This document shows how we have used the feedback.

1. Changes made with the feedback
Inthefeedbackwe weretoldwhatwe couldhaveimprovedinouradvert.One oftheimprovementswas
toincludeane-mailaddressintheadvert.Wehaveincludedaphonenumberasa contactinformation
butwe didn’tthinkofaddingane-mailaddressorawebsitelink.
Theusageofsearchenginesaremuchmorecommonthananythingelsetodayastheyareeasiertouse
and manipulatesowedecidedtochangethatandinsteadofa phonenumberweincludeda linkto the
school’swebsitesoanyonewho’sinterestedcansimplygoandhavea lookatwhatthey’reinterested.
Inthefeedbackwe arealsotoldthatwewere quietand didn’tspeakreallyloudsothepanelmembers
didn’thearusquite well.Ididn’twant tomake thesamemistakeintherealadvertsoIhave increasedthe
voicesoftheactorsandlowereddownthebackgroundmusic. Bydoingsothe resultsIgainedshowed
thatactor’svoiceswereclearer.