2. Storyline
Bored with their relationship, Kimberly breaks up with her
boyfriend while they’re on a date. After returning home, James
notices something mysterious about his change: the £5 note he
received in his change has a mobile number written on it. After
much wondering, curiosity becomes too much for him, who
against his better judgements he decides to send a text to the
unknown number. After talking and building a relationship
between the two, James feels compelled to meet this mysterious
woman. This leads to the confession of how Jennifer purposely
wrote her number on the £5 note, after seeing the break up
between James and Kimberly.
3. Interesting points
I like the use
of the
phones,
though the
continuity is
wrong here
I like this restaurant
4. Interesting points
I like how it goes black and
white for her memories.
I like how you get to see that
they meet and make friends
and the credits go over the
top instead of on a black
screen. I also like how
they’ve filmed so that the
credits fit on the screen, not
covering their faces.
5. Evaluation
Acting: I think the acting is really good, it portrays the feelings of
the characters really well.
Locations: I think the locations work really well for the film and
look real.
Edit: I really like this short film, I like how the continuity works
(apart from the text) and it really looks like the passing of time. I
also like how Jennifer’s memories are in black and white.
