This document contains feedback on a pitch material from a business and enterprise college course. The feedback provides suggestions in 4 areas: 1) The pitch could be more grounded and focused on the key benefits for the audience. 2) More context is needed on the background, problem, and solution to make it clearer for the listener. 3) Using more compelling language and storytelling could help engage the audience more. 4) Practicing the delivery would help the presenter seem more confident and passionate about the idea.