1. 2013-2 advanced english
1346001 kim yu jin
Dad-where are you going has more factors for enjoyment
than Superman has returned.
Nowadays, entertainment shows father and child making memories tofether
are popular. Dad-where are you going? and Superman has returned are
that of show. Famous stars and their children make memory together. But
Dad-where are you going is more systematic than superman has returned
because it has more categories and better systematic elements for fun.
Dad-where are you going seems like more producers of broadcasting and
staffs care the program than Superman has returned. In this program,
producers guide the travel and notify schedule to do on the travel
destination. In Superman has returned, no cameras or producers appear,
and fathers and their children do what they want to do, go where they
want to. This shooting environment which depends on only guests’ free
activities pursues realism and naturalism, but if this only realistic element
were to continue, enjoyment would not be guaranteed.
Dad-where are you going? ‘s format has well systematically organized
elements than Superman has returned. In Dad-where are you going?, five
fathers and children take a trip on the countryside every other week and
and they follow the organized procedure, for example, choosing home to
stay, making food by themselves, doing the countryside’s work. But
Superman has returned almost shows everyday life in the home or
elsewhere near the home without any mission or special activity. Also, in
Dad-where are you going?, five children’s each characteristic and scenes
showing they’re getting along together and it makes this program more
interesting.
Dad-where are you going? has systematic elements for fun, which are
appearance of producers, format of travel, emphasizing each characteristics
of five children, and they make the program more interesting. Although
both Dad-where are you going? and Superman has returned show dad and
child’s memorable experience, Dad-where are you going? can make people
expect what they’re going to do and where they’re going to travel next
week. That is, Dad-where are you going? is better because it can avoid
boredom due to these systematic elements.

2. A Market for Matisse
1346001 Kim Yu Jin
In “A Market for Matisse”, the author says that regarding art as a
investment fund is not good. This tendency, buying well known
artists’ art and make profit by selling them was started by Level. As
he
made
profit
by
using
art
in
selling
market.
many
people
participated this new type of investment, but investing in art had
turned into the way only for money, not for pleasure. Now days,
fund managers, who have professional view in paintings help people
to decide to invest their money in famous artists’ painting, or
recently made paintings. But it cannot be perfectly convincing thing.
In fact, no one can be sure about whether paintings’ price will soar
or decline in the future. That is investing in art has many risks.
Regarding art as a kind of investment fund would be a good
tendency in Korea. In Korea, there are many people who invest their
money in some undesirable way and squander their money. The
cause of this is that people who dreaming of making a fortune invest
their money in something excessively, and the rich excessively
speculate in real estate or even try on gambling to increase their
fortune. By introduce desirable one in selling market, we can reduce
these wrong investment tradition. And art is the desirable one that
many people can participate in. In fact, so many people don’t have
interest in art, but as art become trend as investment fund, many
people would try to have wide outlook in art and it can emerge as
the pop culture in Korea. But, although the art is relatively desirable
kind of investment fund in selling market, people should be careful
not to addict in making profit by selling their paintings or dreaming
of making fortune. First of all, to maintain art as desirable one as a
kind of investment fund in selling market, people should have their
own firm outlook about paintings and artists. Due to no one can’t
assure the painting’s future value, people should decide to buy or
sell art with their trust to take any risk. Also, people should think
that it isn’t a lottery, only a investment and enjoyment.

3. Advanced English
In-class essay
Prof. Annie Choi
213. 12. 15
1346001 Kim Yu Jin
There is validity in the opinion that smokers do damage to non-smokers.
But in company, it’s not always true that smokers do damage to company’s
profit or smokers can’t get good outcomes. Person who has proficient
working and personal ability and gets the greatest outcomes in the
company can be a smoker. If company decide to stop permitting smoking
in the company only due to the non-smokers’ view, it would oppress
smokers’ right. And if the company have hard regulation about smoking, it
could lower the smoking employee’s working ability. So, the company has
to have the appropriate regulation for both smoking and non-smoking
employees.
First, smoking employees can smoke only at outside rest areas. To keep
this regulation, the company may have to prepare rest area at outside,
before. And in the usual rest area inside the company, both smoking and
non-smoking employees can rest and talk without smoking. By doing this,
non-smokers doon’t need to harm from smoking smell. Also, smoking
employees
can
keep
their
right
to
smoke and
also get
along
with
non-smoking employees in the inside rest area for every employees.
Second, smoking employees can smoke only at lunch or dinner time. If
they go out to smoke whenever they want, other employees can’t get
attention to work and feel upset for smoking smell. So, smoking employees
should smoke only at lunch or dinner time, about 50 minutes to 1 hour
,which is
sufficient to get rid of smoking smell. Of course, some might
argue that this regulation to permit employees to smoke only in fixed time
is too heartless, So, once smoking employees observe well this rule, and
other employees think they can get attention and comfortably work better
than before keeping this rule, the company would make more permitted
tome to smoke for smoking employees.

4. Third, the company may offer benefits when smoking employees quit
smoking. Employees spend about 8-10 hours in company every day, so
company has more meaning than just workplace for them. As employees
devote themselves to work in the company, the company also should care
the
company's
employees’
health.
So,
when
smoking
employee
quit
smoking, the company would offer benefit for him. By doing this, many
employees
may
quit
the
smoking
and
work
more
hard
with
high
satisfactory, and the company would make healthy working environment.
Smoking is one of the most controversial issues in many places like
school, home, university, company, and elsewhere. Among them, especially,
company is the place that it's employees are all adults and in this place,
and it also means that the percentage of smokers can be higher than other
places. So, in the company, smoking problem would be more critical than
other places. So, In company, by getting these three regulations, we can
alleviate the smoking problem. And if these regulations get affirmative
outcome, many other places also get their own regulations of smoking.
Finally, the smoking problem would be alleviated in almost everywhere.