This is the evaluation of my script.

1. Evaluation
Evaluation
The client liked the way the story starts with an action scene in the beginning and
how it develops to horror gradually towards the end. What she didn’t like is some of
the wording I have used and she suggested me to use day to day language and
change it to something that is easy to understand.
Based on her suggestions I have change the type errors, change the word “he”
with the actors name, add "COND'T" in brackets to show that the dialogue is
continued, add "NEXT DAY" where appropriate to show that the location has
changed and change the scenario for where it's necessary.
I believe I have now met the expectations of the client because I have made all
the changes she suggested and now the script is easier to understand. I have also
met the brief and my chosen target audience.
The script and shooting script are fully formatted industry standard and they
meet the legal and ethical requirements.
Overall I am happy with the outcome. I have follow all the rules and there isn’t
anything that I would like to change.