The document outlines locations and a narrative for a short story about a woman in her mid-20s to early 30s who falls asleep and dreams of surreal situations in different locations that each represent parts of her life. These locations include an office, bedroom, water, mansion, and darkness/woods. Each dream scene will symbolize phases, emotions and life experiences for the main character. Feedback on the idea suggested linking her daily events to each dream scene and noted the artistic freedom and ambition of the proposed surreal short story.

2. Locations:
Character: •Office
Woman •Home- bedroom
aged mid 20’s to early 30’s •Water
•Mansion
Main narrative: •Darkness/woods
•Life problems, stress. And maybe some
•Surreal dream that represents parts more as I develop
of her life. * my idea further.
*She falls asleep and dreams herself in different
locations that don’t make sense. Each location is
a situation in her life that she’s lived therefore
each scene will represent phases, emotions and
situations in her life.

3. Feedback:
•A suggestion that maybe linking her day
events to each dream (scene) she has which
I really liked so I will add that to my short
when I start writing it.
•Comments about the freedom of ideas and
various things I can put in my short to make
it surreal.
•Very ambitious.
•Very artistic.