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OCR Combridge Technicol in Medio
Unit 2l - Pitching
Unit 21 - Pitching
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  • 1. M] HeathFarkEr-r:lr:.1[s:i i; iliTt r?PR :lt- cfil iril[ OCR Combridge Technicol in Medio Unit 2l - Pitching Unit 21 - Pitching LOz - Pitch Material Feedback Areas ofStrength - a g.",el ;lZ*4tr15 ncccr'hL^,€ fr/,r|. Su..t, fu ?^* 4 qaiv. {L.n ax4 V- "L *af (lnL o-,,.ot.te tJ," p13;b b% ^o*lo t/"r^tt * bU s[^aot-. " Ww( Z*-if*") lrl{ /* bu y,-*,L e'rcdt J uanitan-E; "t s50 {* t/'-P'ff" so 'ctze ;-L ant)c< and sl^r{ a^l Sample Material Produced l"^ ).o. t* ^cl,r^clpd 0L11 lna^ol Sat,rptc ,Y6ftg^^l So rnr.ol- tn"l^do , 1- Sau"pla s@N- + SLe.bo<-d..o + c,jlfu plu^ Feedback for the Pitch - Do n+ c-tr}. a p"gcU.tiri.d &-.t[r, ' L,^,h,1,. - (14. noc.s&*.q ro ;t*..c"a * ,rrJd tre br""d^ Yc^ cer- Veep W- ,.Ye-e^; +o $tr o,d Qa,l O-+ c" A,y.',ci.L. - Co,^ al"-t" -tL.-"-1i^ spe[.n< o^J .ereaanq. - J*0."** raoL*o Xd '"*dd* ,cr.J' ttg o"-'td ,^re'. + P'€-.>c,.t"U (a Cas s'-q-. Snt DzaA.^ * o-.akl 6off, tl$* A/( a^f$ spare C/".*-y. W.- klL .% $ths pt^ +- 1."* sbt. " l^",1r& A,* p"rd-cho^ s/.drt . - CIn &,- lcol SL>{z ,-:1-,14p Sr--e /6 lr"-,= a, kL Jb c7* Qnuifr.nno-,- k Los. - l-.L& lv^, g.. -")a t rarryr*+ A,- p.Eecl- ..''' "h" R-t"* ' - {dl-*. 0",J,( r/<-.,^ Sece.n q.A *kL^A th elrrl- Al* rcla. C-o*i.Ao.r-,J #- n&os,n3 ce r...oJz.,-,q {'cds : bi a- la-r.***-U 4>* 4'ca^-tr-r c^U.e hT C-e-e-k .-L") 6- futrt6 V"^l^bn cl*^A ,^d ^to^J. (^o- rs.bs a.,o{. e^td ,v/e.<r*a(^")., l* r [La* .] A?^]3 -fL* d,'. nako> sgL ./ aL rt^h& "'"k[ 6/.^, UihL.tL frt- U*- ot&<-er.,' e't<o^PV Sr.,c[ 4t^^l Ad*er-.}..-^ &2 H.- k7J * drc;{ a,-arcbro.+; /c"Vrr a^di"uo