This slideshow is based on a lecture by Dr Tom Duggett, introducing the practice of close reading in literary study. The lecture includes a detailed close reading of the Wordsworth lyric 'A slumber did my spirit seal'.
1. Dr Thomas J E Duggett
ENG105
Introduction to
Close Reading:
Approaches to
Literary Study
Sample Lecture – Property of Dr Thomas J E Duggett and
Xi’an Jiaotong-Liverpool University
2. ENG105 Introduction to Close
Reading: Approaches to Literary Study
Department of Languages and Culture
Xi'an Jiaotong-Liverpool University
Module Lecturer: Dr Thomas J E Duggett
e-mail: thomas.duggett@xjtlu.edu.cn
Office: C354
Office hours: 13.00-15.00, Mon, Tues, Thurs
3. Lecture 1 – What is Close Reading?
•History
•Definition
•Case Study
4. Before Close Reading
• Long European tradition of reading,
interpreting, and commenting on ‘canonical’
texts:
• classics (antiquity-middle ages), Bible (esp.
middle ages), classics and Bible (Renaissance +
Protestant Reformation)
• C17-C18 – ancient learning overtaken by
modern, Bible historicized, growth of ‘standard’
English, English readership and ‘canon’ –
Shakespeare, Milton, Pope, Johnson, etc.
• Early examples of close readings among
Romantics – e.g. De Quincey on Macbeth. But
literary criticism journalistic not academic
5. Before Close Reading
• C19 – Growth of History and social science; literature valued not
for itself but only as evidence of mindset, manners, lifestyle.
(English becomes University subject, replacing classics and
theology)
• E.g. Hippolyte Taine, History of English Literature (1864), proud to
ignore or diminish the text: ‘What revelations do we find in the
calendared leaves of a modern poem? A modern poet, a man like
… Victor Hugo … graduated from a college and traveled,
wearing a dress-coat and gloves, favored by ladies, bowing fifty
times and uttering a dozen witticisms in an evening … Such is
what we detect behind modern meditations and sonnets.’
• Early C20th – Close Reading movement (New Criticism) a
reaction against Taine et al.: back to the text
6. Close Reading
• A special type of reading (thinking, and writing)
• Every word ‘weighed’ – alone and in context
• Attention goes up as word count goes down (expect precision)
• Reading <=> Writing – reading leads to writing out your
‘reading’ of a text
• Combine formal analysis with personal response (feature+effect)
• In ‘pure’ form, reference to text only (I.A. Richards, 1920s)
• Focus on ambiguity (William Empson, 1930s)
• explore richness of meaning, complexity of thought process –
irony, paradox (Cleanth Brooks, 1940s)
• Other methods now lead research (new historicism,
poststructuralism, feminist theory, etc.), but CR still the essential
tool for literary study
7. Close Reading in Practice
William Wordsworth
‘A slumber did my spirit seal’
Fuseli, The Nightmare (1780s) Turner, ‘Tintern Abbey’, 1790s
…the most commented-upon eight lines in all of English literature
8. Wordsworth, ‘A slumber’
A slumber did my spirit seal; 1
I had no human fears:
She seemed a thing that could not feel 3
The touch of earthly years.
No motion has she now, no force; 5
She neither hears nor sees;
Rolled round in earth’s diurnal course 7
With rocks, and stones, and trees.
9. Subject
A slumber did my spirit seal; 1
I had no human fears:
She seemed a thing that could not feel 3
The touch of earthly years.
No motion has she now, no force; 5
She neither hears nor sees;
Rolled round in earth’s diurnal course 7
With rocks, and stones, and trees.
A change of tense from then to now, and the death of a beloved
woman
10. speaker
A slumber did my spirit seal; 1
I had no human fears:
She seemed a thing that could not feel 3
The touch of earthly years.
No motion has she now, no force; 5
She neither hears nor sees;
Rolled round in earth’s diurnal course 7
With rocks, and stones, and trees.
The speaker disappears: my (object, possessive) – I (pure subject) –
past ‘you’ to ‘she’, and then on to ‘it’ (in ‘a thing’ and in ‘spirit’) – the
uncanny, taken-for-granted but unknown ‘it’ of time, weather, existence
11. Words – types
A slumber did my spirit seal; 1
I had no human fears:
She seemed a thing that could not feel 3
The touch of earthly years.
No motion has she now, no force; 5
She neither hears nor sees;
Rolled round in earth’s diurnal course 7
With rocks, and stones, and trees.
nouns verbs adverbs adjectives
pronouns conjunctions prepositions articles, etc.
12. words – concrete?
A slumber did my spirit seal; 1
I had no human fears:
She seemed a thing that could not feel 3
The touch of earthly years.
Terms from
physics No motion has she now, no force; 5
(Newton)
She neither hears nor sees;
Rolled round in earth’s diurnal course 7
With rocks, and stones, and trees.
No word above 2 syllables – except diurnal
concrete abstract
13. sleep, but with
sense of
words – notable
exhaustion and ghost or ‘sense of close up, v. from
absence rather self’, mind, etc. n., a seal,
than rest meaning official
A slumber did my spirit seal; personal
or 1
v. unusual in I had no human fears: stamp
context. Verb
to think She seemed a thing that could not feel 3
comes from
noun ‘thing’. The touch of earthly years.
To think is to
be thing-ed
(to be thought No motion has she now, no force; 5
by daily, but with emphasis on
language?!) – She neither hears nor sees; activity in the day, and so
How do I more sense of alternation
know what I Rolled round in earth’s diurnal course 7
think until I With rocks, and stones, and trees.
see what I
say? – E. M.
Forster unusual repetition synonyms(?)
(C20th
14. words – negation
A slumber did my spirit seal; 1
I had no human fears:
She seemed a thing that could not feel 3
The touch of earthly years.
No motion has she now, no force; 5
She neither hears nor sees;
Rolled round in earth’s diurnal course 7
With rocks, and stones, and trees.
15. Phrasing
A slumber did my spirit seal;
…
With rocks, and stones, and trees.
S O O S
A slumber did my spirit seal or A slumber did my spirit seal
- Can a ‘slumber’ do anything? But can a spirit?
- Which reading makes the poet more active? Which reading anticipates line 3?
- What words could replace ‘A’? What difference would it make to the reading?
‘Did seal’ - active construction with double passive effect b/c undecidable
archaic (Shakespearean) – or is there a question we haven’t heard? There is no
title – the poem begins before we are ready, already in the middle
16. Shape and sound – stanzas
stanza break
A slumber did my spirit seal;
I had no human fears:
She seemed a thing that could not feel
The touch of earthly years.
=:?
No motion has she now, no force;
She neither hears nor sees;
Rolled round in earth’s diurnal course
With rocks, and stones, and trees.
17. Shape and sound – enjambment
A slumber did my spirit seal; 1
I had no human fears:
She seemed a thing that could not feel 3
The touch of earthly years.
No motion has she now, no force; 5
She neither hears nor sees;
Rolled round in earth’s diurnal course 7
With rocks, and stones, and trees.
Most lines are end-stopped. These lines run-on. Fluency? Loss of control?
Meaning in lines 3-4?
18. Shape and sound – rhythm
Iambic (-/), tetrameters/trimeters (8/6 ‘feet’)
No word above 2 syllables – except diurnal
/ / _ / _ / / /
No motion has she now, no force; 5
She neither hears nor sees;
Rolled round in earth’s diurnal course 7
With rocks, and stones, and trees.
Form matches sense: the iambic rhythm is broken (spondee) and forward ‘motion’ pauses –
or accumulates in the triple stress
Metrical line with upward intonation (triple or quadruple stress – is ‘nor’ stressed?)
Spondee (//) with strong downward intonation, and feeling of ‘motion’ and ‘force’ released in
the round vowel sounds (assonance) and alliteration on liquid rhotic ‘r’
19. Shape and sound – rhyme
A slumber did my spirit seal; 1
I had no human fears:
She seemed a thing that could not feel 3
The touch of earthly years.
No motion has she now, no force; 5
She neither hears nor sees;
Rolled round in earth’s diurnal course 7
With rocks, and stones, and trees.
abab rhyme scheme – full rhymes, but some slightly ‘off’ – seal/heal would be
closer
20. Shape and sound – phonetic effects?
A slumber did my spirit seal; 1
I had no human fears:
She seemed a thing that could not feel 3
The touch of earthly years.
No motion has she now, no force; 5
She neither hears nor sees;
Rolled round in earth’s diurnal course 7
With rocks, and stones, and trees.
Read aloud and see what happens. Rhythm + Weak forms (e.g. ə) + elision and
catenation =>
Aslumber earth thing / earthing ocean drowned inert die urn
cor(p)se rock sand stone sand trees
21. Shape and sound – punctuation
A slumber did my spirit seal; 1
I had no human fears:
She seemed a thing that could not feel 3
The touch of earthly years.
No motion has she now, no force; 5
She neither hears nor sees;
Rolled round in earth’s diurnal course 7
With rocks, and stones, and trees.
• Punctuation within line for 1st time in line 8. Punctuation (separation) instead of
cohesive language. We slow down. We read silently, in effect,
‘rocksandstonesandtrees’, but aloud ‘rocks. And stones. And trees.’ But also the
opposite, b/c no elision in silent reading.
• Note the unexpected stress force of 'With' - which makes us question all the more
strongly in what if any sense a person can be 'with' rocks, stones, and trees.
22. A slumber did my spirit seal; 1
I had no human fears:
She seemed a thing that could not feel 3
The touch of earthly years.
No motion has she now, no force; 5
She neither hears nor sees;
Rolled round in earth’s diurnal course 7
With rocks, and stones, and trees.
Cleanth Brooks: ‘touch of earthly years’ is key: speaker’s beloved is touched by time,
and the poem is about the horror of this fact, with a black irony at end
F. W. Bateson: speaker finds comfort in the idea of beloved as part of ‘holy’ course
of nature
23. • Read ‘model’ close reading
• Questions:
• What academic ‘error’ can you see in the
writing? Is it really an error?
• Do agree with the point about ‘redundancy’?
What is the effect of synonymy in poetry?
• How does the writer use textual evidence – the
repetition of ‘earth’ to develop an interpretation
of the poem’s meaning?
• How would you interpret the final lines? Do we
have hope or despair? How is the poem
ecological?
Editor's Notes
The lecture concludes with a close reading of a poem - a slumber - in which we take a broadly new critical approach, observing formal features and exploring tensions and ambiguities, etc., and building towards a reading of the poem as a love poem (rolled round - lovers rolling in bed, allusion to donne in sunne rising?), or a poem about sex and death. Here I ask ss questions to elicit formal features, inc. word types most commonly used (almost all nouns and verbs, hardly any prepositions), end-stopped lines and enjambment (she seemed a thing that could not feel / The touch of earthly years - as B&R note, the reading 'a thing that could not feel' is clarified, but not cancelled, the idea of an insensate idol etc. held in ambiguous tension with the reading of an immortal being), grammatical ambiguity (spirit seals slumber, or slumber spirit), rhyme, meter, alliteration, etc., pronoun shifts (a, not my or her, slumber, gives way to she) and illustrate with mark-up on ppt. We build a basic reading of the poem from these features.
‘ It is three o’clock’ – so ‘it’ means time. We could say ‘the time is three o’clock’. But in the question form – what time is it? – the it cannot be ‘time’, or we would be saying ‘what time is time’? So there is an implied unknown ‘it’ underpinning the evryday.
The point here is that most words are nouns and verbs. Negative adverbs are many. Also make point that the other words – pronouns, articles, conjunctions, etc. – become visible as quite telling. Indeed, rather vehement: A my / I no / She a that not / The of // No she now, no / She neither nor / in / With, and, and – a poignant desire for addition, for more, at the end, the childish storytelling method: ‘and … and …’
The point here is that most words are poised somewhere between concrete and abstract: concrete separately but abstract in combination
Poem as automatic writing: the poet is passive and the words come
The first line is an instance of an active construction with passive effect: specifically and oddly avoiding the active voice of 'a slumber sealed my spirit' (or vice versa), or the straightforward passive voice of ‘my spirit was sealed by a slumber’ or ‘a slumber was sealed by my spirit’. The construction ‘did … seal’ is archaic, often used in Shakespeare, a preterite, a form of simple past used to emphasize the verb rather than the tense. For instance, in the opening scene of Hamlet, the guards speak of the walking ghost of the murdered king old Hamlet (‘Marcellus. What, has this thing appear’d again tonight?), and link the apparition to the preparations for war all around them, and to the renewal of an old feud in which old Hamlet, dared to combat by his rival Fortinbras ‘Did slay this Fortinbras: who by a Seal’d Compact, / Well ratified by law, and heraldry / Did forfeit (with his life) all those his lands’. The similarity of the words here may well be no accident: Wordsworth is invoking the creation myth of English literature in Hamlet. It is suspended between the two ‘voices’. The grammar is further suspended inasmuch as the verb here is ‘did seal’, but ‘seal’ is deferred until the end of the line. A slumber did my spirit seal = a slumber sealed my spirit / my spirit was sealed by a slumber, or, noting the tense implications of 'did' - i.e. (Habitually) at that time but not now (c.f. She did date him in 2007) - my spirit was at that time sealed by (in) a slumber. The construction is clearly archaic/poetic dictional, unless one posit an anterior question that we do not see: 'How did she die? Did a slumber seal your spirit?' Yes, a slumber did my spirit seal. But even here there is an inversion of word order: Yes, a slumber did seal my spirit. Easier to imagine a spirit being 'sealed' - uncommunicative, exiled, withdrawn, locked up - than a slumber , a sleep, which can't really be sealed except in the sense (actually more appropriate to this poem about death - no motion, no force) that a sleep with the seal on it would be death; and except that sleep is precisely the state in which the human agent is habitually sealed, such that it becomes a virtual tautology: the sealed up state of my spirit in sleep was sealed up by a sleep. We have to see all these grammatical possibilities present. Recall that ww becomes an exciseman, possessor of a seal, or stamp, and that like he would know about seals of office and seals commonly put on c18/19 letters - in order to allow the recipient to know, by whether it had been broken or not, whether or not the contents had been delivered confidentially. So we have buried or concealed here a trope about concealed or subliminal - beneath the surface - communication.
The poem is a thing! Is the ‘thing’ a poem? Is it Recluse?
1. Use of ‘we’. Yes, it’s an error to some extent – coerces agreement. But literary critical writing encourages formal personal response