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Jeff Smith



Lessons in Business from Prison
        TED June 2012
    By: Joshua McPherson
“[We need] to nurture the
     entrepreneurial spirit and the
 tremendous untapped potential in our
         prisons.” (Jeff Smith)”




   Jeff Smith was an ambitious politician and rising star of the
Missouri senate who was incarcerated for one year 2009-2010 for
 conspiracy to obstruct justice . During his one yea stay in prison
Smith learned a lot about the prison system and how its inmates
   could have the chance or should have the chance to have a
  healthy start in a business field since all inmates have a huge
               entrepreneurial potential in that field.
How did the speaker capture the
attention of the audience in his or
         her introduction


Jeff Smith captures the attention of the audience by giving an
 example of how things was inside the prison. And his job of
  unloading trucks for 5 dollars a month. When he gave this
introduction he basically let the audience understand what he
     will be talking about in relation to prison and business
How did the speaker maintain the
   engagement of the audience
      throughout his speech


Mr. Smith maintained the engagement by keeping the audience
    involved in the comparison between real world business
 towards the correctional system of business. By him showing
  and explaining that certain way shows that even though are
  prison system have prisoners that they are still have to have
             entrepreneurial traits for the real world.
Which of the TED Commandments does the speaker best
                    follow. How
VI & IV Mr. Smith used these both in his interview as an advantage in
supporting his story to the success that could come the way of the inmates if
they was given the opportunity in the real world in a business atmosphere
Which of the TED Commandments does the speaker best
                    follow. Why
VI & IV Mr. Smith followed them because of the opportunity to share his
stories with the public of the importance of what inmates are faced with as
business deals as well to help the audience understand what he is trying to
teach them.
Evaluate the speaker in terms of
    dynamism from 1 (lowest) to 5
        (highest). What could
the speaker have done to increase his
          or her dynamism?

                            5 ( Highest)
   While watching the interview I would say I was understanding
       what Mr. Smith was trying to teach me about how the
       correctional system has various promising business
 entrepreneurial traits. He gave perfect examples in how he saw
  the potential in everyone that passed his way. Also he showed
 and explained the value in which everything was in priced in jail
and how inmates would make transitions to add to or make value
                     towards their way of living.
What have you learned about delivery
 based upon watching your presenter?


  I have learned how to deliver a better interview by using every
 exact bit of information that could be used to help or succeed in
giving the audience a better understanding of what I am trying to
 talk to them about. His interview gave me a lot more knowledge
about how to keep the audience in your attention meaning how to
          keep the audience relevant in your conversation.
Compare your speaker to Sir Ken Robinson from the
                  two videos you
   watched (“Schools Kill Creativity” and “Changing
               Education Paradigms”)

  Sir Ken Robinson                    Jeff Smith
• Able to keep the audience    • Able to keep the audience
  entertained                    listening and hearing to
                                 what he has to say
• Uses drawings to show or
  explain what he is telling   • Uses his past to keep his
  the audience                   topic relevant
Sir Ken Robinson                             Jeff Smith



Contrast your speaker to Sir Ken Robinson from the
                  two videos you
 watched (“Schools Kill Creativity” and “Changing
              Education Paradigms”)
Both Speakers kept me involved in what they were explaining
 in reference to their speeches I also saw that they kept the
      audience in the ability to learn from their speeches
What tips can you give your classmates
    on delivery for their upcoming
           speeches based
       ONLY on your TED Talk?

 The tips I could give is to follow the Ted commandments in
  order to explain better how the speeches are able to stay
relevant towards what the main point of their speeches are
made of. Also keep the audience entertained as well to get a
               better feedback and enjoyment.
What I learned
The ability to share and learn from how these great speakers
 have the ability to keep their speeches to stay key onto the
                             topic
What I learned cont.
Keep your interview simple and relevant in the ability to share
with the audience. When I usually give out an interview I don’t
    put to much into keeping the audience active, but after
watching the speeches of both videos I will now use a better
            knowledge in reaching out to my topic.
What I learned cont.
Finally is to use the Ted commandments in your speeches to
keep everything flowing properly and smoothly both speakers
didn’t show no sign of nervousness and was about to connect
                       with the audience.
REFERENCES

                                   • Ted
Interviewhttp://www.ted.com/talks/jeff_smith_lessons_in_business_from_prison.ht
                                        ml

  •       http://www.cityandstateny.com/wp-content/uploads/2012/08/jsmith.jpg

                      • http://www.timlonghurst.com/blog/wp-
                     content/uploads/2008/05/tedcommandments.jpg
             • http://images.ted.com/images/ted/172559_389x292.jpg
      •    http://farm9.staticflickr.com/8005/7539304878_b16928e65a_m.jpg

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Ted Evaluation

  • 1. Jeff Smith Lessons in Business from Prison TED June 2012 By: Joshua McPherson
  • 2. “[We need] to nurture the entrepreneurial spirit and the tremendous untapped potential in our prisons.” (Jeff Smith)” Jeff Smith was an ambitious politician and rising star of the Missouri senate who was incarcerated for one year 2009-2010 for conspiracy to obstruct justice . During his one yea stay in prison Smith learned a lot about the prison system and how its inmates could have the chance or should have the chance to have a healthy start in a business field since all inmates have a huge entrepreneurial potential in that field.
  • 3. How did the speaker capture the attention of the audience in his or her introduction Jeff Smith captures the attention of the audience by giving an example of how things was inside the prison. And his job of unloading trucks for 5 dollars a month. When he gave this introduction he basically let the audience understand what he will be talking about in relation to prison and business
  • 4. How did the speaker maintain the engagement of the audience throughout his speech Mr. Smith maintained the engagement by keeping the audience involved in the comparison between real world business towards the correctional system of business. By him showing and explaining that certain way shows that even though are prison system have prisoners that they are still have to have entrepreneurial traits for the real world.
  • 5. Which of the TED Commandments does the speaker best follow. How VI & IV Mr. Smith used these both in his interview as an advantage in supporting his story to the success that could come the way of the inmates if they was given the opportunity in the real world in a business atmosphere
  • 6. Which of the TED Commandments does the speaker best follow. Why VI & IV Mr. Smith followed them because of the opportunity to share his stories with the public of the importance of what inmates are faced with as business deals as well to help the audience understand what he is trying to teach them.
  • 7. Evaluate the speaker in terms of dynamism from 1 (lowest) to 5 (highest). What could the speaker have done to increase his or her dynamism? 5 ( Highest) While watching the interview I would say I was understanding what Mr. Smith was trying to teach me about how the correctional system has various promising business entrepreneurial traits. He gave perfect examples in how he saw the potential in everyone that passed his way. Also he showed and explained the value in which everything was in priced in jail and how inmates would make transitions to add to or make value towards their way of living.
  • 8. What have you learned about delivery based upon watching your presenter? I have learned how to deliver a better interview by using every exact bit of information that could be used to help or succeed in giving the audience a better understanding of what I am trying to talk to them about. His interview gave me a lot more knowledge about how to keep the audience in your attention meaning how to keep the audience relevant in your conversation.
  • 9. Compare your speaker to Sir Ken Robinson from the two videos you watched (“Schools Kill Creativity” and “Changing Education Paradigms”) Sir Ken Robinson Jeff Smith • Able to keep the audience • Able to keep the audience entertained listening and hearing to what he has to say • Uses drawings to show or explain what he is telling • Uses his past to keep his the audience topic relevant
  • 10. Sir Ken Robinson Jeff Smith Contrast your speaker to Sir Ken Robinson from the two videos you watched (“Schools Kill Creativity” and “Changing Education Paradigms”) Both Speakers kept me involved in what they were explaining in reference to their speeches I also saw that they kept the audience in the ability to learn from their speeches
  • 11. What tips can you give your classmates on delivery for their upcoming speeches based ONLY on your TED Talk? The tips I could give is to follow the Ted commandments in order to explain better how the speeches are able to stay relevant towards what the main point of their speeches are made of. Also keep the audience entertained as well to get a better feedback and enjoyment.
  • 12. What I learned The ability to share and learn from how these great speakers have the ability to keep their speeches to stay key onto the topic
  • 13. What I learned cont. Keep your interview simple and relevant in the ability to share with the audience. When I usually give out an interview I don’t put to much into keeping the audience active, but after watching the speeches of both videos I will now use a better knowledge in reaching out to my topic.
  • 14. What I learned cont. Finally is to use the Ted commandments in your speeches to keep everything flowing properly and smoothly both speakers didn’t show no sign of nervousness and was about to connect with the audience.
  • 15. REFERENCES • Ted Interviewhttp://www.ted.com/talks/jeff_smith_lessons_in_business_from_prison.ht ml • http://www.cityandstateny.com/wp-content/uploads/2012/08/jsmith.jpg • http://www.timlonghurst.com/blog/wp- content/uploads/2008/05/tedcommandments.jpg • http://images.ted.com/images/ted/172559_389x292.jpg • http://farm9.staticflickr.com/8005/7539304878_b16928e65a_m.jpg