The document provides tips for writing emails in Japanese. It discusses including information that surprises the recipient in a positive way by mentioning one's weaknesses or uniqueness. It also advises being helpful to others by providing information that is useful to them. The document demonstrates these tips through an example email introduction between two people, Geo and Maru. Geo shares personal details about himself and offers to answer questions, following the guidelines of surprising the recipient while also being helpful.

1. 英語でE-mail
第3回 磁力にからめる：
相手への気配り
鈴木繁夫（名古屋大学・名誉教授）

2. ＜つかむ＞情報：
驚き＝不思議＋弱点
• I usually stay at home on weekends.
• I spend my time with a handicapped son,
Tomo.

3. • If you have any questions about social
welfare in Japan,
• I am the one you should ask.
＜つかむ＞情報：役立ち

4. • I have been practicing Japanese
martial arts for many years.
＜つかむ＞情報：
驚き＝ユニーク＋ユーモア
• I want to protect myself
from attacks from
students.

5. • If you want to learn self-defense arts, I
can recommend to you some useful
books.
＜つかむ＞情報：役立ち

6. 相手への気配り
• Give a surprise: 相手を驚かす
tips コツ: Your own weakness or
uniqueness
自分の弱点や得意
↓
• Be helpful to others 相手の役に立つ

7. ＜動かす＞情報：誘い
Hi Maru,
My name is Geo. It sounds like geography,
doesn’t it? I like collecting maps in the
sixteenth-century.
I usually stay at home on weekends.
I spend my time with my handicapped son
Tomo.
Kind regards,
Geo
あなたはどうですか？

8. 誘い：＜つかむ＞から＜動かす＞へ
Hi Maru,
My name is Geo. It sounds like geography,
doesn’t it? I like collecting maps in the
sixteenth-century.
I usually stay at home on weekends.
I spend my time with my handicapped son
Tomo.
Kind regards,
Geo
How do you spend your
weekends?
Do you have a family?

9. メイルとプレゼンの違い
• メイルには 段落 がある。
• 段落ごとに改行

10. Hi Maru,
My name is Geo. It sounds like geography,
doesn’t it? I like collecting maps in the
sixteenth-century. I usually stay at home on
weekends. I spend my time with my
handicapped son Tomo. If you have any
questions about social welfare in Japan, I am
the one you should ask.How do you spend
your weekends? Do you have a family?
Kind regards,
Geo

11. 段落ごとのまとまり
1. My name is Geo. It sounds like
geography, doesn’t it?
2. I like collecting maps in the sixteenth-
century.
3. I usually stay at home on weekends.
4. I spend my time with my handicapped
son Tomo.

12. 段落ごとのまとまり
1. My name is Geo. It sounds like
geography, doesn’t it?
2. I like collecting maps in the sixteenth-
century.
3. I usually stay at home on weekends.
4. I spend my time with my handicapped
son Tomo.

13. Hi Maru,
My name is Geo. It sounds like geography, doesn’t it?
I like collecting maps in the sixteenth-century.
I usually stay at home on weekends. I spend my time
with a handicapped son, Tomo.
If you have any questions about social welfare in
Japan, I am the one you should ask.
How do you spend your weekends? Do you have a
family?
Kind regards,
Geo

14. Summing up:
• メイルは４つでできている。
– あいさつ 情報 配慮 署名
• 情報編集の３ポイント
＜わかる＞, ＜つかむ＞, ＜動かす＞
• 段落づけをする。

15. 自己紹介：ピアpierに送る （２）
あい
さつ
Hi Maru,
情報
My name is Geo. It sounds like geography, doesn’t it? I like
collecting maps in the sixteenth-century.
I usually stay at home on weekends. I spend my time with a
handicapped son, Tomo.
気配
り
If you have any questions about social welfare in Japan, I am
the one you should ask.
How do you spend your weekends? Do you have a family?
Kind regards,
署名
Geo