print sreens of my music magazine showing development of editing in responce to peer assessment feedback and criteria

1. Bright pop coloured
back ground and
font colour
Font like vogue
magazine relating
to my target
audience that
would read vogue
barcode

2. I edited the photo by adjusting the
lighting in the image and
emphasising slightly the pink eye
shadow on the main image

3. The alliteration of
I changed the colour of the puff helps the
the mast head to a dark attraction and
red to match the rock appeal of the music
genre and remove the magazine- a friendly
connotations of a fashion tone
magazine created with
the font chosen
The black, dark blue
and champagne
cream colour of the
font has been
consistent
throughout the entire
magazine
price

4. Media language

5. The big k in the
background showing
continuity within
each page and brand
recognition
Champagne
coloured
background- more
sophisticated
background
Photo- connoting
sophistication and
elegance with a bit of
sass- great for the pop
genre

6. Red line between Layout in three
the black lines- columns- clean
continuity of colour structured
along with the
‘contents’ font
colour and the
numbering of the
features

7. Faint ‘Kera’ in the
background- brand Photos edited
identity and and made almost
continuity black and white
but a more sepia
toned variation-
the photos
breakup the
coloured images
of the additional
artists
Additional image
of artist
VIP back staged
Artist index that
pass as a free
shows some of the
give away with a
artists featured in
rock look to it
the magazine
adhering to the
pop-rock genre

8. Artists name written faded in
the background
Changed the colour of the
shoes and pillow to adhere
to the pop music genre
(bright colours)
Champagne
background
Polaroid photos of artist

9. Pull quote, that is
depicted by the Polaroid
photos of artists with
different facial
expressions
Interview questions
from artist and
interviewer
Faded written text in the
background so readers attempt to
read it and are drawn in to the
interview.

10. Changed layout of writing so it fits
the equally between the double page
as is in line and so the writing forms
around the photo of the artist
Changed colour of interview
Pull quote from interview, in keeping
questions to suit rock genre and
with the theme of the double page
create continuity.
spread

11. I made the font size of my beginning
paragraph bigger to fill the space of the
page, improving the overall layout.
I changed the layout of the text so that its is three
columns, creating a neat and sophisticated effect
that my magazine adheres to.