1. Script
By
Eleanor Jackman
&
Courtney Few
Black out
Simon- Have you ever wondered what its like to be trapped in two
minds, two feelings, two people in one body ……
(pause/breathing/heartbeat)
Dissolve to eye
Simon- Because I do
Cut to mid-shot of Simon sitting at a desk when he is at work (he is
slouched down over the laptop looking angry and depressed) (non-
diegetic)
Cut to long shot of Simon walking towards a shed
Simon- Kate don’t worry ill be home soon just finishing of at work
then ill come straight home.
Cut to wide shot Simon in the shed writing on the wall (Crazily
scribbling words on the wall) (Non-diegetic)
Cut to a two shot and wide shot of Simon and Kate arguing
Kate- where have you been all this time
Simon- I was at work you know I was you rang me you crazy bitch
Kate – You couldn’t have been there all this time, it’s been a year we
need to move on
Simon- Kate I can see her, were trying to figure out who killed her,
she helps me out at night
2. Cut to two shot and wide shot of Simon and Kate at the graveyard
still arguing
Kate- Lookshe’s under here (point at gravestone) I lost my daughter
aswell Simon your not the only one but you need to understand she’s
not with us anymore and you need to stop all this crazy detective shit
Simon- I will find out who murdered my little princess
(No-diegetic music)
Cut to wide shot of Simon scribbling on the wall shed again
Cut to a long shot and wide shot of girl riding a bike with in the
background Simon in the shed
Cut to mid shot of mid-shot of Simon from the back scribbling and
circling words
Cut to mid-shot of Kate and Simon in the kitchen
Simon grabs a knife
Simon- He killed her, he killed our Sophia. Time to get justice
Kate- leave it
Kate grabs Simon
Simon slaps Kate in the face and walks out of the door
Cut to Long shot Simon running down the path to the shed
Black fade, non-diegetic music stops
Cut to mid shot of Simons arm scribbling on the wall
Black fade
Cut to long shot of the wall in the shed
Cut to close up of the word “Richard”
Cut to close up of word “Sophia”
Cut to close up of word “ Bike”
Cut to close up of word “slaughtered”
Black blinks of Simon Writing on the wall but just sees his hand and
the wall
3. Black blink when he writes (it was) then drops the pen
Cut to extreme close up of pen dropping on the floor
