This document proposes and evaluates ideas for a technology venture around laws and legislation. The initial idea of a "Version control system for laws" is deemed a bad idea, as ministries and parliaments already develop legal modifications internally and there is close communication. Instead, a "Laws commenting and crowd petitions system" is proposed, allowing the public to comment on and propose changes to laws, and see what ideas are popular. This could provide value to both the general public and government. Key aspects of the new idea like customer segments, channels, and revenue streams from premium accounts are outlined. Feedback on the revised idea is welcomed.