An idea for teaching…

           Ideas
1.   Read Dear Mr. Blueberry
2.   Explain RAFTS
3.   Students choose random animal (toy) without
     letting peers see it.
4.   They research about the habitats and living need of
     their animal.
5.   They write a letter to the zookeeper, telling him
     what they need in order to live happily at the zoo.
6.   They seal their letters, properly address them, and
     put them in the classroom mailbox.
7.   I read their letters aloud
8.   Students try to guess what type of animal wrote the
     letter.
9.   Student who wrote the letter, shows their animal
     toy for verification.
Dear Mr. Zookeeper,                                                           March 12th, 2011

           I am traveling from far, far away on the continent of Africa. I grew up in the savanna
and on grassy plains, so I would prefer a sparsely vegetated desert landscape with shade for me to
rest in. You will need to plant some very large trees, however, because I am quite large. As far as
food goes, you better make sure you have an awesome garden. I love to eat
roots, bark, leaves, berries, seeds, and lots of fruit…actually I will be needing 300-350 lbs of this
stuff every day. Also, I will need a large supply of water – perhaps a stream running through my
new home – so that I can drink at least 50 gallons of water each day.
           That’s basically it, but here are a couple of things to keep in mind: Although they are
horrible for my “girlish” figure, I will never turn down a peanut as a snack. I hear there are other
herds who live in Asia. Contrary to popular belief, I can’t fly holding a magic feather. And you
better put my home as FAR AWAY from the mice habitat as possible, if you don’t want a disaster
at the zoo!


Looking forward to meeting you!

Your friend,
Ellie
Biocrostic
Rotten adults in every story
Outside the normal children’s author’s box
Always writing about kids that struggle
Loud, rambunctious characters
Descriptions that touch all senses

Dives right into the character’s mind
Action surrounding every story
Hard to believe his biography is true
Laugh in shock of what happens
Writing a Narrative
                                                     Married
     Biography                                         high
                                                      school
• Using a “Web Map”, they                           sweetheart
brainstorm ideas about events        Husband
                                                                     Graduated
                                    left for Iraq
in their lives.                                                       college
                                      4 times
• They share these ideas with
group members who vote on
most interesting topic.             Got 2
• (After teacher modeling)
students will create drawings
                                  awesome
                                   dogs –
                                                    Steph                Bought a
of the scene they choose with                                             home
                                   Lucy &
talking bubbles etc.                Ethel
• They will then use these
drawings to write a narrative                Held at              Moved
(short, appx. 10 min).                      gun point            across the
• They will exchange papers                   during             country 11
& write 3 questions they have                robbery               times
for their partner’s narrative.
• They will revise their
original drafts & present final
drafts w/ drawings.                   A way to…     Organize
What connections exist between real-life
R            writing and school writing?
e   • Students need to make authentic connections to the
f   writing assignments that they are given – in all levels of
    schooling.
l   • As teachers, it is our job to help our students find the
    bridge that connects these two very different aspects of
e   their lives.
    • Simply having students “write about what they did
c   over the weekend” is not sufficient for a teacher to be
t   able to say that they are connected with their students’
    interests.
I   • We need to make sure that our students know (not
    think) that we genuinely want to know their thoughts,
o   lives and aspirations.
    • In every grade level, we can pay attention to the lives
n   of our students – we should keep in mind the area of the
    community they live in, the country (or state) their family
I will begin by
                   explaining to
                    my students
                  that we will be
                   learning how
                    words work
                    through the
                       use of
                  antonyms, and
As a fun way to    explain what
   get them           they are.
thinking about
  antonyms, I
 will read The
 Foot Book by
   Dr. Seuss.
Reflection:
                                                        Our presentation
                                                        went pretty well.
                                                        Because of time
                                                     constraint, I think we
Grade 3-5:                      T-Rex                   went faster than
  Create a               Predator, Carnivore             normal, but the
“Diamante”           Hunting, Searching, Killing        class seemed to
Poem using                                               understand our
                   Teeth Scales      Neck     Legs
  Opposite                                             ideas. Next time I
                       Hiding, Walking, Eating
   words                                              would spend more
 relating to            Lengthy, Herbivore           time collaborating in
Dinosaurs.                  Brachiosaurus                  our group.




               Interdisciplinary Teaching
Sometimes when we get into “teacher-mode” it can
           be easy for us to forget to remind our students to be
           themselves in their writing. When discussing specific
           content, especially when reading novels, they might
           accidentally use the voice of the author they have been
           studying.   It is important that we model writing for the
           students that use various types of voice, so that they
           understand that it does not have to always be exactly what
           they would specifically do or say if they were the ones
Tell „em   “speaking” or “acting” in the piece. By having a bag of
to use
their…     tricks for teaching young students to use voice in their
           writing, we can try out different methods and find out what
Voice      really gets their creative juices going. One of the best ways I
           have come across for getting my reader to really understand
           my voice, is to constantly remind myself to get them to feel
           like they’re “walking in my shoes” as they read.
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Book Talk          Strategy I Plan to use:


               “Write-Around”
            In a groups of 3-5, students write short
            notes and pass them around to create a
            string of conversation.

            The first person quickly writes their
            comments on a sheet of paper (each
            person can start a sheet, or there can be
            one    for   the    whole      group   to
            share, depending on grade level).

            When the teacher says “Pass”, they
            pass it to the next person who reads it
            and adds their own.

            This continues until each person has
            written on each piece of paper.

            They then receive their original piece of
            paper and read what their peers wrote.
Have younger                                        “Switcharoo”,
students draw a                               “Bumper Sticker” &
picture as their                               “License Plate” for
“plan for                                         familiar stories.
writing”.

                    “Senses” activity
                    where they are given 3
                    possible topics about a
                    specific sense. Then
                    write descriptions &
                    guess each others’.




                   Teacher Tool Box
Free Space
I know am heading into a profession that takes a lot of heart. There
are not many jobs that compare when considering the how we can
affect a person‟s life from a very young age. There are a few teachers in our
lives that we all remember, for one reason or another, and I hope that I can
be that teacher who instills a love for learning deep inside the souls of my
students. I hope that they can walk away from my classroom with a
confidence in themselves that in some way I was able to help them find. If I
can help one person do better in their life, whether they remember me or not,
then I believe my career choice was perfect.




           “One day, I too will make a difference.”

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  • 2.
    An idea forteaching… Ideas 1. Read Dear Mr. Blueberry 2. Explain RAFTS 3. Students choose random animal (toy) without letting peers see it. 4. They research about the habitats and living need of their animal. 5. They write a letter to the zookeeper, telling him what they need in order to live happily at the zoo. 6. They seal their letters, properly address them, and put them in the classroom mailbox. 7. I read their letters aloud 8. Students try to guess what type of animal wrote the letter. 9. Student who wrote the letter, shows their animal toy for verification.
  • 3.
    Dear Mr. Zookeeper, March 12th, 2011 I am traveling from far, far away on the continent of Africa. I grew up in the savanna and on grassy plains, so I would prefer a sparsely vegetated desert landscape with shade for me to rest in. You will need to plant some very large trees, however, because I am quite large. As far as food goes, you better make sure you have an awesome garden. I love to eat roots, bark, leaves, berries, seeds, and lots of fruit…actually I will be needing 300-350 lbs of this stuff every day. Also, I will need a large supply of water – perhaps a stream running through my new home – so that I can drink at least 50 gallons of water each day. That’s basically it, but here are a couple of things to keep in mind: Although they are horrible for my “girlish” figure, I will never turn down a peanut as a snack. I hear there are other herds who live in Asia. Contrary to popular belief, I can’t fly holding a magic feather. And you better put my home as FAR AWAY from the mice habitat as possible, if you don’t want a disaster at the zoo! Looking forward to meeting you! Your friend, Ellie
  • 4.
    Biocrostic Rotten adults inevery story Outside the normal children’s author’s box Always writing about kids that struggle Loud, rambunctious characters Descriptions that touch all senses Dives right into the character’s mind Action surrounding every story Hard to believe his biography is true Laugh in shock of what happens
  • 5.
    Writing a Narrative Married Biography high school • Using a “Web Map”, they sweetheart brainstorm ideas about events Husband Graduated left for Iraq in their lives. college 4 times • They share these ideas with group members who vote on most interesting topic. Got 2 • (After teacher modeling) students will create drawings awesome dogs – Steph Bought a of the scene they choose with home Lucy & talking bubbles etc. Ethel • They will then use these drawings to write a narrative Held at Moved (short, appx. 10 min). gun point across the • They will exchange papers during country 11 & write 3 questions they have robbery times for their partner’s narrative. • They will revise their original drafts & present final drafts w/ drawings. A way to… Organize
  • 6.
    What connections existbetween real-life R writing and school writing? e • Students need to make authentic connections to the f writing assignments that they are given – in all levels of schooling. l • As teachers, it is our job to help our students find the bridge that connects these two very different aspects of e their lives. • Simply having students “write about what they did c over the weekend” is not sufficient for a teacher to be t able to say that they are connected with their students’ interests. I • We need to make sure that our students know (not think) that we genuinely want to know their thoughts, o lives and aspirations. • In every grade level, we can pay attention to the lives n of our students – we should keep in mind the area of the community they live in, the country (or state) their family
  • 7.
    I will beginby explaining to my students that we will be learning how words work through the use of antonyms, and As a fun way to explain what get them they are. thinking about antonyms, I will read The Foot Book by Dr. Seuss.
  • 8.
    Reflection: Our presentation went pretty well. Because of time constraint, I think we Grade 3-5: T-Rex went faster than Create a Predator, Carnivore normal, but the “Diamante” Hunting, Searching, Killing class seemed to Poem using understand our Teeth Scales Neck Legs Opposite ideas. Next time I Hiding, Walking, Eating words would spend more relating to Lengthy, Herbivore time collaborating in Dinosaurs. Brachiosaurus our group. Interdisciplinary Teaching
  • 9.
    Sometimes when weget into “teacher-mode” it can be easy for us to forget to remind our students to be themselves in their writing. When discussing specific content, especially when reading novels, they might accidentally use the voice of the author they have been studying. It is important that we model writing for the students that use various types of voice, so that they understand that it does not have to always be exactly what they would specifically do or say if they were the ones Tell „em “speaking” or “acting” in the piece. By having a bag of to use their… tricks for teaching young students to use voice in their writing, we can try out different methods and find out what Voice really gets their creative juices going. One of the best ways I have come across for getting my reader to really understand my voice, is to constantly remind myself to get them to feel like they’re “walking in my shoes” as they read.
  • 10.
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  • 11.
    Book Talk Strategy I Plan to use: “Write-Around” In a groups of 3-5, students write short notes and pass them around to create a string of conversation. The first person quickly writes their comments on a sheet of paper (each person can start a sheet, or there can be one for the whole group to share, depending on grade level). When the teacher says “Pass”, they pass it to the next person who reads it and adds their own. This continues until each person has written on each piece of paper. They then receive their original piece of paper and read what their peers wrote.
  • 12.
    Have younger “Switcharoo”, students draw a “Bumper Sticker” & picture as their “License Plate” for “plan for familiar stories. writing”. “Senses” activity where they are given 3 possible topics about a specific sense. Then write descriptions & guess each others’. Teacher Tool Box
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    I know amheading into a profession that takes a lot of heart. There are not many jobs that compare when considering the how we can affect a person‟s life from a very young age. There are a few teachers in our lives that we all remember, for one reason or another, and I hope that I can be that teacher who instills a love for learning deep inside the souls of my students. I hope that they can walk away from my classroom with a confidence in themselves that in some way I was able to help them find. If I can help one person do better in their life, whether they remember me or not, then I believe my career choice was perfect. “One day, I too will make a difference.”