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oCR Combridge Technicol in Medio
Unit 2l - Pitching
UnitZ1- - Pitching
LO2 - Pitch Material Feedback
Sample Material Produced
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  • 1. M HeathParkEUSINESS A ENTETPRISE COLLTGT oCR Combridge Technicol in Medio Unit 2l - Pitching UnitZ1- - Pitching LO2 - Pitch Material Feedback Sample Material Produced fL Sa^pb r.afa't;r( pro{*-a-ac( a-< ./ o /"J' 5l^/'"'{ a^o( obr.b ,/u"th t'. J56 z^/ *t142 *t-srerxe Ja Aa wa-&ct o-,/ r^ozd in H' /''h, I 1^ /*^ J)-dk"/ ' Areas of Strength 4 q*-d hb-cd*s Db^ ff,t ,'',J'n Ttor;h c^A'a[ d* c/a/ L€h"r^ d/ ,^J lu^J a-"d (w- 'tco A€ dth tb cz-u, idar t/* 14". E a'| a/4 ^/ dao"'-hin Feedback for the Pitch , ll- oo*lA be 6..rd lo uncL& fi.. tt{" +" tL- &t',. ^ . H l^ + tt"c*"f a e<..G.{- dcr?A ttA e*.t 10 6t€- nA})<r 1 , Ctu ^A, ({-- u.-.J"i3 ue bt^l't- "f so Ll- * *.ryf .c"l^ o-..o1 Ac*L.y-- beh,ea^ -U^ a"d tL dd t"t |o bXtl s'^aPz^^'a a,r.d. o-csc.. .-tt"t d'*.*-, [.e, pl*o c-[l. So V'_ cct- *'<kor ' " LOW /rr,3", cr,u)',Au fr' Vt 'l bthj ga ':'4 6Dc ,JL& dr-"ooPL<' A?oo * . &.oaA'' Laq*it + &*cA k** a sa6<-*o- 'st'J4 c*'-'t''{'c' &rr:"t ,Yr,^X^t o^A, reV'<a.akL^ f sl*'"So'" i;u,""n ' , Ao./o Sr,-< r^:L^ l^ Pf.C k %PL:'- t^' J"dtrU U* scLJ*^L" o-d. *"a7* ^hJ -* 'tha'1 'r^C"Xa 1" UG br*" 4 P'.,A^"t . J , Eud nzzJo Jol.,t a,rna,nt q./" {lAiX,- " O-pb,&. il* Sw'rlnr'UA ltac-k*'',.e-'-< 4' ti'' hi sAfu , A^pbh d,z &,npp- ScZ^z orrrd hrn a/-kd&d{ tn tr, pfrL lna'