2. You should have plugged your microphone in! Would have made it look more realistic.

3. I would have liked to have seen the band playing in some different locations, that room they were in got a bit samey.

4. I think you should maybe add some more shots of the girl doing more nasty things that will make the story clearer.

5. I don’t understand why she was attacked.

6. Maybe try some more special effects? Good job though.

7. I really liked the shots, very quick and precise.

8. Maybe try some effects? But nice video.From looking at all of the comments made, Katherine and I feel that we need to add a few more effects, transitions and also making sure the band is in sync with the music. All of these problems can easily be done to help improve our music video to help make it more successful. <br />