Effect of emotional abuse and neglect on child development.

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PRESBYTERIAN UNIVERSITY COLLEGE, GHANA
FACULTY OF DEVELOPMENT STUDIES
SCHOOL OF GRADUATE STUDIES
M.A INTERNATIONAL DEVELOPMENT STUDIES
FORM FOR ASSESSOR’S COMMENTS
Name of Student: Emily Ohui Adevor Student’s ID:
Topic: ASSESSMENT OF EMOTIONAL ABUSE AND NEGLECT ON CHILD
DEVELOPMENT
No. AREAS ASSESSOR’S COMMENTS
(Suggested Corrections to be Effected by the Candidate)
1. PRELIMINARIES
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2. CHAPTER ONE
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3. CHAPTER TWO
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4. CHAPTER THREE
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Name of Assessor: …………………………………………………………………………………
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5. CHAPTER FOUR
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6. CHAPTER FIVE
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7. REFERENCES
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8. APPENDIX
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