATE?
Tyler - if you stop talking for a second u might be able to
hear
Conner - don't get lippy mate ill drop you.
Tyler - Conner mate, your the size of a teddy bear
they continue to walk away brushing off the odd noise Tyler
keeps noticing.
SCENE 4 - NIGHT
after getting out the alley and walking towards the bus stop
they see something in the distance.
(same scene as opening just from there angle)
they hear noises of dragging and decide to turn the flash on.
Conner thinks he sees something.
Conner - I think I see something you know?
Tyler - okay mate. it dead or something don't need to go see
it do ya?
Conner - looks like a person

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Tyler - have you ever seen a horror movie mate? THIS A 101
way to die
Conner - shut up with the horror crap, its not real.
Tyler - as your walking towards the body.
(keep cutting between them two to pick up the best possible
audio)
SCENE 5 - NIGHT
we see Conner investigate the body only to get tackled to the
side by an ominous figure.
Conner - I think its a dead bo-
Tyler - Conner?! I told you!
SCENE 6 - NIGHT
Conner gets tackled by the killer trying to stop him from
stabbing him in the eye. Tyler's fear sadly came true now
lost on what to do.
(POV shot of Conner looking at the killer, makes it easier
but also can be a good kill)
Conner screaming in agony gets cut off by a snap.
SCENE 7 - NIGHT
Tyler confused as what to do, thinking about running but also
wanting to save Conner.
Tyler mans up the courage to slowly go over to Conner body
(he doesn't believe/know he is dead)
Tyler - Conner?!? con- Conner?!
SCENE 8 - NIGHT
Tyler realizing Conner is dead when reaching the body
starting to mourn but the killer jumps on him. Tyler in anger
throws him.
The killer gets up and does a head tilt in confusion.
(Tyler thinks has messing around)

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Tyler - You think this is funny?
SCENE 9 - NIGHT
Tyler charging at the killer, the killer knees in his side
pinning him down. Tyler falls whilst the killer tries to do
the same move twice. Tyler strong enough to withstand it.
Tyler grunting in pain. also hearing the raspy breathing and
tired efforts of the killer.
SCENE 10 - NIGHT
Tyler gets up after throwing the killer to the side not
realizing he is stabbed in the side.
After getting up Tyler realizes why he is in pain.
Tyler - ah, sh-. shit!
SCENE 11 - NIGHT
Tyler notices that his knee is bleeding. Realizing there are
both injured. he might have a chance.
SCENE 12 - NIGHT
Tyler starts to pant and realize he's in fatal condition. he
has no choice but to fight. Both in a last effort they grab
there weapon
Tyler picking up a brick
Corey (the killer) picks up the knife
SCENE 13 - NIGHT
Tyler throws the brick of the killers knee, falling instant.
Tyler slowly goes over to finish the job.
ENDING 1 - TYLER WINS
Tyler climbs on top of him and smashes his head in repeatedly
with a brick. offscreen just with the smash and blood noises.
Tyler - aghhH! uHHg!
Screaming as he is forced to take his life.

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ENDING 1 - SCENE 1 - TYLER WINS
Tyler gets up holding his side (Stab wound) to go over to
Conner. kneeling near Conner Tyler breaks down in tears
realizing has lost his friend forever.
cuts to black after Tyler crying.
plays credits.
ENDING 2 - THE KILLER WINS
ENDING 2 - SCENE 1
When Tyler goes for the kill the killer guts him upwards
spurting blood all over his mask. Tyler falling on him as the
killer pushes him off.
The killer gets up and starts whistling whilst cleaning his
knife.
The killer slowly leaves the scene keeping locked on the
bodies as he leaves the frame.
fades to black after 5 seconds (lingering shot)
play credits.